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A good read for those who like dramatic and spicy teen romance. Nice writing by the author.
The first parts is fine. It will be an interesting read to those who love spicy, conflicted, dramatic romance stories. Nice job author!
I was intrigued from the very first page. There's suspense and shocking twists at every turn. The characters came to life with their vibrant personalities and engaging dialogue. There are some typos and grammatical errors, but despite that I'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait to continue reading :)
I never ever read this type of book in my life, it's fantastic and in ending of every chapter suspense is fabulous i like it, ...I had the chance to read this story, and I see the improvements from chapter to chapter! Well, we need at least 5 chapters a day to stay captivated. Just kidding, it must be hard to produce good writing quality like this . All in all I've no complaint on the story. Loving it and waiting for more.
Reading the first chapter had me hooked. It truly is a lovely story. There are a few things in the first chapter that need to be fixed, aside from that it is a 5/5 for me. Good luck, author! 👍🏻
The story has good drama and dialogues. The synopsis alone has so much going on and the chapters make it even better. Author does a good job to engage the readers through the character's pov. Keep up the good work, author!
Normally I do not read romance stories but it still keep interested in the story and the character are interesting , so good work author.
The start was captivating, the author is doing a great job, I am hoping to read more chapter
Nice book, and the storyline is quite interesting, I was glued to my phone every step of the way. keep writing🌹
First things first, The cover looks just great... It's alluring. As for the story, it is engaging, with decently paced plot and nice characters. And to top it off, the grammar is way above the standard. A nice read and I hope the author releases new chapters daily. Good luck, author-san
A little grammatical errors but you go author!!!!😭❤️❤️ I'm crying cause I'm not really a fan of this genre, but it's so good I had to add to my library 💕
Okay, the first chapter looks great especially the way his aunty scared him. This is an interesting book but the dialogue needs to be fixed. Kudos to the author.
an amazing book, especially the way the writer conveyed the emotion og the female lead, I could really feel the pain she went through, and your book cover is lovely.
I love the cover and the synopsis how it started from a back story to revenge. The plot hooked me to read further chapters and makes me await for further updates.
It was quite the usual romance story, but with some added cliffhangers that barely push the story out of the usual. It's a something that is worth reading, but not entirely different.
I personally am not a fan of 1st person stories due to the lack of descriptions to seem realistic. However, THIS, is incredible. It holds the same weight as 3rd person while still being flexible. It shows emotion, something that is important for story telling. Even that line at the first chapter holds this heavy weight like its on your shoulders. This book is incredible.
Overall I think that this novel is a great novel for folks into aggressive romance, etc. The cover is extremely well done and to reiterate what another reviewer (Namely Yuki Ono) I completely agree with their review. Of course there is the occasional spelling error/grammatical error, but who cares to be honest. The author gets their plot across well despite a few mistakes in the writing! Good luck Author!
Jovialjune the idea of your writing is fantastic. Not many people can write this type (It have lots of emotions). There are errors which your fans add in suggestions in the comments for each sentence you have to look at it to improve. I give you all 5 stars because it's an encouragement for you to improve further don't be discouraged. 🤗
To be honest I come here bacause of the cover, but when I read it, I was captivated by it. This is one of my favorite novels so far. I'm hopping they'll update it quicker though. Nevertheless, it's a good story to read if you like romance and passed the time. definetely recommended it.
I thought I was reading a historical fiction from the cover but it wasn't so I think maybe you need to change the cover to suit the story or a better blurb so readers kinda get to know what they are expecting. Fast paced - straight diving into the story. The character was very vividly describe that was quite good. Good job author!
I love the feel of this novel. All are great expectations for Chapter 1 start. I was like what is happening? Other than that read this.
First of all, lovely book cover. I truly loved it. Next about the synopsis, it was pretty good and fast-paced. But it could've been better, nevertheless, it gives us an idea about what the story has in it for us. The beginning starts with violent and disturbing imagery, then transitions to a philosophical reflection on death and reincarnation, and then shifts again to a revenge plot. Cool, I would say. Overall from all the chapters I've read, In terms of writing style, there are some grammar and punctuation errors, and some sentences could benefit from better structure and clarity. But let me tell you, this author got a lot of ideas about how to make some good drama. So peeps whoever is looking for an aggressive drama this one is for you. The story is enjoyable. Keep up the good work.
Fabulous story. I believe that the synopsis could be improved a bit as it isn't immersive enough to catch immediate attention. The story itself is well-written and portrays emotions pretty strongly. The grammar aspect could be worked upon. And the main character appears to be a person of strong will, based on the chaps I have read. Overall, the story is interesting and impressive. Looking forward to new chaps!!!
Oh woow , that’s good , author you nailed it , a great start by the way , absolutely loved it , and I'm excited to know how it will continue
The cover is amazing. Plus the story has a mysterious start. This can be a good book. But the grammar was so bad that it was really annoying. I could not understand what characters' were like because most of the time I was annoyed by them leaving sentences hanging and me trying to decode them.
This review Is based on my first impression of the novel in the including bookcover, synopsis, tag and chapter 1. Given that Is possible that I'm going to edit It in the next future. First things first, the bookcover is eyecatching and does his job well. The synopsis Is intriguing but maybe too short and with some typos but after reading I understood It makes sense based on the nature of the protagonist. I found very interesting the introduction to the story through the talk between some people and aunt Esther. The errors of grammars are a bit much but the story distracts you more than enough. Personally up to this point the most interesting character is Esther in my opinion because is more rounded and balanced of the revenge seeking protagonist. That's unfortunately based on the nature of the review and the actual absence of tags but in the first chapter I wasn't able to understand much about the world building apart from hypothetically It being the kind of world with swords (knife under the cushion) and magic (Esther appears and disappears in a sudden way)
I think it's probably engaging and clear like crystal, took an overview that gives me good thoughts about it....Best Wishes!
The story sounds great. The beginning really got me hooked, and I'm excited to know how it will continue. Great work! I hope you continue writing. :)
Alright, alright, Author's here to bless you with an epic romance story, if you are into romance and thriller, welcome on board and join the train of the romantic revenge story 😆😆... Looking for an high school/Adult story, this is for you.. #Spicy romance #Obsessive #Revenge #Action and thriller #Faceslapping #Slice of life.. Read and enjoy, you do not want to miss this.. The first few chapters might seem clumsy, but as you move on, remember to hold onto your seatbelts I give yours truly a five star, cause seriously, what do I got to lose 😆😆 P.S: I advice you to read with tissues in your hand, you will cry and laugh out loud in some parts, lol 😂😂😂😂😂
A good read for those who like dramatic and spicy teen romance. Nice writing by the author.
The first parts is fine. It will be an interesting read to those who love spicy, conflicted, dramatic romance stories. Nice job author!
I was intrigued from the very first page. There's suspense and shocking twists at every turn. The characters came to life with their vibrant personalities and engaging dialogue. There are some typos and grammatical errors, but despite that I'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait to continue reading :)
I never ever read this type of book in my life, it's fantastic and in ending of every chapter suspense is fabulous i like it, ...I had the chance to read this story, and I see the improvements from chapter to chapter! Well, we need at least 5 chapters a day to stay captivated. Just kidding, it must be hard to produce good writing quality like this . All in all I've no complaint on the story. Loving it and waiting for more.
Reading the first chapter had me hooked. It truly is a lovely story. There are a few things in the first chapter that need to be fixed, aside from that it is a 5/5 for me. Good luck, author! 👍🏻
The story has good drama and dialogues. The synopsis alone has so much going on and the chapters make it even better. Author does a good job to engage the readers through the character's pov. Keep up the good work, author!
Normally I do not read romance stories but it still keep interested in the story and the character are interesting , so good work author.
The start was captivating, the author is doing a great job, I am hoping to read more chapter
Nice book, and the storyline is quite interesting, I was glued to my phone every step of the way. keep writing🌹
First things first, The cover looks just great... It's alluring. As for the story, it is engaging, with decently paced plot and nice characters. And to top it off, the grammar is way above the standard. A nice read and I hope the author releases new chapters daily. Good luck, author-san
A little grammatical errors but you go author!!!!😭❤️❤️ I'm crying cause I'm not really a fan of this genre, but it's so good I had to add to my library 💕
Okay, the first chapter looks great especially the way his aunty scared him. This is an interesting book but the dialogue needs to be fixed. Kudos to the author.
an amazing book, especially the way the writer conveyed the emotion og the female lead, I could really feel the pain she went through, and your book cover is lovely.
I love the cover and the synopsis how it started from a back story to revenge. The plot hooked me to read further chapters and makes me await for further updates.
It was quite the usual romance story, but with some added cliffhangers that barely push the story out of the usual. It's a something that is worth reading, but not entirely different.
I personally am not a fan of 1st person stories due to the lack of descriptions to seem realistic. However, THIS, is incredible. It holds the same weight as 3rd person while still being flexible. It shows emotion, something that is important for story telling. Even that line at the first chapter holds this heavy weight like its on your shoulders. This book is incredible.
Overall I think that this novel is a great novel for folks into aggressive romance, etc. The cover is extremely well done and to reiterate what another reviewer (Namely Yuki Ono) I completely agree with their review. Of course there is the occasional spelling error/grammatical error, but who cares to be honest. The author gets their plot across well despite a few mistakes in the writing! Good luck Author!
Jovialjune the idea of your writing is fantastic. Not many people can write this type (It have lots of emotions). There are errors which your fans add in suggestions in the comments for each sentence you have to look at it to improve. I give you all 5 stars because it's an encouragement for you to improve further don't be discouraged. 🤗
To be honest I come here bacause of the cover, but when I read it, I was captivated by it. This is one of my favorite novels so far. I'm hopping they'll update it quicker though. Nevertheless, it's a good story to read if you like romance and passed the time. definetely recommended it.
I thought I was reading a historical fiction from the cover but it wasn't so I think maybe you need to change the cover to suit the story or a better blurb so readers kinda get to know what they are expecting. Fast paced - straight diving into the story. The character was very vividly describe that was quite good. Good job author!
I love the feel of this novel. All are great expectations for Chapter 1 start. I was like what is happening? Other than that read this.
First of all, lovely book cover. I truly loved it. Next about the synopsis, it was pretty good and fast-paced. But it could've been better, nevertheless, it gives us an idea about what the story has in it for us. The beginning starts with violent and disturbing imagery, then transitions to a philosophical reflection on death and reincarnation, and then shifts again to a revenge plot. Cool, I would say. Overall from all the chapters I've read, In terms of writing style, there are some grammar and punctuation errors, and some sentences could benefit from better structure and clarity. But let me tell you, this author got a lot of ideas about how to make some good drama. So peeps whoever is looking for an aggressive drama this one is for you. The story is enjoyable. Keep up the good work.
Fabulous story. I believe that the synopsis could be improved a bit as it isn't immersive enough to catch immediate attention. The story itself is well-written and portrays emotions pretty strongly. The grammar aspect could be worked upon. And the main character appears to be a person of strong will, based on the chaps I have read. Overall, the story is interesting and impressive. Looking forward to new chaps!!!
Oh woow , that’s good , author you nailed it , a great start by the way , absolutely loved it , and I'm excited to know how it will continue
The cover is amazing. Plus the story has a mysterious start. This can be a good book. But the grammar was so bad that it was really annoying. I could not understand what characters' were like because most of the time I was annoyed by them leaving sentences hanging and me trying to decode them.
This review Is based on my first impression of the novel in the including bookcover, synopsis, tag and chapter 1. Given that Is possible that I'm going to edit It in the next future. First things first, the bookcover is eyecatching and does his job well. The synopsis Is intriguing but maybe too short and with some typos but after reading I understood It makes sense based on the nature of the protagonist. I found very interesting the introduction to the story through the talk between some people and aunt Esther. The errors of grammars are a bit much but the story distracts you more than enough. Personally up to this point the most interesting character is Esther in my opinion because is more rounded and balanced of the revenge seeking protagonist. That's unfortunately based on the nature of the review and the actual absence of tags but in the first chapter I wasn't able to understand much about the world building apart from hypothetically It being the kind of world with swords (knife under the cushion) and magic (Esther appears and disappears in a sudden way)
I think it's probably engaging and clear like crystal, took an overview that gives me good thoughts about it....Best Wishes!
The story sounds great. The beginning really got me hooked, and I'm excited to know how it will continue. Great work! I hope you continue writing. :)
Alright, alright, Author's here to bless you with an epic romance story, if you are into romance and thriller, welcome on board and join the train of the romantic revenge story 😆😆... Looking for an high school/Adult story, this is for you.. #Spicy romance #Obsessive #Revenge #Action and thriller #Faceslapping #Slice of life.. Read and enjoy, you do not want to miss this.. The first few chapters might seem clumsy, but as you move on, remember to hold onto your seatbelts I give yours truly a five star, cause seriously, what do I got to lose 😆😆 P.S: I advice you to read with tissues in your hand, you will cry and laugh out loud in some parts, lol 😂😂😂😂😂