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Hey auther, this is a really good novel and a lot of people like it a lot especially me so please don’t give up on it and continue writing it, I’d really appreciate it
I swear, this book was interesting until volume 2. DC and Marvel Mixture? Trash.And here I was thinking Loki would find a way to Become a Stronger God. I can't even bear to read how he is now. Someone with past life bad issues just chilling in modern times.Super man fighting and suddenly there'll be a mention of Bruce Banner and General Ross. I mean, what am I even reading again?
It’s a great novel tht I thinks easy to enjoy and get into the way the author mixed Mavel & dc was perfect as far as I can tell though I dnt know everything about dc and marvel especially comics but iv read alot of fanfics about them and think this is one of best marvel or dc fanfics iv read considering the mc isn’t a reincarnater who’s read about the stores also the plot didnt seemed forced to me or anything and the way he portrays Loki and his way to power is great how he’s mixing obito’s and Jin Sakai abilities while also mixing his original powers as loki but through a different system also love the personality of mc the way he’s growing anyway think author did a great job with the novel and glad he decided to restart it otherwise I’d have probably never read it so thanks for novel.
I have seen a lot of FanFictions and this is one of the only originals I have seen not a copy of another different fanfiction and it's Loki instead of a different MCU character like Thor or vision. And it is a great story so far I hope you finish it and it's very long.
Found this story a bit late, but I've been loving it so far. Can't wait to keep going and catch up. This is getting really, really interesting.
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Random DC addition ruined my immersion completely ........................................................................................................
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Everything's great with a great storyline that can become one of the greatest FF story. Just hoping that MR. AUTHOR won't dropthe story and, gracefully complete it by making it great!
Very fresh approach. The author has gotten the best of everything and turned it into an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more chapters.
this is SO GOOD. usually I don't read crossovers but I didn't notice this was one so I read it and I am so happy I did. Though because this is a crossover I couldn't help but laugh at the author when a non super pop culture stepped in for a sec.
Previously, an avid reader of all types of stories with a very active imagination. Just an amateur writer, I had a vision of Obito Uchiha as Loki. I saw no one writing anything like that so I decided that I alone will make my vision true. This is my first time writing and if anyone believes that I am ruining a perfectly good Loki fanfic. You are welcome to write one to prove me wrong . I would happily read it. Again, this is my story and if you have a problem with the way the plot is progressing. Then Write one better then . There can never be enough stories. I would also like to thank Monark, stevenwar and all my other lovely supporters. Stevenwar thanks for catching my mistakes.
Apart some mixed words here and there like tsukuyomi/kamui, I see a good mix of DC/Marvel world where Loki go from a place that don't value him to where he make himself a place in the world with friends and others(spoilers) who are dear to him and will defend him if need be. I don't really see what to said other I like what you created here and am curious where it will go in the long run so👍🫵🤘
Hey auther, this is a really good novel and a lot of people like it a lot especially me so please don’t give up on it and continue writing it, I’d really appreciate it
I swear, this book was interesting until volume 2. DC and Marvel Mixture? Trash.And here I was thinking Loki would find a way to Become a Stronger God. I can't even bear to read how he is now. Someone with past life bad issues just chilling in modern times.Super man fighting and suddenly there'll be a mention of Bruce Banner and General Ross. I mean, what am I even reading again?
It’s a great novel tht I thinks easy to enjoy and get into the way the author mixed Mavel & dc was perfect as far as I can tell though I dnt know everything about dc and marvel especially comics but iv read alot of fanfics about them and think this is one of best marvel or dc fanfics iv read considering the mc isn’t a reincarnater who’s read about the stores also the plot didnt seemed forced to me or anything and the way he portrays Loki and his way to power is great how he’s mixing obito’s and Jin Sakai abilities while also mixing his original powers as loki but through a different system also love the personality of mc the way he’s growing anyway think author did a great job with the novel and glad he decided to restart it otherwise I’d have probably never read it so thanks for novel.
I have seen a lot of FanFictions and this is one of the only originals I have seen not a copy of another different fanfiction and it's Loki instead of a different MCU character like Thor or vision. And it is a great story so far I hope you finish it and it's very long.
Found this story a bit late, but I've been loving it so far. Can't wait to keep going and catch up. This is getting really, really interesting.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Random DC addition ruined my immersion completely ........................................................................................................
Membuka SPOILER Everything's great with a great storyline that can become one of the greatest FF story. Just hoping that MR. AUTHOR won't dropthe story and, gracefully complete it by making it great!
Very fresh approach. The author has gotten the best of everything and turned it into an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more chapters.
this is SO GOOD. usually I don't read crossovers but I didn't notice this was one so I read it and I am so happy I did. Though because this is a crossover I couldn't help but laugh at the author when a non super pop culture stepped in for a sec.
Previously, an avid reader of all types of stories with a very active imagination. Just an amateur writer, I had a vision of Obito Uchiha as Loki. I saw no one writing anything like that so I decided that I alone will make my vision true. This is my first time writing and if anyone believes that I am ruining a perfectly good Loki fanfic. You are welcome to write one to prove me wrong . I would happily read it. Again, this is my story and if you have a problem with the way the plot is progressing. Then Write one better then . There can never be enough stories. I would also like to thank Monark, stevenwar and all my other lovely supporters. Stevenwar thanks for catching my mistakes.
Apart some mixed words here and there like tsukuyomi/kamui, I see a good mix of DC/Marvel world where Loki go from a place that don't value him to where he make himself a place in the world with friends and others(spoilers) who are dear to him and will defend him if need be. I don't really see what to said other I like what you created here and am curious where it will go in the long run so👍🫵🤘