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Good! Better than most of the novels I read here! Keep going and make sure each supporting character gets their shine
This review is from the Author Himself..feel free to ask any questions under here.i hope you would like my novel
This is really a great story, the flow of the story is also good, wording could use some improvement but other than that everything is great, I definitely recommend this one.
all in all great book, dont expect 5 stars or 4 stars from me, well is there anyone who reads rating stars nowadays on webnovel?, great storytelling, good writing but readability must be improved and some parts needs to be edited as some seem out of bounds of logic all things considered if you want sci-fi read this even if you can tolerate some minor disturbances
The story has a nice pacing to it. It starts with different povs and somewhat confuses the reader, but its a mystery so it's all good. It has a lot of potential and can be still improved. Hope the author continues updating more chapters.
The story telling is nice and the way the story develops in the book is interesting. Author has a good writing style. Readers should give this book a try.
Things have gotten pretty interesting, even in the earlier stages of the novel. I've really liked James, one of the characters, who's special circumstances make him extremely unpredictable and dangerous, even he doesn't intend to. Great read for anyone looing for a good sci-fy.
Well thought out plot and the story develops nicely. Storytelling is great too. All in all, a must read book. Keep up the good work đź‘Ť
Author did a good job in storytelling. Nothing much to review yet this is just what I obsever from 3 chapter.
Amazing! Though I’ve read up to chapter 36, I must say, I love how you write! Firstly, I loved how you created atmospheres—it almost reminded me of those sci-fi and Marvel movies I’d watch in theaters. The way you wrote the characters were also splendid and they felt quite life-like. I also like how you depicted the main character (Miller) and his relationship with those around him. The way you established settings was also splendid- it wasn’t overly descriptive nor too plain to the point where it would be glossed over. Though there are occasional grammatical and punctuation errors such as using lowercase letters in situations where it should be capitalized, missing commas, and runoff sentences—it isn’t detrimental to the quality of the novel. For this, I suggest using Grammarly as it helps you with proof reading. Overall, I’d say this novel deserves a 4.6/5, and I’d definitely come back to read this in the future once there are more chapters! Keep it up, author!
This is a captivating debut novel that effortlessly combines elements of dystopian fiction, fantasy, and philosophical introspection. With its well-rounded characters, immersive world-building, and thought-provoking themes, he has created a compelling tale that will leave readers eagerly awaiting their next literary endeavor. Whether you're a fan of the genre or simply seeking an engaging and thought-provoking read, this novel is not to be missed.
Good! Better than most of the novels I read here! Keep going and make sure each supporting character gets their shine
This review is from the Author Himself..feel free to ask any questions under here.i hope you would like my novel
This is really a great story, the flow of the story is also good, wording could use some improvement but other than that everything is great, I definitely recommend this one.
all in all great book, dont expect 5 stars or 4 stars from me, well is there anyone who reads rating stars nowadays on webnovel?, great storytelling, good writing but readability must be improved and some parts needs to be edited as some seem out of bounds of logic all things considered if you want sci-fi read this even if you can tolerate some minor disturbances
The story has a nice pacing to it. It starts with different povs and somewhat confuses the reader, but its a mystery so it's all good. It has a lot of potential and can be still improved. Hope the author continues updating more chapters.
The story telling is nice and the way the story develops in the book is interesting. Author has a good writing style. Readers should give this book a try.
Things have gotten pretty interesting, even in the earlier stages of the novel. I've really liked James, one of the characters, who's special circumstances make him extremely unpredictable and dangerous, even he doesn't intend to. Great read for anyone looing for a good sci-fy.
Well thought out plot and the story develops nicely. Storytelling is great too. All in all, a must read book. Keep up the good work đź‘Ť
Author did a good job in storytelling. Nothing much to review yet this is just what I obsever from 3 chapter.
Amazing! Though I’ve read up to chapter 36, I must say, I love how you write! Firstly, I loved how you created atmospheres—it almost reminded me of those sci-fi and Marvel movies I’d watch in theaters. The way you wrote the characters were also splendid and they felt quite life-like. I also like how you depicted the main character (Miller) and his relationship with those around him. The way you established settings was also splendid- it wasn’t overly descriptive nor too plain to the point where it would be glossed over. Though there are occasional grammatical and punctuation errors such as using lowercase letters in situations where it should be capitalized, missing commas, and runoff sentences—it isn’t detrimental to the quality of the novel. For this, I suggest using Grammarly as it helps you with proof reading. Overall, I’d say this novel deserves a 4.6/5, and I’d definitely come back to read this in the future once there are more chapters! Keep it up, author!
This is a captivating debut novel that effortlessly combines elements of dystopian fiction, fantasy, and philosophical introspection. With its well-rounded characters, immersive world-building, and thought-provoking themes, he has created a compelling tale that will leave readers eagerly awaiting their next literary endeavor. Whether you're a fan of the genre or simply seeking an engaging and thought-provoking read, this novel is not to be missed.