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i can't believe this have less than 80k views, this is by far one of the best RWBY Fanfiction I've ever read Like most of the time author just slap a reincarnated guy into it then add them to team RWBY and make it a 5 person team or they just straight up replaced Jaune but this Fic did what other fic don't, it added 4 OC MC, and make their very own team, usually not many people like multiple protagonist, cause they want to MC to be 'Special' and being overpowered but I get where they're coming from, like having good multiple MC is a hard thing to do, and usually a lot of author mess it up very easily. but this Fic is truly awesome, the story pacing is amazing, the character interaction is very good, funny and not awkward, the backstory of the OC is very well thought out, and there are no grammar mistake (not one that I noticed) Keep up the good work author
i can't believe this have less than 80k views, this is by far one of the best RWBY Fanfiction I've ever read Like most of the time author just slap a reincarnated guy into it then add them to team RWBY and make it a 5 person team or they just straight up replaced Jaune but this Fic did what other fic don't, it added 4 OC MC, and make their very own team, usually not many people like multiple protagonist, cause they want to MC to be 'Special' and being overpowered but I get where they're coming from, like having good multiple MC is a hard thing to do, and usually a lot of author mess it up very easily. but this Fic is truly awesome, the story pacing is amazing, the character interaction is very good, funny and not awkward, the backstory of the OC is very well thought out, and there are no grammar mistake (not one that I noticed) Keep up the good work author