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It's a great story and I frankly liked it very much great character representation as well as plot is also good but my friend you see after nearly 20 chap the action ( you know 😏 ) is not very much and the one is mostly fxf so I hope you increase little bit more mxf as the one you have written is good but can be better so I hope you will continue to write this story you have all my support[img=update][img=update]😎😎
It's a great story and I frankly liked it very much great character representation as well as plot is also good but my friend you see after nearly 20 chap the action ( you know 😏 ) is not very much and the one is mostly fxf so I hope you increase little bit more mxf as the one you have written is good but can be better so I hope you will continue to write this story you have all my support[img=update][img=update]😎😎