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I love the world building and the way you described the world he's in. It feels like a fever dream, and you can't help but try to anticipate what would happen next. Although the chapters are short, I'm sure it'd be longer soon. There are grammatical errors but I can still understand the flow. I'm really looking forward for the novel. I hope you don't stop writing, author. Best of luck!
Amazing story, utter masterpiece of world building, I would say without a shred of doubt this is better than one piece- wait a moment, this is my novel.
Even though there is alittle going on, I'm quite impressed how the suspense builds up in this one, which made me wanted to know more on what happens. Looking forward to the official releases.
I love the world building and the way you described the world he's in. It feels like a fever dream, and you can't help but try to anticipate what would happen next. Although the chapters are short, I'm sure it'd be longer soon. There are grammatical errors but I can still understand the flow. I'm really looking forward for the novel. I hope you don't stop writing, author. Best of luck!
Amazing story, utter masterpiece of world building, I would say without a shred of doubt this is better than one piece- wait a moment, this is my novel.
Even though there is alittle going on, I'm quite impressed how the suspense builds up in this one, which made me wanted to know more on what happens. Looking forward to the official releases.