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an interesting ff, nonetheless, the author is throwing pirates with a bounty of 500M left and right...
Me alegro de que se reactive y me gusta que te tomes tú tiempo para que el protagonista crezca poco a poco. No es la historia más original pero es interesante y no se precipita a darle poder de repente al protagonista sin esfuerzo.
3-3-3-2-3: This is pretty mid. The Writing need some improvement, author doesn't have a proofreader. Wrong words in almost every chapter. The story development is quite dull. And doesn't make sense in most parts. Majority of big OP characters have miserable upbringing hence the strong will, and motivation to be strong. Meanwhile MC's friend got bullied and beaten up by a bunch of kids and voila, MC shows his conqueror's Haki. All it takes is a bunch of thugs! The CD is lazy imo, I just felt bored reading this fic's MC. The updates is 1ch/wk which is slow. WB, author failed to comprehend that Characters, Bounties and age are so different, Big Mom is still proportionally hot, Tsuru doesn't look like a grandma, Queen shouldn't have a laser on him. I'm like bruh, Vegapunk hasn't even made the Pacifistas, yet Queen already had Borsalino's laser?
All in all this is just a worse version of One Piece: White Hunter if you ask me. Especially with author making the MC be so NOT unique and totally feel like a mob character, i mean, he even says "oh yea MC only got that strong through hard training since he was a newborn child" and "yea everyone else is basically just as good bcs they have a bit of talent". To me it seems like Eminence in the shadows just without the MC being a secretively OP behind the scenes guy, here MC is just another normal weakass mf that isnt even better then the kid he picked up off the streets that began training 6 years later
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I see the romance tag, and although I'm already infested into this I just want to know if this is single love interest or (harem)2+. Because some authors already know they plan to make a harem romance but leave it out of the tag. So can you please clarify this for me author. I'm not against harem novels its just that it seems like that's all authors make and its getting kinda tiring reading them.
5 star easy........... ......................................... ................................... ............................ ....................
just read it if you like Garp and your looking to explore the world of one piece in the eyes of the Marines
Great story, I had fun reading it. But I really do hope you change your mind about the devil fruit. Here is a story where there are magical fruits that gives you powers and he isn't going to eat one if he gets the chance. That makes now sense to me. But still I am enjoying reading this so keep up the good work!
Quick question. Will he just focus on haki and become a new Garp or will he get a devil fruit at some point?
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The story is very nice and well structured would love it if it was no harem because harem does not suit One piece and also please no gender-bend these two are recipes of disasters.
It is kind of a nice story with everything you would expect from someone raised by Garp, but it doesn't cut it for me cuz I can't really connect to this fanfic. In One Piece AU I love when it is about a reincarnated MC, and not some new character who isn't related much to anything. But that is just me.
an interesting ff, nonetheless, the author is throwing pirates with a bounty of 500M left and right...
Me alegro de que se reactive y me gusta que te tomes tú tiempo para que el protagonista crezca poco a poco. No es la historia más original pero es interesante y no se precipita a darle poder de repente al protagonista sin esfuerzo.
3-3-3-2-3: This is pretty mid. The Writing need some improvement, author doesn't have a proofreader. Wrong words in almost every chapter. The story development is quite dull. And doesn't make sense in most parts. Majority of big OP characters have miserable upbringing hence the strong will, and motivation to be strong. Meanwhile MC's friend got bullied and beaten up by a bunch of kids and voila, MC shows his conqueror's Haki. All it takes is a bunch of thugs! The CD is lazy imo, I just felt bored reading this fic's MC. The updates is 1ch/wk which is slow. WB, author failed to comprehend that Characters, Bounties and age are so different, Big Mom is still proportionally hot, Tsuru doesn't look like a grandma, Queen shouldn't have a laser on him. I'm like bruh, Vegapunk hasn't even made the Pacifistas, yet Queen already had Borsalino's laser?
All in all this is just a worse version of One Piece: White Hunter if you ask me. Especially with author making the MC be so NOT unique and totally feel like a mob character, i mean, he even says "oh yea MC only got that strong through hard training since he was a newborn child" and "yea everyone else is basically just as good bcs they have a bit of talent". To me it seems like Eminence in the shadows just without the MC being a secretively OP behind the scenes guy, here MC is just another normal weakass mf that isnt even better then the kid he picked up off the streets that began training 6 years later
..................................................................................................................................................
I see the romance tag, and although I'm already infested into this I just want to know if this is single love interest or (harem)2+. Because some authors already know they plan to make a harem romance but leave it out of the tag. So can you please clarify this for me author. I'm not against harem novels its just that it seems like that's all authors make and its getting kinda tiring reading them.
5 star easy........... ......................................... ................................... ............................ ....................
just read it if you like Garp and your looking to explore the world of one piece in the eyes of the Marines
Great story, I had fun reading it. But I really do hope you change your mind about the devil fruit. Here is a story where there are magical fruits that gives you powers and he isn't going to eat one if he gets the chance. That makes now sense to me. But still I am enjoying reading this so keep up the good work!
Quick question. Will he just focus on haki and become a new Garp or will he get a devil fruit at some point?
Buena historia [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is very nice and well structured would love it if it was no harem because harem does not suit One piece and also please no gender-bend these two are recipes of disasters.
It is kind of a nice story with everything you would expect from someone raised by Garp, but it doesn't cut it for me cuz I can't really connect to this fanfic. In One Piece AU I love when it is about a reincarnated MC, and not some new character who isn't related much to anything. But that is just me.