Omnific Tesseract

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KingBomblaze

Yep, am the author, being shameless to review my book....i know. and yes I did give myself 5 stars... If you like summoning beasts, demons, elves, and other beings then this book is the right one for you

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vasuki_king

I just started reading this and immediately caught my attention. The world you created is so wonderful. Although all the new names and terms are kind of confusing, the story is very catchy. I am invested in Cain's changed life. Good work author.

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Golden_Butterfly1

The first chapter was enough to have me hooked up on this book. Very interesting read with scenes that will have you smiling and even feeling being transported into the story. Great job Author!

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Zurbluris

Its nice to see another author from Nigeria here nice novel BTW could you check out mine?

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AYESHA_FAHIM

I should say that I do suggest this book. I truly appreciate how the world-building and literary vocabulary in this novel have developed. It has a great interesting notion, however I hope you would use more concise and insightful language. You describe the story in a lot of words. But it is a touching tale, especially for his mother. It would be humorous if he could fuse summon mara. For those who enjoy demon summoning like the SMT series, it's an excellent book to read.

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NotNecro

First off, I do recommend this book. I really like the way this story has progressed with its World building, and writing vocabulary. It has a really cool concept, and I immediately thought of something like Pokemon. One small issue, that would really help your book, is to use Grammarly or any browser extension that goes over and fixes the little grammar mistakes that you make, and creates a fluid reading experience for the reader. Other than that, I would love to see how this story progresses.

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Kinuro_Algred

Hello author, I really love the story. I hope you continue it ... can't wait to finish this novel... but I really wish you use more shorter and meaningful words .... u use alot of words to express the story ... But it's indeed a loving story ... especially his mum .... lolzzzzz

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Gokuash

The idea behind the story is nice. The power system is interesting. The problem lies with the execution of the story. The Dialogues are written too poorly. It's obvious the author is an amateur. I suggest the author reads some real novels instead of comics and mangas so that he/she can become better. Basically, a nice story ruined by poor writing skills.

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Unit29

There's a problem with the title... You know other than being a 4D (instead of 2D or 3D) object, a Tesseract is one of the physical forms of Infinity? You can neither add to it nor take away from it, as it will always remain the same. So the Omni part seems kinda redundant without reading further. 😑

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metiedauty

well honestly I Love the way the book is progressing it's just that some various places are poorly worded and the grammar is just messed up. Though, all in all this book is really good. So I recommend reading it and don't judge the author as English may not be their first language. I hope you all enjoy the book.

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Weebtaku

I'm getting shin megami tensei vibes with this, I wonder if he can fuse summon mara, that would be funny lol. It's a good read for people who like demon summoning like the SMT series.

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AceAmbrosia

Good novel... could use a bit of work, and editing would assist in its refinement. The language and sentence formation are a bit lacking, but the story itself is intriguing.

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SupremeDaoist2

This is really good. I must say, it is a masterpiece in the making

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redlady

You have many grammar mistakes but if you improve them you will be fine.The plot is interesting and I like the descriptions.Love the ML!

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Fool_King

W.

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femme_fatale

I really liked the storyline! It was a new genre for me. I don't really like long descriptive paragraphs but because of the story, I kept reading it. Good work! 👌

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CSK2023

great world building and with great potential and with really great character design just needs a little editing on your part.

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MOSS3000

Very immersive writing style that really situates you into this novel, Cain is quite relatable that the readers can insert themselves into. Though the language makes it a bit new-reader unfriendly. Keep up the good work nonetheless.

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ViciousPepper

An immersive story with much potential. The descriptions are evocative and the writing atmospheric. The readers are immediately drawn to MC's world. Overall, a great story... keep it up.

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sleepingpeacefully

Really like the novel so far it has good story ,and hoping to read more.