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Demon Slayer: Tranquil
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In the town of Raiken, there lived a boy named Inei, from a young age he was famed as a genius in the category of adaptability.
He got praises left and right, wherever he went, he received the most attention, his response to such recognition, however, was apathetic.
For he, Inei Tatsumi, only cared about what his parents had to say, only their words meant anything to him.
Let us see what happens when such a person is forced to learn about the truth of the world he lived in.
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Enjoyable thus far, and has a lot of potential. The author has done a good job of crafting a flawed yet respectable/interesting protagonist. The narrow focus on the MC may stem from inexperience or the author but is not an issue because the fundamental goal of the MC would lead to him being very single minded and not caring for others. Of course this provides some clear room for character growth. Fight scenes are pretty well done, and I can see a clear improvement in the authors writing in later chapters with his descriptions of the perception of the MC of his environment. Grammar and writing style could use a bit of work. For instance putting quotes in quotes and thoughts in single quotes or italics or something. There are also some spelling mistakes but they are not very common. That being said, there is potential here and I have confidence this story will gain traction if the author persists and keeps striving to improve their writing. 7.2/10 as of 15 chapters being out.
I of course would rate my work 5 stars, why wouldn't I?