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unique and entertaining I love it. with character designs that I love and a premise that I love. I love the fact that she's a doll capable of controlling toys I just hope she gets strong enough to control toys well enough to have another body she can put in danger
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Not my cup of tea. It’s one of those mha fics where the mc suffers endlessly in the beginning. And it being justified by the world bein evil but I think it’s taken to such an extreme that it should be an extreme fringe case but somehow it’s normal. I just dont like novels like this not to mention novels where i have to read so much just for the mc to grow up are dragging down any excitement i yould have. Even Storys I like if it starts really yould and they grow up chapter by chapter it’s just dragging down the story.
This story is unique 1. Not many story use doll as their main ability 2. The world building and background is good, it take different angles from BNHA world 3. The FL also has good character development. 4. It's just that this story needs to be updated more often.
So far so good. I binge read it and must say it’s of really good quality. It doesn’t take things too far and generally knows when to move forward. The character familiarity and retention is quite well done, my only gripe (and something I accidentally do a lot as well), is that there is a lot of repetition in words being rephrased to be rewritten. But I do it too so I’m fine with it. Xeno/Sakuya approved.
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This is pretty interesting! though it's slow to update the writing and story is fascinating especially regarding Tiffany's quirk. Though Im'm curious is Tiffany going to stay in London for a couple of chapter's or is she going to stay indefinitely just asking?
Absolutely amazing in every way so far, your books never cease to amaze me, Author, too bad the books themselves cease.
Seems good so far so even though I just started reading it so give it a chance. So yh READDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Shameless self review and a little more of an update on my plans for this novel. This is just another quick idea that formed from a discussion on my Discord with others. I have far too many projects that are ongoing right now so I doubt I can add this on top of it on a regular chapter release. I usually try to complete 5-10 chapters during the initial chapter releases before setting a schedule for the following updates but I will see how things progress or if I happen to have some free time. +Bonus pictures of Tiffany from AI image generator.
unique and entertaining I love it. with character designs that I love and a premise that I love. I love the fact that she's a doll capable of controlling toys I just hope she gets strong enough to control toys well enough to have another body she can put in danger
Membuka SPOILER Not my cup of tea. It’s one of those mha fics where the mc suffers endlessly in the beginning. And it being justified by the world bein evil but I think it’s taken to such an extreme that it should be an extreme fringe case but somehow it’s normal. I just dont like novels like this not to mention novels where i have to read so much just for the mc to grow up are dragging down any excitement i yould have. Even Storys I like if it starts really yould and they grow up chapter by chapter it’s just dragging down the story.
This story is unique 1. Not many story use doll as their main ability 2. The world building and background is good, it take different angles from BNHA world 3. The FL also has good character development. 4. It's just that this story needs to be updated more often.
So far so good. I binge read it and must say it’s of really good quality. It doesn’t take things too far and generally knows when to move forward. The character familiarity and retention is quite well done, my only gripe (and something I accidentally do a lot as well), is that there is a lot of repetition in words being rephrased to be rewritten. But I do it too so I’m fine with it. Xeno/Sakuya approved.
Muy interesante............................................................................................................ ...............................................................
This is pretty interesting! though it's slow to update the writing and story is fascinating especially regarding Tiffany's quirk. Though Im'm curious is Tiffany going to stay in London for a couple of chapter's or is she going to stay indefinitely just asking?
Absolutely amazing in every way so far, your books never cease to amaze me, Author, too bad the books themselves cease.
Seems good so far so even though I just started reading it so give it a chance. So yh READDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Shameless self review and a little more of an update on my plans for this novel. This is just another quick idea that formed from a discussion on my Discord with others. I have far too many projects that are ongoing right now so I doubt I can add this on top of it on a regular chapter release. I usually try to complete 5-10 chapters during the initial chapter releases before setting a schedule for the following updates but I will see how things progress or if I happen to have some free time. +Bonus pictures of Tiffany from AI image generator.