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Yuri bro đđ ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Read the first 40 or so chapter, well I would like to say that I find the protagonist weird. Also, story feels a little gloomy..
Im really digging this.. idk why it has 3.3 rating.. only problem i find in this whole novel is constant use of some words/sentences like "I couldn't help myself but reveal a bitter smile" its toned down a lot now.. but mentioning expressions can be improved.. story +10, mc +10, pacing is fine.. ero content isn't too much and pretty balanced.. altho i do expect more scenes.. atleast some small interactions.. scenes are well written as well..
The story started promisingly if you ignored the general awkward behavior at the start, which is not really rare at the beginning of transmigration novels, however... Our guy acts like he is frozen in time on his first day! He still acts like a virgin after taking his 3rd concubine, and "bitterly smiles" after his wife set him up with a buxom beauty, that he low key courted for the last 40 chapters. Also the MC is a huge incompetent SUB!!!! Beware!!! The MC is always the most incompetent person in the room, except for the cartoonish husbands whom he "NTRs", except these husbands always leave their wives virgin for decades, for nonsensical reasons. I started this novel 4 times, and now I once again gave it up around ch ~130
If you like these Tags: Beta MC, submissive, weak, coward and naive then you will love this novel. ..............................................................
so this is the first story I've read of this authors work. I'll have to say, I came in thinking it would be an occasional adventure here with more romance than there should be. after reading dual cultivation, wink wink đ, I've had mixed expectations about stories on this app. this story is actually way better than I expected. I enjoy the story and the pacing. I'm up to the latest arc visiting nobles so I've gone through most of this story that has been released. I highly recommend this to read, my biggest fear though is like with other novels on this app, the never finish and stop being updated. I hope to see the end of this adventure so keep up the good work author
The definition of a boring novel. MC can only be awkward, shocked, or bitter.. that's his reaction to everything. every chapter he is shocked by random things, awkward in general, and bitter about random things.. never changes pattern. Aside from the unsavoury tags that i haven't really encountered throughout my short reading attempt. There really is no depth, nor anything captivating about the novel. I can clearly tell that this is the MC's personality, and he will never show any growth. He is only capable of showing 3 reactions, shock, awkwardness and bitterness... and he will remind you of that every single chapter. In reality, this type of guy would get bullied daily, and would never ever get the interest of a girl, no matter how ugly. You're better off not reading anything than ever wasting a second on this novel, since everything is bad about it.. no redeeming qualities.
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The writing is decent with easy readability despite some grammar mistakes. This story has a lot of potential but the mc's slow thinking and long-winded explanations that can be both frustrating and dull.
the story has promises, but it honestly at times feels like death by PowerPoint, in some chapters there might be 1 or 2 sentences the rest of the chapter will just be long pointless explanations or the characters overly long thought process
so before I start reading i need to know is the mc NTRing or is he getting NTR'd
Its finally time for me to write a review. Currently, I am at chapter 281. So, I think I am qualified to give a comprehensive review.First of all, I will admit that I didn't have much expectations for this novel except for smuts due to the nature of the title of the story.I am very impressed with the writing style and the coherency of the plot progression. Though the story idea isnt out of box that one expect for new novels, the presentaitionof this story and the moments has kept me to the edge regularly.The smuts are average and in my opinion, needs some improvement to make this story more exciting.The most imoportant thing that this story needs to improve is the world background. Everything thing else are good.
At this point in history, how many women are in the MC harem? Is there a yandere in the harem and those who don't like it?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like it, but the protagonsit is a slow thinker and kinda clueless and should focus more on moving up on the social ladder and rise above the others, there is also the yuri, he should make those girls bow to him and stop with that, the only one he should allow to have pleasure is him and those who have his permission
please please please give a review. is there NTR in this? If yes, please give a review so that other readers stay away from this. if not then it will be worth a read
Itâs pretty decently written novel in all fairness, there is just a few grammatical and spelling mistakes here and there. I like the general idea, the concept of the story is what made me read it, I just donât like the way it was delivered. Unfortunately, I find the novel hard to read, I strongly dislike the MC. It is written from his perspective and he asks the most bizarre and stupid questions. He knows the lore, he knows the plot and knows he is a slave but still questions why he was brought to the âMadamâsâ room⊠really, is it not obvious? The system appears in one chapter and then vanishes⊠poof, gone. Unfortunately, the plot progression and the MC makes it difficult to read on, this is one for the masochists out there. Plus, thereâs Yuri (donât know if this continues) not interested, if he canât pleasure women with his so called massive wang, he may as well not have it. Anyway⊠good luck author, all the best đđđ»
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i need to ask this or i will stop reading eventually, this Cecilia and rose, will they develop feelings for mc or will they have feelings for each other and use mc as some toy, i really need to know since rose give yandere vibes but doesn't love our mc, and Cecilia doesn't like mc, i really need to know if the mc will just be a toy or if he will grow to be a Chad man, i don't have anything against Yuri in a harem but if mc will be a toy while they have feelings for each other in the harem i will quit, fr
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Shameless author here! I've never written hardcore, so I figured I might as well give it a try and this was one that I enjoyed writing. So I hope that you enjoy reading this as well! Put on some loose pants and enjoy!
[img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Cries]
Yuri bro đđ ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Read the first 40 or so chapter, well I would like to say that I find the protagonist weird. Also, story feels a little gloomy..
Im really digging this.. idk why it has 3.3 rating.. only problem i find in this whole novel is constant use of some words/sentences like "I couldn't help myself but reveal a bitter smile" its toned down a lot now.. but mentioning expressions can be improved.. story +10, mc +10, pacing is fine.. ero content isn't too much and pretty balanced.. altho i do expect more scenes.. atleast some small interactions.. scenes are well written as well..
The story started promisingly if you ignored the general awkward behavior at the start, which is not really rare at the beginning of transmigration novels, however... Our guy acts like he is frozen in time on his first day! He still acts like a virgin after taking his 3rd concubine, and "bitterly smiles" after his wife set him up with a buxom beauty, that he low key courted for the last 40 chapters. Also the MC is a huge incompetent SUB!!!! Beware!!! The MC is always the most incompetent person in the room, except for the cartoonish husbands whom he "NTRs", except these husbands always leave their wives virgin for decades, for nonsensical reasons. I started this novel 4 times, and now I once again gave it up around ch ~130
If you like these Tags: Beta MC, submissive, weak, coward and naive then you will love this novel. ..............................................................
so this is the first story I've read of this authors work. I'll have to say, I came in thinking it would be an occasional adventure here with more romance than there should be. after reading dual cultivation, wink wink đ, I've had mixed expectations about stories on this app. this story is actually way better than I expected. I enjoy the story and the pacing. I'm up to the latest arc visiting nobles so I've gone through most of this story that has been released. I highly recommend this to read, my biggest fear though is like with other novels on this app, the never finish and stop being updated. I hope to see the end of this adventure so keep up the good work author
The definition of a boring novel. MC can only be awkward, shocked, or bitter.. that's his reaction to everything. every chapter he is shocked by random things, awkward in general, and bitter about random things.. never changes pattern. Aside from the unsavoury tags that i haven't really encountered throughout my short reading attempt. There really is no depth, nor anything captivating about the novel. I can clearly tell that this is the MC's personality, and he will never show any growth. He is only capable of showing 3 reactions, shock, awkwardness and bitterness... and he will remind you of that every single chapter. In reality, this type of guy would get bullied daily, and would never ever get the interest of a girl, no matter how ugly. You're better off not reading anything than ever wasting a second on this novel, since everything is bad about it.. no redeeming qualities.
Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Okkkkkk..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing is decent with easy readability despite some grammar mistakes. This story has a lot of potential but the mc's slow thinking and long-winded explanations that can be both frustrating and dull.
the story has promises, but it honestly at times feels like death by PowerPoint, in some chapters there might be 1 or 2 sentences the rest of the chapter will just be long pointless explanations or the characters overly long thought process
so before I start reading i need to know is the mc NTRing or is he getting NTR'd
Its finally time for me to write a review. Currently, I am at chapter 281. So, I think I am qualified to give a comprehensive review.First of all, I will admit that I didn't have much expectations for this novel except for smuts due to the nature of the title of the story.I am very impressed with the writing style and the coherency of the plot progression. Though the story idea isnt out of box that one expect for new novels, the presentaitionof this story and the moments has kept me to the edge regularly.The smuts are average and in my opinion, needs some improvement to make this story more exciting.The most imoportant thing that this story needs to improve is the world background. Everything thing else are good.
At this point in history, how many women are in the MC harem? Is there a yandere in the harem and those who don't like it?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like it, but the protagonsit is a slow thinker and kinda clueless and should focus more on moving up on the social ladder and rise above the others, there is also the yuri, he should make those girls bow to him and stop with that, the only one he should allow to have pleasure is him and those who have his permission
please please please give a review. is there NTR in this? If yes, please give a review so that other readers stay away from this. if not then it will be worth a read
Itâs pretty decently written novel in all fairness, there is just a few grammatical and spelling mistakes here and there. I like the general idea, the concept of the story is what made me read it, I just donât like the way it was delivered. Unfortunately, I find the novel hard to read, I strongly dislike the MC. It is written from his perspective and he asks the most bizarre and stupid questions. He knows the lore, he knows the plot and knows he is a slave but still questions why he was brought to the âMadamâsâ room⊠really, is it not obvious? The system appears in one chapter and then vanishes⊠poof, gone. Unfortunately, the plot progression and the MC makes it difficult to read on, this is one for the masochists out there. Plus, thereâs Yuri (donât know if this continues) not interested, if he canât pleasure women with his so called massive wang, he may as well not have it. Anyway⊠good luck author, all the best đđđ»
Membuka SPOILER i need to ask this or i will stop reading eventually, this Cecilia and rose, will they develop feelings for mc or will they have feelings for each other and use mc as some toy, i really need to know since rose give yandere vibes but doesn't love our mc, and Cecilia doesn't like mc, i really need to know if the mc will just be a toy or if he will grow to be a Chad man, i don't have anything against Yuri in a harem but if mc will be a toy while they have feelings for each other in the harem i will quit, fr
Membuka SPOILER Shameless author here! I've never written hardcore, so I figured I might as well give it a try and this was one that I enjoyed writing. So I hope that you enjoy reading this as well! Put on some loose pants and enjoy!
[img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Cries]