The Tellus Mage

LV 4

Amera_Mee

This was an enjoyable read. The focus on Julian's journey in a fantasy world to becoming a strong and capable force is intriguing, and the various elements of this will make you thrilled an interesting layer to the narrative. All in all, this is a great read for anyone looking for an exciting story.

LV 11

Darksiidde

Good novel so far. I hope the author does not change his line of reasoning during the course of the novel. In addition, for those who like of an MC who gradually develops emotionally and physically, searching for his own identity in a chaotic world, it is a great choice.

LV 1

Adam_Haddad

Every character is a detailed persona, not just a waste of words. Every action scene, or in general description of images and scenery is almost like watching a slideshow of pictures instead of reading words Great action, Amazing plot twists, Addicting plot.

LV 2

helsia

the amount of detail within each paragraph is astounding, you can tell how much effort the author put into describing the characters and the world around them. the dialogue also flows smoothly and naturally, allowing the reader to easily imagine a conversation between two characters in their head. this story is incredibly promising and also takes certain tropes and plays around them, which is always interesting to see. the writing in general is almost flawless, as everything is coherent and makes sense without having to reread anything.

LV 2

ShadowAmeratsu

The novel has an impressive plot, with huge room to have the characters roam, but the pilot chapter seemed to lack emotion. It had great detail and amazing descriptions, but when it came to providing emotions or human body language, it didn't seem the best. I hope that it improves as it goes along, but I'm optimistic of its future :)

LV 6

D0nk3yK0ng

The one glaring problem is the author’s issue switching between 1st & 3rd person perspectives randomly. It’ll start with he (Elias) doing something then jumping to I (Elias) am doing something. Does that with other characters. A smaller complaint is the transition between chapters. It makes everything feel disjointed. Everything else is wonderful. The world development is interesting. The magic system isn’t tropey. He doesn’t have plot armor defending him left and right. I like the idea of the runes even if I don’t think they’re named aptly. Norse have runes, but I think India and similar cultures technically use scripts.

LV 13

Dylan_Hatch_7381

When they say character development, they mean it. Fantastic story. The definition of a hidden jem.

LV 15

m_P3rch

Amazing. Nice worldbuild, interesting plot. Although some might find particular plot choices cliché, in general author managed to keep one invested. Really recommend and I consider current number of views a bit underrated. Keep up, author!

LV 5

mattfuncool

Alright, I see that you dome some new change around of the story, and I say you done a good job at it keep it up, my man.

LV 2

Artuven

I can tell just from the synopsis that we are in for a ride, AND IT IS. Great plot, character development, and set-up. The first few chapters was a bit confusing to read 'cause of the change in POV, but overall, it's a great work ^_^.

LV 1

Alyxovich

I loved this story! Great plot, and I loved all of the characters! The thing that stood out to me the most is the way that you describe things, the descriptions made it super easy to visualise!

LV 4

JJ_Francis

Love the book! Nice plot, ireally enjoyed book good job here author. I can't wait for more chapters

LV 3

Leila_E

This book is really nice and enjoyable actually, I like the details it helps with imagining the scenery, also the MC seems like a chill guy. I've noticed some wholesome scenes here and there and it's cute. I love that this book is completely original it makes you curious as you really don't know what might happen next.

Any readers scrolling through STOP! You want reincarnation? Gradual Psychological maturity? Mythology from every corner of the world integrated into one story? Action? Comedy? Do you want a story where it is easy to imagine every single scenery and every single movement? Do you like gorgeous vocab and wordplay This is it! just come and read this!!

LV 2

pyritenemo000

I've only read one chapter so I can't say much. The story is interesting and it has detailed content. I look forward to future chapters. The sudden pov switches in the first chapter might make it hard for some to read but I assume this has changed in future chapters so don't let first impressions affect a good story.

LV 3

pink_lollie24

This story has beautiful descriptions and I think the author has wonderful imagination in creating a rich world and diverse action scenes. The transition of one scene to another could be done better. I think this story has great potential. Keep up the good work author.

LV 14

FOOL01

litterally giving it 3 stars b/c the author thought it would be fun to reuse the same gimmick and slow down the pace.they had a great start, interesting hook/premise and a sound foundation for the world. however that interest has pretty much died out for.story went from forest survival, villiage, back to a FORCED forest survival again.

LV 3

gnatrou

Although there are a bunch of aspects that set this story apart, it's still another of those somewhat common "reborn as a baby and growing up" types of stories, which isn't bad by any means (there is a reason why people love them so much!). They generally allow more time for character development/growth and even world-building to shift over the years, which the author utilizes quite well. The writing quality is excellent, with vivid imagery and a wonderful flow, although some occasional unnatural paragraphs exist, which is understandable with such consistent and fast chapter releases. Word choices are fantastic (such as using hazel instead of brown). The author could use more creative or figurative language, but by no means is it essential. Your story's got a lot of potential. Good luck and happy writing!