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A Dragon ball System With A Cultivation World

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Status Power Mingguan

Rank -- Peringkat Power
Stone -- Power stone

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  • Pengembangan Cerita
  • Desain Karakter
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Daoist_Dan

Light Spoilers. Didn't hit the spoiler button because paragraph separations disappear when I do. The first 50 percent was good. But the author merced his own story with a stupid joke that turned out to not be a joke. You might find the mc's rival being named Giga Chad hilarious but I don't. And that's not to mention how poorly written into the story he actually was. It broke the vibes the story had been building the entire story. Anyway, be forewarned so maybe this doesn't bug you as much as it did me. I was honestly enjoying this story before Giga Chad became a central part. Total score 2.6 Writing Quality - 3. Neither good or bad. I didn't notice either way. Stability of Updates - 4. I never give 5 unless a story is completed. But 4 is well deserved for stable updates. Story Development - 1. Because F you. (Story is a 4 without Giga tho) Character Design - 1. Because F Giga. (Would have been a 3) World Background - 4. Honestly very interesting.

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TFH
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well... ita not bad. author just dosnt really knows how to write well and there are some holes in his story and mistakes and contradictions. Such as soul cultivation, mc says nobody in the village knows much about it and that level 2 allows for spiritual sense (radar) of 10 meters. but his father was outside of the house in the main plaza but could sense mc despite being far away from his home. Thus making his father spiritual sense at least 500 meters. thus the contradiction. also author skips stuff without noticing, at one moment the father was in the plaza, at the next was in the protagonist room. It was not mentioned he moved

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TeraBaapHuMai

I don't have problem with bad grammer and spelling mistakes, but what i have problem is with how system and his father are babysitting a 18 year old. He is 18 for god's sake man.

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Warren_Yanga

BRUH THE AUTHOR REALLY LIKES TO MESS WITH BLOODLINES. YOU CAN MAKE A Dragon Ball X Cultivation without a "System" and make the bloodline a saiyan only That way the author has no way to mess with bloodlines and having to Early Op MC. and the readers now can read a real "Weak To Strong" Genre.

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Lizrock

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DaoistsGHarm

More More More More More More More More More More More More!!

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Metasight

I like this story a whole bunch, I hope more authors wright stories like this. I hope this story continues. If I had the $ to pay for more I would.

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xCzed
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Waiting for more. Good luck to you Author-san.

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  1. 1
    Awakening 1 years ago
  2. 2
    Training 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Causing Trouble At The City 1 years ago
  4. 4
    The Old Man 1 years ago
  5. 5
    Becoming Famous 1 years ago
  6. 6
    5 v 1 1 years ago
  7. 7
    12 v 1 1 years ago
  8. 8
    Lets Dance 1 years ago
  9. 9
    Father? 1 years ago
  10. 10
    10,000+ v 1 1 years ago
  11. 11
    the 4 regions 1 years ago
  12. 12
    The White Tiger 1 years ago
  13. 13
    5 Guys Going At It 1 years ago
  14. 14
    New Bloodline 1 years ago
  15. 15
    A Bug 1 years ago
  16. 16
    The Heavens Helping Hand 1 years ago
  17. 17
    Biggest Fan 1 years ago
  18. 18
    The Fallen Angel 1 years ago
  19. 19
    Friends 1 years ago
  20. 20
    Godly Grade Energy Control and Merging Capability 1 years ago
  21. 21
    An Arrow 1 years ago
  22. 22
    What do you love most? 1 years ago
  23. 23
    Break through 1 years ago
  24. 24
    12 Heavenly Dragon 1 years ago
  25. 25
    Fallen Phoenix Forest 1 years ago
  26. 26
    Fallen Phoenix Forest 2 1 years ago
  27. 27
    Vermilion Bird 1 years ago
  28. 28
    An Over Grown Lizard 1 years ago
  29. 29
    An Over Grown Lizard 2 1 years ago
  30. 30
    Leaving 1 years ago
  31. 31
    To The Sea 1 years ago
  32. 32
    The ruler of the sea 1 years ago
  33. 33
    Second Soul? 1 years ago
  34. 34
    Date 1 years ago
  35. 35
    Sora vs the 10 Demons 1 years ago
  36. 36
    The Demon Attack 1 years ago
  37. 37
    The tribe races 1 years ago
  38. 38
    Giga Chad vs The Demon Lord 1 years ago
  39. 39
    Flavor 1 years ago
  40. 40
    So, I hear you can cook 1 years ago
  41. 41
    My Side Chick 1 years ago
  42. 42
    Sora and A Sword? 1 years ago
  43. 43
    Holy Ground 1 years ago
  44. 44
    Soul Eater 1 years ago
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    The Law Ancestor 1 years ago
  46. 46
    A Realm Ruler 1 years ago
  47. 47
    A freak 1 years ago
  48. 48
    The Fang Clan 1 years ago
  49. 49
    Auction House 1 years ago
  50. 50
    Elder Mo 1 years ago
  51. 51
    Cells 1 years ago
  52. 52
    Power Up 1 years ago
  53. 53
    Creating A Technique 1 years ago
  54. 54
    Fei Yanzi 1 years ago
  55. 55
    The Supreme Zenkai Law 1 years ago
  56. 56
    Strength 1 years ago
  57. 57
    Transcendent Movement 1 years ago
  58. 58
    Breaking Common Sense 1 years ago
  59. 59
    It Has Come 1 years ago
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    The calamity 1 years ago
  61. 61
    Grandma 1 years ago
  62. 62
    Sorry 1 years ago
  63. 63
    The Number One Under The Heavens 1 years ago
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    Endless 1 years ago
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    Son Of Hell 1 years ago
  66. 66
    Cao Jin 1 years ago
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    God 1 years ago
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    Toxic grandparents 1 years ago
  69. 69
    Going Out 1 years ago
  70. 70
    Bored 1 years ago
  71. 71
    The Strongest In The Universe 1 years ago
  72. 72
    Relax 1 years ago
  73. 73
    A Father 1 years ago
  74. 74
    Birth 1 years ago
  75. 75
    Mongrels 1 years ago
  76. 76
    Shattering Dao Hearts 1 years ago
  77. 77
    Broken 1 years ago
  78. 78
    The Strongest 1 years ago
  79. 79
    throughout heaven and earth 1 years ago
  80. 80
    Rule The World 1 years ago
  81. 81
    Ascending The Plot 1 years ago
  82. 82
    Too Overpowered 1 years ago

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