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I’ve enjoyed every chapter of this novel so far, even without reading Worm it’s really easy to follow, understand and just so entertaining. Would definitely highly recommend and one of my favourite WN to date.
I actually started this and then dropped right when the first couple chapters came out but i read the author's first book and decided to give this another shot. That then led me to notice that at least to where I stopped the book was rewritten a least partially, and the parts removed we actually what made me drop it so well done. oh also it's good
wow, I read the description and after the first paragraph I was ready to start reading the fic but read on and the author casually throws in "oh yeah, it's a ghoul/worm crossover, good luck" lol, that was funny, wish it was my cup of tea
a five star reveiw is due by the sexyness that is me, read this is you want to have a good laugh and a couple good cries
Una buena historia, aunque no dejo de pensar en maneras de terminarla de golpe. Por ejemplo, si Lusia odia tanto sentir aburrimiento, ¿por que no uso el hecho de que el violador este de canada y su familia poseen poderes que alteran las emociones? XDDDD Podria haber elaborado un plan para asegurar que no jueguen con ella, pero meh, supongo que destruiria una importante parte de la personalidad del MC.
Ok, this is going to be the fic that makes me read Worm, I've been procrastinating reading Worm for about 2 years now. I discovered worm through fanfics and I saw that the vast majority of fanfics are written with Yuri (my preference when it's an FMC) I looked for the story and discovered that Taylor doesn't even like girls, that took away my desire to read a little, but I saw there isn't that much romance in worm and I really want to read your fanfic so I'll read it and come back here when I'm done. (Google translator)
I just realized I never submitted a review lol. I absolutely love this novel, and would suggest everyone to read it. It might not be everyone’s cup of tea, but it’s one of the best… actually scratch that, the best Worm fic I’ve ever read. I had never heard of Worm before this, so you don’t need any prior knowledge to read it, and it got me into Worm. I can’t wait to see what else you come up with.
Starts a bit slow but once it picks up it become a very fun and wild ride. Fights are pretty good with interesting powers going against each other and the MC isn't overly OP from the begging and instead grows into it. Overall a very fun read.😎👍
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
One of the best fanfic I’ve ever read or maybe even the best idk but yeah it’s like one of the first time I’ve seen a evil/ crazy Mc that is actually likeable
one of the best worm fanfics i've ever read i love the characters and the plot keep up the good work.
Reader from scribblehub here to bolster the ratings even more! Honestly I had to stop reading after a while for a various reasons, but this is just dumb fun in carnivals.
Like your character and love your story, keep up the good work and a perfect 5 stars to get more people to read it cause some of these reviews are really misleading and unjustified!
Haven't been able to put this one down extremely beautifully written everything goes together perfectly the chapters aren't too long or short the character isn't to op and fits so nicely into the story excellent 10/10 book highly recommend
why a female.. 😢😢😢 gegsgsgdbdudhdbrhdhdbhdydhdhsueyebyejeebeyehehdbdhdhdbhdheiwkekekekekekekekekeieieieieiiekekejejekejejejjejejejehebebrbegeheheyeyehehueueheheheheheuehehehehehhrbebrgeudidienebdbdydyieiejebebdhdu
the book is really good and has been very interesting thus far that is my opinion on it we have yet to reach cannon the mc is insane and the author likes the names James and jack likes irony im taging this with a weird spoiler tag to be safe don't want somone to complain i spoiled something even though ive been very vague
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Reading to C37, the story is mostly alright. There are just some parts that just kinda makes the story more disappointing. The MC's behaviour is kinda awkward. There were couple of snippets that hints at something like trauma, and then it's just glazed over, not mentioned again. Furthermore, she has a sense of self-preservation, hates pain, and stuff like that but continues to act silly even though she should have learned from what got her into the painful messes she was in, instead of doing stupid things because she is bored or insane, especially when she can show logical lines of thought and show control on her murder impulse. The whole fight scene with Dynamite looks like the author is trying to stuff something he likes into the fic without really thinking it through. Like you would think from what has been shown so far, the MC would play around a lot with her kagune, but she tries to punch him. Like she has a supernaturally tough, strong and versatile weapon to use, but gets beaten because she does not have 'form', something for normal humans that does not have supernatural weapons, speed, or strength. However, this is just something I personally don't like, so just chalk it up to her being stupid or something. What killed it for me was the torture scene and the subsequent fight. It's not that gory or gives the reader discomfort. It just came out of nowhere. Well, it came from Tokyo Ghoul, this is just a knock-off version. For the life of me, I could not see anything interesting or exciting, it was just kinda bland. It feels like slapping a piece of wood onto a painting and then call it character development. Boring and dysfunctional. Now, there are good parts. The author did not start of in Brockton Bay, and started in a different city with new heroes, villains and background characters. That's already pretty good. He also fleshes them out quite well, to the extent that I kinda like them more than the MC... maybe that's not a good thing. The gore and blood also appeals to my inner murder hobo. Overall, solid fic, just held back by the MC for me. If you want a happy-go-murder kinda MC this one is for you. The plot direction is kinda loose to none-existent up to C37, but this maybe because I have not read far enough. Still, great job author.
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It's a nice and well written fanfiction and i recommand it to people, however i have dropped it because it's simply not my type 🫂 (came to see a lunatic killing fml but it's just a wholesome girl making lame jokes lol) 🫂However I still encourage the author to continue his work always stronger[img=fp]
Actually crazy protagonist and a good story . ..............................................................................................
i almost never read fmc fanfictions, in movies series and visual stuff it's ok i might like them more than male mc if they aren't woke ahh biches but fanfiction no not sexism but the point of fanfic is to fantasize that you are in a world you like movie anime series manga book...
Didn’t read worm or watch season 2+ tokyo ghoul but u author make me wanted to believe. I just err quite dislike female lead but I’ll try anyways I’ll give another review for u and yall
What did I read? But at the same time, it was really addicting. Can stop reading the next chapter after another. Really good job Author, waiting for more updates!
ayo, you wrote in here too??......From Scribblehub by the way....................∧_∧:: (´･ω･`)::.................................................................
Really sick as of ch. 79. The mc is one of the few well done 'insane, jester, villain/antihero' types ive seen in (fan)fiction and all of the other ocs (there are quite a lot) are also really well done and fit perfectly into the world. Story developement has noticeably improved from author's last fic, not that it was bad there but its definitely noticeable that he has at least a general idea for each arc and the overall direction of the story now imo.
I’ve enjoyed every chapter of this novel so far, even without reading Worm it’s really easy to follow, understand and just so entertaining. Would definitely highly recommend and one of my favourite WN to date.
I actually started this and then dropped right when the first couple chapters came out but i read the author's first book and decided to give this another shot. That then led me to notice that at least to where I stopped the book was rewritten a least partially, and the parts removed we actually what made me drop it so well done. oh also it's good
wow, I read the description and after the first paragraph I was ready to start reading the fic but read on and the author casually throws in "oh yeah, it's a ghoul/worm crossover, good luck" lol, that was funny, wish it was my cup of tea
a five star reveiw is due by the sexyness that is me, read this is you want to have a good laugh and a couple good cries
Una buena historia, aunque no dejo de pensar en maneras de terminarla de golpe. Por ejemplo, si Lusia odia tanto sentir aburrimiento, ¿por que no uso el hecho de que el violador este de canada y su familia poseen poderes que alteran las emociones? XDDDD Podria haber elaborado un plan para asegurar que no jueguen con ella, pero meh, supongo que destruiria una importante parte de la personalidad del MC.
Ok, this is going to be the fic that makes me read Worm, I've been procrastinating reading Worm for about 2 years now. I discovered worm through fanfics and I saw that the vast majority of fanfics are written with Yuri (my preference when it's an FMC) I looked for the story and discovered that Taylor doesn't even like girls, that took away my desire to read a little, but I saw there isn't that much romance in worm and I really want to read your fanfic so I'll read it and come back here when I'm done. (Google translator)
I just realized I never submitted a review lol. I absolutely love this novel, and would suggest everyone to read it. It might not be everyone’s cup of tea, but it’s one of the best… actually scratch that, the best Worm fic I’ve ever read. I had never heard of Worm before this, so you don’t need any prior knowledge to read it, and it got me into Worm. I can’t wait to see what else you come up with.
Starts a bit slow but once it picks up it become a very fun and wild ride. Fights are pretty good with interesting powers going against each other and the MC isn't overly OP from the begging and instead grows into it. Overall a very fun read.😎👍
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
One of the best fanfic I’ve ever read or maybe even the best idk but yeah it’s like one of the first time I’ve seen a evil/ crazy Mc that is actually likeable
one of the best worm fanfics i've ever read i love the characters and the plot keep up the good work.
Reader from scribblehub here to bolster the ratings even more! Honestly I had to stop reading after a while for a various reasons, but this is just dumb fun in carnivals.
Like your character and love your story, keep up the good work and a perfect 5 stars to get more people to read it cause some of these reviews are really misleading and unjustified!
Haven't been able to put this one down extremely beautifully written everything goes together perfectly the chapters aren't too long or short the character isn't to op and fits so nicely into the story excellent 10/10 book highly recommend
why a female.. 😢😢😢 gegsgsgdbdudhdbrhdhdbhdydhdhsueyebyejeebeyehehdbdhdhdbhdheiwkekekekekekekekekeieieieieiiekekejejekejejejjejejejehebebrbegeheheyeyehehueueheheheheheuehehehehehhrbebrgeudidienebdbdydyieiejebebdhdu
the book is really good and has been very interesting thus far that is my opinion on it we have yet to reach cannon the mc is insane and the author likes the names James and jack likes irony im taging this with a weird spoiler tag to be safe don't want somone to complain i spoiled something even though ive been very vague
Membuka SPOILER Reading to C37, the story is mostly alright. There are just some parts that just kinda makes the story more disappointing. The MC's behaviour is kinda awkward. There were couple of snippets that hints at something like trauma, and then it's just glazed over, not mentioned again. Furthermore, she has a sense of self-preservation, hates pain, and stuff like that but continues to act silly even though she should have learned from what got her into the painful messes she was in, instead of doing stupid things because she is bored or insane, especially when she can show logical lines of thought and show control on her murder impulse. The whole fight scene with Dynamite looks like the author is trying to stuff something he likes into the fic without really thinking it through. Like you would think from what has been shown so far, the MC would play around a lot with her kagune, but she tries to punch him. Like she has a supernaturally tough, strong and versatile weapon to use, but gets beaten because she does not have 'form', something for normal humans that does not have supernatural weapons, speed, or strength. However, this is just something I personally don't like, so just chalk it up to her being stupid or something. What killed it for me was the torture scene and the subsequent fight. It's not that gory or gives the reader discomfort. It just came out of nowhere. Well, it came from Tokyo Ghoul, this is just a knock-off version. For the life of me, I could not see anything interesting or exciting, it was just kinda bland. It feels like slapping a piece of wood onto a painting and then call it character development. Boring and dysfunctional. Now, there are good parts. The author did not start of in Brockton Bay, and started in a different city with new heroes, villains and background characters. That's already pretty good. He also fleshes them out quite well, to the extent that I kinda like them more than the MC... maybe that's not a good thing. The gore and blood also appeals to my inner murder hobo. Overall, solid fic, just held back by the MC for me. If you want a happy-go-murder kinda MC this one is for you. The plot direction is kinda loose to none-existent up to C37, but this maybe because I have not read far enough. Still, great job author.
Membuka SPOILER It's a nice and well written fanfiction and i recommand it to people, however i have dropped it because it's simply not my type 🫂 (came to see a lunatic killing fml but it's just a wholesome girl making lame jokes lol) 🫂However I still encourage the author to continue his work always stronger[img=fp]
Actually crazy protagonist and a good story . ..............................................................................................
i almost never read fmc fanfictions, in movies series and visual stuff it's ok i might like them more than male mc if they aren't woke ahh biches but fanfiction no not sexism but the point of fanfic is to fantasize that you are in a world you like movie anime series manga book...
Didn’t read worm or watch season 2+ tokyo ghoul but u author make me wanted to believe. I just err quite dislike female lead but I’ll try anyways I’ll give another review for u and yall
What did I read? But at the same time, it was really addicting. Can stop reading the next chapter after another. Really good job Author, waiting for more updates!
ayo, you wrote in here too??......From Scribblehub by the way....................∧_∧:: (´･ω･`)::.................................................................
Really sick as of ch. 79. The mc is one of the few well done 'insane, jester, villain/antihero' types ive seen in (fan)fiction and all of the other ocs (there are quite a lot) are also really well done and fit perfectly into the world. Story developement has noticeably improved from author's last fic, not that it was bad there but its definitely noticeable that he has at least a general idea for each arc and the overall direction of the story now imo.