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Very interesting story. Good transition from Arthur's past to the present. I like the flow and how detailed the world and the characters are. Being oppressed and hated just because they don't understand him, made me really want to root for Arthur. Well done and keep up the good work!
I love what I’ve read so far! I’m at chapter ten currently, and this story is so good! I love how the beginning starts with that traumatic past moment, you as the author really have a way with words! The way you describe what happens to Arthur’s family gives me the heebie jeebies and I also wonder why that happened, which I guess will be explained as the book goes on. I also found certain parts of the book to be comical, especially Arthur’s attitude and how he reveals his magic knowledge at first :D best is that it’s because the girl makes that comment. There is a big sympathy that I feel for Arthur as people keep treating him badly )X though it is intense the anger and bitterness that would come with his desire for revenge against those who have affected his life and bullied and tormented him. I think it will be interesting to see how the plot turns out, if Arthur will be consumed by his desire for blood and vengeance or if he will continue finding purpose in using his abilities and being able to go to different places to explore his magic and journey with others or potentially a love interest too! Looking forward to seeing and reading more of what’s in store for Arthur! Thanks for writing and keep up the good work dear author!
reading status 5/5 23/3/2023 it's me Jennie have read tour synopsis then the first chapter you just amazed me and forced Me share a review I'm very lazy but not like other people who don't bother to give a review on someone's hard work. back to your novel you've written it so well gonna read it further.❤🤝
Very interesting story, I have not read much yet but I am willing to. Love the main character's backstory, amazing character designs, and plot. Very cool story and I cant wait for more.
The story starts with a rather intriguing opening before a large timeskip, at which point the pacing slows down as the author makes the effort to establish world information. The writing is done well, with care taken to include necessary details about things that could be important in the future.
I think the earlier chapters need to be audited and re-edited. But honestly the author wrote a character I wanna root for, plus the transition between the past and present was a nice touch. It's detailed - but perhaps in the wrong places. Not sure how to explain but I think there are some things better left to reader's imagination.
like seriously this is one of the best writeup I've come across, so detailed and intriguing.. giving no room for a dull moment. can't wait to dig in
I admire the concept as well as the plot. It's as if the novel keeps you hooked and refuses to let go. The writing quality is good, but could use some work, as it gets a little confusing in the second chapter. However, that's just subjective. Other than that, I recommend this novel to anyone interested in fantasy and magic! Great story, and keep it up!
I am really into characters that hide their potential or superpowers and this story depicts it. Although there are some minor errors and typos. I am hooked and still on Chapter 7. Will edit again once i'm done
I love the flow of the chapters author wrote on this book. There were no errors upon reading on it. Students, Magic and Arthur, a intriguing character makes this novel a 100! I root for Arthur growing strong! Keep it up, author!
Amazing story from what I've read so far, and definitely one of the better ones I've seen on webnovel. Arthur is a very cool and interesting character to follow, especially in the vast world you've set up. The plot kind of builds up in a way that makes you want to keep reading — along with seeing what kind of developments Arthur and the rest of the cast have. Great work author, rooting for you !
Awesome story so far, especially chapter one, which balances info and story. I love the way it explores the main character explores that magic/power system in the world. Some chapters have great cliffhangers, but certain chapters could definitely have worked as a single one. The writing quality is very vivid and flows well. There are a couple of comma/semi-colon errors, though, but it's nothing major. Another thing: I personally prefer when smaller numbers from twenty or below are spelled out, but that's subjective, I guess.
The speed at which you write is so amazing. I would give more than five stars if I could for the stability of updates because I am honestly so impressed on how fast you get updates out, looking at the timeline. In terms of story, I'm a little confused on whether this is in the modern era (I think it is) or a historical/medieval fantasy. The MC is overpowered but that is a normal trope that people use, but the fact that his only motivation is to get women and revenge is a little off-putting as a female reader. Keep up with the good work!
The mystery at the beginning raise a couple of questions in your mind, leaving you craving for answers. Everyone wants to what comes of the boy's life after such a tragedy. I recommend this to those who are into first paced stories with interesting plot and characters. Best wishes for author.
The story is fine with good potential. Also has a good interesting storyline. With more features, this would become a click! Grammar and pacing is fine and I loved the character. Well, all in all, Loved it and good luck! [img=recommend]
I just saw that all the novels you created were about cultivation amd system. You are great author! As I went through the first chapters, I knew this is gonna keep me hooked. I wish to recommend this to everyone. Wish all the best! Keep going author!
Two words: Poor Arthur. Like seriously, the boy went through such a traumatic experience. Also, the cloaked thing (which, in my mind, I assumed was like an eveil Grim Reaper-looking demon) is so scary. If I saw it, I would faint on the spot lol. I hope Arthur gets to the bottom of the truth and avenges his parents death. Overall, I enjoyed what I've read so far. Definitely adding this to my library so keep up the good work, author!
Am so inlove with this story and how the author gives detailed description. It's well plotted and looking forward to reading more chapters this story is so amazing
I like the way this author starts this novel with coflict and we as readers crave for conflict. As I continue reading, I just hope that Arthur will get his revenge and find out who killed his parents.
This story is captivating, couldn't drop it after reading the first chapter ❤️❤️
A very interesting novel. The worldbuilding is very good, I enjoyed thoroughly how the author was able to interpret everyday items in a more magical way. Moreover, the magic system, while never explained, is intuitive. It is easy for the reader to understand and pick up. The writing, while relying on certain phrases and words, is very solid. If grammatical mistakes bother you, then you should not worry about this novel. The main character, Arthur, tries to force sympathy at times. I understand that everyone looks at him like trash and garbage, but the sheer number of times this is referenced is a little much. This, though, is all my opinion. The story development is fast paced, and throws you straight into the action, leaving little to no time for boredom. This may be detrimental to those who enjoy lingering stories, but for those that enjoy action, it is a perfect fit. Overall, this is a very good fantasy novel with an interesting premise. I would recommend it to those who enjoy a lot of fun and fast paced stories. Happy writing, author.
What a great start , and the novel involving magic is one of my favorite genre. I am gonna stack the chapters so please keep updating dear authore. Good work and all the best ❤❤🔥🔥
I'm basing this off of the plot twist that happens. It doesn't fall into the cliche that you often see, although it starts using a good one. The story development is actually good, unexpected, and makes you look forward. The MC's background is developed well enough and I enjoy all the unique mechanics this world has to offer.
The plot itself is engaging, filled with many new concepts and a fascinating magic system, and the characters are well-developed. I'll give it a five-star rating overall, with my sole complaint being that the pacing seems too quick and there are too many time jumps.
Excellent story, I like the flow of every chapter and how Auther seems to be just having the time of his life in each. Also, funny how they know he is overpowered buts still bully him, like you should be cleaning his shoes with your tongue to get on his good side.
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This is a good read. Good foreshadowing and pacing, moreover the descriptions. I like how intriguing the characters are. This will earn a collection to my library.
Good show... The writing is adequate, and the story seems to be interesting enough for me to want to read more. It's the typical story, but I can see a few twists that can set it apart from the rest Would recommend
I like how fast-paced the story is, with exceptional writing, good storyline, and a very nice depiciton of certain characters. Very nice job in this book.
So far, quite an intriguing read to say the least. The synopsis is very promising and with how the current chapters go, I think the book has great potential. I like how fast-paced the story is and an op mc! Keep up the good work, author!
The story is nice and the characters are interesting. Since I quite like magic academy novels this is great read. The only problem is in my opinion rushed beggining and a lot of time jumps.
Great and intriguing story. It is fast-paced and engaging. It traps you from the beginning as the mystery that surrounds Arthur's life keeps you reading. Good writing quality and impressive world background. I must say this is a great novel. [img=recommend]
Very interesting story. Good transition from Arthur's past to the present. I like the flow and how detailed the world and the characters are. Being oppressed and hated just because they don't understand him, made me really want to root for Arthur. Well done and keep up the good work!
I love what I’ve read so far! I’m at chapter ten currently, and this story is so good! I love how the beginning starts with that traumatic past moment, you as the author really have a way with words! The way you describe what happens to Arthur’s family gives me the heebie jeebies and I also wonder why that happened, which I guess will be explained as the book goes on. I also found certain parts of the book to be comical, especially Arthur’s attitude and how he reveals his magic knowledge at first :D best is that it’s because the girl makes that comment. There is a big sympathy that I feel for Arthur as people keep treating him badly )X though it is intense the anger and bitterness that would come with his desire for revenge against those who have affected his life and bullied and tormented him. I think it will be interesting to see how the plot turns out, if Arthur will be consumed by his desire for blood and vengeance or if he will continue finding purpose in using his abilities and being able to go to different places to explore his magic and journey with others or potentially a love interest too! Looking forward to seeing and reading more of what’s in store for Arthur! Thanks for writing and keep up the good work dear author!
reading status 5/5 23/3/2023 it's me Jennie have read tour synopsis then the first chapter you just amazed me and forced Me share a review I'm very lazy but not like other people who don't bother to give a review on someone's hard work. back to your novel you've written it so well gonna read it further.❤🤝
Very interesting story, I have not read much yet but I am willing to. Love the main character's backstory, amazing character designs, and plot. Very cool story and I cant wait for more.
The story starts with a rather intriguing opening before a large timeskip, at which point the pacing slows down as the author makes the effort to establish world information. The writing is done well, with care taken to include necessary details about things that could be important in the future.
I think the earlier chapters need to be audited and re-edited. But honestly the author wrote a character I wanna root for, plus the transition between the past and present was a nice touch. It's detailed - but perhaps in the wrong places. Not sure how to explain but I think there are some things better left to reader's imagination.
like seriously this is one of the best writeup I've come across, so detailed and intriguing.. giving no room for a dull moment. can't wait to dig in
I admire the concept as well as the plot. It's as if the novel keeps you hooked and refuses to let go. The writing quality is good, but could use some work, as it gets a little confusing in the second chapter. However, that's just subjective. Other than that, I recommend this novel to anyone interested in fantasy and magic! Great story, and keep it up!
I am really into characters that hide their potential or superpowers and this story depicts it. Although there are some minor errors and typos. I am hooked and still on Chapter 7. Will edit again once i'm done
I love the flow of the chapters author wrote on this book. There were no errors upon reading on it. Students, Magic and Arthur, a intriguing character makes this novel a 100! I root for Arthur growing strong! Keep it up, author!
Amazing story from what I've read so far, and definitely one of the better ones I've seen on webnovel. Arthur is a very cool and interesting character to follow, especially in the vast world you've set up. The plot kind of builds up in a way that makes you want to keep reading — along with seeing what kind of developments Arthur and the rest of the cast have. Great work author, rooting for you !
Awesome story so far, especially chapter one, which balances info and story. I love the way it explores the main character explores that magic/power system in the world. Some chapters have great cliffhangers, but certain chapters could definitely have worked as a single one. The writing quality is very vivid and flows well. There are a couple of comma/semi-colon errors, though, but it's nothing major. Another thing: I personally prefer when smaller numbers from twenty or below are spelled out, but that's subjective, I guess.
The speed at which you write is so amazing. I would give more than five stars if I could for the stability of updates because I am honestly so impressed on how fast you get updates out, looking at the timeline. In terms of story, I'm a little confused on whether this is in the modern era (I think it is) or a historical/medieval fantasy. The MC is overpowered but that is a normal trope that people use, but the fact that his only motivation is to get women and revenge is a little off-putting as a female reader. Keep up with the good work!
The mystery at the beginning raise a couple of questions in your mind, leaving you craving for answers. Everyone wants to what comes of the boy's life after such a tragedy. I recommend this to those who are into first paced stories with interesting plot and characters. Best wishes for author.
The story is fine with good potential. Also has a good interesting storyline. With more features, this would become a click! Grammar and pacing is fine and I loved the character. Well, all in all, Loved it and good luck! [img=recommend]
I just saw that all the novels you created were about cultivation amd system. You are great author! As I went through the first chapters, I knew this is gonna keep me hooked. I wish to recommend this to everyone. Wish all the best! Keep going author!
Two words: Poor Arthur. Like seriously, the boy went through such a traumatic experience. Also, the cloaked thing (which, in my mind, I assumed was like an eveil Grim Reaper-looking demon) is so scary. If I saw it, I would faint on the spot lol. I hope Arthur gets to the bottom of the truth and avenges his parents death. Overall, I enjoyed what I've read so far. Definitely adding this to my library so keep up the good work, author!
Am so inlove with this story and how the author gives detailed description. It's well plotted and looking forward to reading more chapters this story is so amazing
I like the way this author starts this novel with coflict and we as readers crave for conflict. As I continue reading, I just hope that Arthur will get his revenge and find out who killed his parents.
This story is captivating, couldn't drop it after reading the first chapter ❤️❤️
A very interesting novel. The worldbuilding is very good, I enjoyed thoroughly how the author was able to interpret everyday items in a more magical way. Moreover, the magic system, while never explained, is intuitive. It is easy for the reader to understand and pick up. The writing, while relying on certain phrases and words, is very solid. If grammatical mistakes bother you, then you should not worry about this novel. The main character, Arthur, tries to force sympathy at times. I understand that everyone looks at him like trash and garbage, but the sheer number of times this is referenced is a little much. This, though, is all my opinion. The story development is fast paced, and throws you straight into the action, leaving little to no time for boredom. This may be detrimental to those who enjoy lingering stories, but for those that enjoy action, it is a perfect fit. Overall, this is a very good fantasy novel with an interesting premise. I would recommend it to those who enjoy a lot of fun and fast paced stories. Happy writing, author.
What a great start , and the novel involving magic is one of my favorite genre. I am gonna stack the chapters so please keep updating dear authore. Good work and all the best ❤❤🔥🔥
I'm basing this off of the plot twist that happens. It doesn't fall into the cliche that you often see, although it starts using a good one. The story development is actually good, unexpected, and makes you look forward. The MC's background is developed well enough and I enjoy all the unique mechanics this world has to offer.
The plot itself is engaging, filled with many new concepts and a fascinating magic system, and the characters are well-developed. I'll give it a five-star rating overall, with my sole complaint being that the pacing seems too quick and there are too many time jumps.
Excellent story, I like the flow of every chapter and how Auther seems to be just having the time of his life in each. Also, funny how they know he is overpowered buts still bully him, like you should be cleaning his shoes with your tongue to get on his good side.
Membuka SPOILER This is a good read. Good foreshadowing and pacing, moreover the descriptions. I like how intriguing the characters are. This will earn a collection to my library.
Good show... The writing is adequate, and the story seems to be interesting enough for me to want to read more. It's the typical story, but I can see a few twists that can set it apart from the rest Would recommend
I like how fast-paced the story is, with exceptional writing, good storyline, and a very nice depiciton of certain characters. Very nice job in this book.
So far, quite an intriguing read to say the least. The synopsis is very promising and with how the current chapters go, I think the book has great potential. I like how fast-paced the story is and an op mc! Keep up the good work, author!
The story is nice and the characters are interesting. Since I quite like magic academy novels this is great read. The only problem is in my opinion rushed beggining and a lot of time jumps.
Great and intriguing story. It is fast-paced and engaging. It traps you from the beginning as the mystery that surrounds Arthur's life keeps you reading. Good writing quality and impressive world background. I must say this is a great novel. [img=recommend]