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«Support book with your power stone»
Given a second chance by been transmigrated into a different universe; one which his every dream could be accomplished there, with a system. Nate adventures and struggles in every way possible to get strong and protect those he cared for in this new world. Driven by the desire for more power, he puts himself in every life and death battle just to improve himself.... toughening his will and challenging destiny.
«Quest received»
[Defeat the enemy]
[Difficulty: hard]
[Reward: lv 10 magic abilities, level up +2]
A young man who was slaying his enemies, causing massacre on the battleground heard the sound. Lifting his head, he stared at the distant figure.
“What the......”, opening the mouth wide, he stared at the creature moving in his direction.“I’m doomed...” he said, but not losing his will.
Standing on the battlefield, Nates black cloak was covered in blood with cuts all over,his blue eyes expressing helplessness and exhaustion with his long black hair fluttering through the wind waves adding to his handsome charming features, he was like a devil from the abyss.
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>Will his adventure to become the strongest duo cultivator in the new universe be accomplished, with the soo many challenges he faces??..... or will there be someone or something to stop him from doing so???
Join the the adventure......
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Tulis ulasanI really don't trust novels where the author uses all his secondary accounts to promote his books. I've logged into all the accounts that qualify this and they are all the author's.
The fake reviews.....could have tried to make it seem believable........................................................................................
The story is a good read. It just needs a bit of refining and I believe it will be better than it is now. I really like the mc so far, a character drawn from a lot of comic relief.
An intriguing story, like I literally can't stop reading [img=update][img=update]. Just keep it coming[img=strong][img=More pls][img=More pls]
It is pretty good with fast paced chapters. The world building is also interesting In general. This has some potential Hope to read more in the future!
To be honest this is pretty good so far. It's can be pretty funny, but it's a tinge bit difficult to read in parts. The development of the main character could be better and the writing fluidity and grammar can be improved just by simple editing. I do enjoy the thought put into the magic system, and the feel of an ero game is kind of there but it kind of incorporates real consequences vs someone just behind a screen able to redo it.
The pacing of the story is a bit fast for me, but since the world building have already been explained from the first chapters I guess it's easy to follow. There are some typos on the writing, and still can be edited so 👍. The plot of the story is interesting, hopes the author keep updating and improving it!
Overall, the story is quite interesting just that I found it is a little difficult to read. I think your writing style can be improve for reader easy to read. The world background and plot development has the potential. Keep it up!
The book has lots of potential and really straightforward too, it just needs a bit of smoothening touch to it and everything will be perfect, nevertheless it was a nice read
You did a great work here author but u only need to improve your writing skills because it look so so good if you try your best. Keep it up author
I don't really like reading books like this,but I got hooked on this one, characters and writing is good.Keep up the good work author 🥰🥰
Having gone through the story. I must say your story is good and interesting. All you need is to improve more in your writing. You Character Design and Introduction, your world background and development are lacking some flavour. I know there is room for improvement. So I must say, "keep the nice work up! "
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This is actually a review though ! I picked my phone and decided to check Webnovel as i got a free time...and seeing that my book still keeps increasing with collections and ps, I’ve made it a target to write and the happy news is i might start publishing next week... Thank you all..