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dropped 08
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Guys sorry for sudden dropped, original author didn't give me permission to upload if you guys want to read new chapter he has a new account called "Ryswell" , he already publish new chapter their.
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So far it's a very good read with little or no grammatical error. I encourage the author to continue writing this fanfic and know that my power stones will be yours.
Amazing! Don’t typically review but this one deserves it. Great read for sure give it a chance. Authors other stories aren’t really my taste but this one is great! Much love.
I strongly recommend checking this out. - The writing quality is great, and the adult scenes aren't super cringy (like in most fanfics) -it is still early days (chapter 9 as of me writing this), but update speed has been solid so far, -the characters are well fleshed out, and -the story is interesting and well paced.
Normally I don't mind mind control or something but I don't know for some reason the fiction started to feel off, I think it has to do with the mc r@ping WW. I was actually hoping it would be something like slow romance, the mc would win the heart of mind controlled WW and so on, at this point yhe mc is just proving the amazonian right for their disgust of man.