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LV 4 ![Badge]()
Current summary up to chapter 4. Mc dies from choking on bubblegum resurrects into dragon ball world, works for cooler grunts, him and lemo guy orange race move to frieza forces for better treatment, gets attacked by the grunts, does the talk no jutsu with his teammates about to give up, awakens system and kills grunts. so far so good.
LV 4 ![Badge]()
Current summary up to chapter 4. Mc dies from choking on bubblegum resurrects into dragon ball world, works for cooler grunts, him and lemo guy orange race move to frieza forces for better treatment, gets attacked by the grunts, does the talk no jutsu with his teammates about to give up, awakens system and kills grunts. so far so good.
i need more.............................