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The story is nice but where i found fault was where you allowed the two pups to hate their father and understand everything Their father did wrong and also listened to the conversations about derek raping Melody fgS theY are 5!! and yesss since derek is the alpha Of the country....dont He deserves respect?
The story is nice but where i found fault was where you allowed the two pups to hate their father and understand everything Their father did wrong and also listened to the conversations about derek raping Melody fgS theY are 5!! and yesss since derek is the alpha Of the country....dont He deserves respect?