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the plot is amazing and it's fun to read. The characters are playing their roles quite well and the development is steady. Above all, it's recommendable
Dive into a realm of boundless imagination and exhilarating action with this remarkable fantasy novel that boasts a world-building prowess beyond compare. From the very first page, I was captivated because the novel is so well-written, keep up the good work!
The story is interesting, but somehow there are some paragraphs that seem too short, and there are some sentences that are repeated. Maybe adding details and reducing repetitive sentences will make the story much more interesting. Keep up the good work author!
20 chapter in and its pretty decent. It's the same old cliche story so far. Not that its bad but it lacks originality. The writing quality is pretty good to be honest but the character dialogues are so fake. Its fine if the author wants to use flowery words and all but no one talks like that man. The flowery words are fine for just descriptions. And the characters lack emotions in their words. Since we can't see the face of characters in a novel we can only depend on their words. But its kinds hard to do that when a teen girl talks like she has a ph.d in literature when her friend gets killed.
Bro your book is amazing, but I this k you should change the book cover, to attract more people, because it kinda sad not seeing this book get the attention it deserves
Looks like I need to change my review, so yeah, here's a new review, [1] Writing quality » Awesome, the author has a large and diverse vocabulary and provides a detailed Description. 5stars. [2] Story Development » It's still in the growth stage, but I have high hopes. 4stars. [3] Character Design » Growth phase, but up until now, he is definitely not a wuss and can talk normally to others, {Not like those dumb MCs who bite their tongue while talking}. 4 stars. [4] Updating stability » 11 chaps a week what else do you want? 5 stars. [5] World Background » A little different, { In the past, there were some alien species waging war against humanity, but later they patch up, and the government doesn't want the same shii to happen again, so a military school type thing was created to train students.} 4 stars. Now what I did not like. First, the conversation sometimes feels unnatural. So does the MC, not always but sometimes. And I guess that's it. If I find any mistakes in the future then I'll make sure to point them out.
An intriguing read with great writing skills, a really nice job done. A read I'll totally recommend
I will give a short review.Overall everything is OK.after reading 5 chapters. there is a point made me thinking.about stat and skill. the author really hard work for that because I think it's not easy like-----------------Attack : 50Defense: 25Speed: 30etcI guess it's hard to make and hard to memories them. Great Job bro
This is really a masterpiece. The beautiful cover caught my attention first , but when I finished reading the synopsis. I couldn't help but start reading it.This is a nice fantasy novel that I will recommend to any reader out there. The character design and world building were top-notch. Please do well to update more chapters.
"You can run but you can't hide Jacob!" It was the final words before the Jacob's quest to find his future and bring unimaginable destruction to his formidable enemies in world's of realms I am looking forward to read!
I really like the descriptions of character’s emotions and the plot is capturing me so far. The only negative criticism I could give you, would be to re-edit your chapters to make sure there isn’t any unfinished sentences or mistakes.💯
5 Star, I like the story at beginning about Jacob, he is a very likable character and I feel relatable to him, I want to read this story until finish, never stop your work.
Men! thank God it was a dream 😂😂 Hikes! Your writing is top notch, expressing in simple words that are easy to understand. The book all good. Must say Jacob is really a tough one. Good luck in your book. This book is going to reach great heights.
Not bad at all, loved the fourth chapter, Although i didn't read past chapter 6 because I hope to read it once it is completed or more words, i hope soon you have more words published.💗💫
So, Jacob start up as the loser and always been bullied, he was all alone with Lily! Jacob seems my personality, the only different now I won't tolerate if people bully me, most of the times I kept it inside my heart, if I felt hurt, so relatable. By coincincidebt your butterfly connection connect to my Thea the butterfly with the power of the swarm to obliterated everyone into the dust by consuming the spirtual powere of the contract holder.
this is really confusing sometimes I wonder who the main character is is it Adam or Jacob also some point the story changes entirely I don't understand what's happening the characters are really confusing and its just world background is confusing and everything about Adam is just weird story makes almost no sense I mean most of the characters I don't understand what is going on with them
superb I must say... amazing system you've created,nice descriptions,only read three chapters and I fell into it after seeing the host.. very funny mc..
I like your story and can't wait to see where it goes. The trope of weak to strong is often overused, but you have shown that in a new light. Love the pacing so far and can't wait for more.
woah, the novel is amazing, I can almost feel the tension on the battleground, thought it was real😂🤣. Jacob's persistence is what we need in the world, the book is amazing, keep the chapters coming
Regressor Mc, system, deamon, expansive world building and great action. Plenty of room fro great development the only problem is the updates!! upload more author!!
suuch a fire book cant wait for more good plot fire chapter 1 to 2 i hope for more chapter cause it realy was good i reccomend this book!! i hope others would enjoy reading................................ lez go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is not bad, the story is promising not gonna lie, it's good. It may be a bit early to write a review but am not a picky reader. please write more chapters.
the plot is amazing and it's fun to read. The characters are playing their roles quite well and the development is steady. Above all, it's recommendable
Dive into a realm of boundless imagination and exhilarating action with this remarkable fantasy novel that boasts a world-building prowess beyond compare. From the very first page, I was captivated because the novel is so well-written, keep up the good work!
The story is interesting, but somehow there are some paragraphs that seem too short, and there are some sentences that are repeated. Maybe adding details and reducing repetitive sentences will make the story much more interesting. Keep up the good work author!
20 chapter in and its pretty decent. It's the same old cliche story so far. Not that its bad but it lacks originality. The writing quality is pretty good to be honest but the character dialogues are so fake. Its fine if the author wants to use flowery words and all but no one talks like that man. The flowery words are fine for just descriptions. And the characters lack emotions in their words. Since we can't see the face of characters in a novel we can only depend on their words. But its kinds hard to do that when a teen girl talks like she has a ph.d in literature when her friend gets killed.
Bro your book is amazing, but I this k you should change the book cover, to attract more people, because it kinda sad not seeing this book get the attention it deserves
Looks like I need to change my review, so yeah, here's a new review, [1] Writing quality » Awesome, the author has a large and diverse vocabulary and provides a detailed Description. 5stars. [2] Story Development » It's still in the growth stage, but I have high hopes. 4stars. [3] Character Design » Growth phase, but up until now, he is definitely not a wuss and can talk normally to others, {Not like those dumb MCs who bite their tongue while talking}. 4 stars. [4] Updating stability » 11 chaps a week what else do you want? 5 stars. [5] World Background » A little different, { In the past, there were some alien species waging war against humanity, but later they patch up, and the government doesn't want the same shii to happen again, so a military school type thing was created to train students.} 4 stars. Now what I did not like. First, the conversation sometimes feels unnatural. So does the MC, not always but sometimes. And I guess that's it. If I find any mistakes in the future then I'll make sure to point them out.
An intriguing read with great writing skills, a really nice job done. A read I'll totally recommend
I will give a short review.Overall everything is OK.after reading 5 chapters. there is a point made me thinking.about stat and skill. the author really hard work for that because I think it's not easy like-----------------Attack : 50Defense: 25Speed: 30etcI guess it's hard to make and hard to memories them. Great Job bro
This is really a masterpiece. The beautiful cover caught my attention first , but when I finished reading the synopsis. I couldn't help but start reading it.This is a nice fantasy novel that I will recommend to any reader out there. The character design and world building were top-notch. Please do well to update more chapters.
"You can run but you can't hide Jacob!" It was the final words before the Jacob's quest to find his future and bring unimaginable destruction to his formidable enemies in world's of realms I am looking forward to read!
I really like the descriptions of character’s emotions and the plot is capturing me so far. The only negative criticism I could give you, would be to re-edit your chapters to make sure there isn’t any unfinished sentences or mistakes.💯
5 Star, I like the story at beginning about Jacob, he is a very likable character and I feel relatable to him, I want to read this story until finish, never stop your work.
Men! thank God it was a dream 😂😂 Hikes! Your writing is top notch, expressing in simple words that are easy to understand. The book all good. Must say Jacob is really a tough one. Good luck in your book. This book is going to reach great heights.
Not bad at all, loved the fourth chapter, Although i didn't read past chapter 6 because I hope to read it once it is completed or more words, i hope soon you have more words published.💗💫
So, Jacob start up as the loser and always been bullied, he was all alone with Lily! Jacob seems my personality, the only different now I won't tolerate if people bully me, most of the times I kept it inside my heart, if I felt hurt, so relatable. By coincincidebt your butterfly connection connect to my Thea the butterfly with the power of the swarm to obliterated everyone into the dust by consuming the spirtual powere of the contract holder.
this is really confusing sometimes I wonder who the main character is is it Adam or Jacob also some point the story changes entirely I don't understand what's happening the characters are really confusing and its just world background is confusing and everything about Adam is just weird story makes almost no sense I mean most of the characters I don't understand what is going on with them
superb I must say... amazing system you've created,nice descriptions,only read three chapters and I fell into it after seeing the host.. very funny mc..
I like your story and can't wait to see where it goes. The trope of weak to strong is often overused, but you have shown that in a new light. Love the pacing so far and can't wait for more.
woah, the novel is amazing, I can almost feel the tension on the battleground, thought it was real😂🤣. Jacob's persistence is what we need in the world, the book is amazing, keep the chapters coming
Regressor Mc, system, deamon, expansive world building and great action. Plenty of room fro great development the only problem is the updates!! upload more author!!
suuch a fire book cant wait for more good plot fire chapter 1 to 2 i hope for more chapter cause it realy was good i reccomend this book!! i hope others would enjoy reading................................ lez go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is not bad, the story is promising not gonna lie, it's good. It may be a bit early to write a review but am not a picky reader. please write more chapters.
This book deserves a 100/100 keep it up Sir Francis