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This is pretty good in itself. Only problem is the updating consistency, or lack of it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Radical jajaja eso sí que es otra onda,la historia está un poco soza pero me entretuve lo suficiente para pasar el rato. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
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trash story about a six year old staying in a shop with no plot or reason to read. mc is half the age of main characters and has no reason to interact. basically a waste of time. also grammar, word placement, punctuation, misspelled words, wrong words used or not used properly. 10 thumbs down
The MC is not an average man, he is an idiot, only idiots surround themselves solely and exclusively with bootlickers, in this case slaves. I don't mind the brainwashing, or any villain tropes, but the mc isn't written as a villain, just a jerk. Your novel is good, your mc is... God, it's disgusting
Good story. Just change the cover it's ugly. Good luck. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Excelente hasta ahora que es el cap 12, un MC super OP que tiene una tienda. Por ahora la novela muestra lo OP que es, pero se centra en el cambio que hizo a su alrededor, espero que siga así y no pare autor
This is pretty good in itself. Only problem is the updating consistency, or lack of it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Radical jajaja eso sí que es otra onda,la historia está un poco soza pero me entretuve lo suficiente para pasar el rato. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Membuka SPOILER trash story about a six year old staying in a shop with no plot or reason to read. mc is half the age of main characters and has no reason to interact. basically a waste of time. also grammar, word placement, punctuation, misspelled words, wrong words used or not used properly. 10 thumbs down
The MC is not an average man, he is an idiot, only idiots surround themselves solely and exclusively with bootlickers, in this case slaves. I don't mind the brainwashing, or any villain tropes, but the mc isn't written as a villain, just a jerk. Your novel is good, your mc is... God, it's disgusting
Good story. Just change the cover it's ugly. Good luck. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Excelente hasta ahora que es el cap 12, un MC super OP que tiene una tienda. Por ahora la novela muestra lo OP que es, pero se centra en el cambio que hizo a su alrededor, espero que siga así y no pare autor
Great FF!! ... but, LEMON PLEASE!!!