Naruto: Secret organization

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Zen_Kyle

author-san I hope his parent and wife didn't isekaid with cuz theres a possibility that he might end up seeing his wife being pounded by other guy cuz they didn't recognised each other. please nooooo!

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mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I have read the greatest novel on webnovel.

LV 4

DEvz29

The pot holes in this story are larger than the Mariana Trench

LV 4

MasterYiii

The story is ok and all, and the grammar is good. There’s only 2 problems, one is that he doesn’t use the right way of writing lol, it’s not a style, it’s just wrong. He uses (Name) which is annoying for people who listens to it and also uses - instead of “”, I have no idea why, but he called it “a writer style.” Though he did change it to the right one in the new chapters. Second problem is that it’s incredibly boring to read. Most of the time he just go off topic and start talking about things we really don’t need to know. The story itself is interesting and I don’t wanna hate much because I had an annoying experience, but do try it for yourself and you might enjoy it

LV 4

JapaOuO

Man what amazing fanfiction! it's soooo good! Glad I found this story! the plot is amazing, the fact that he manipulates, but still shows compassion, for me is one of the best parts, besides of course he doesn't go after women like pokemons

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DaoistzdJjl9

It's ok, it could be better. There are a lot of grammatical errors, but overall it's not bad. I don't know if it will be like those protagonists that only follow the original story, if it is, then I'll just go reread the manga. But until now it's interesting.

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Infinite999

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