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still waiting for author to revived mc first dark spirit Lotus, if possible ( chapter 315)
Honestly I can say that this novel is a refreshing read after a long time and even tho there aee few places where the auther can improve. It packs a lot of plot.
My last Review of this novel! apart from the good start, the rest is not crazy. The author uses words too often in any way, as they lose their relevance (example of these words: curiosity, fear, admiration, excited, honesty, exaltation, prudence) he uses them far too often, and he put it where there is space, sometimes it just doesn't make sense, and other times it's just there to add more words. Talk about the mc, the more time passes the more we have the impression that he is older or older, he does everything possible to please these teachers and he is afraid of disappointing them, the more time passes the more shy he becomes and is afraid of defending this (especially women). talk about the mc's power level, the author begins by showing us how strong he is, fighting a former director, fighting one of the strongest men of the strongest family behind the academy of darkness, fighting dozens see hundreds of mystics, then the tournament between acadimia arrives and the mc has difficulty with simple students, because he does not have enough "experience", which of these students has fought someone of level of a director and came out victorious? who among them fought a first class mystic? and kill her?? who fought against 5, 10, 20 mystics and came out victorious?, then to make a tournament stupid logical he destroys the mc and makes it difficult for him against students... this infuriates me! A question Mr. author please why make a transmigratory mc and then make sure to make it as mature as possible, that's the point that bothers me the most!
Welp I never really write rewiews but this just gets better and better. I 100% Recommend.
simply an amazing novel and good story also . always look forward to new chapters [img=update][img=recommend]
Lots of females, there is no interaction in this novel without some powerful girl, and they all abusing the MC, then he just forgives them because he is weaker, but I doubt that he will take revenge on them, instead he make them friends.
Good NovelPlease add chapters for Information of levels/spell light etc.And please stop using name Vincent!
The novel is really enjoyable. There are certain parts that I find are not explained properly or are skipped entirely so I hope it does not stay that way, but nothing major. The only problem I find is that, I have read up to chapter 140 but the power ranking system has still not been explained properly. There are mention of first, second and third class spellcasters as well as something called paragon, but there is no explanation of how these classes/level of power is comprised. What are the requirements or conditions to be considered such. I hope the author can give an explanation on this.
character development is very bad , all are braidead and cannot think. author simply trying to make up world count with some nonsense . i don't think it's worth continuing to read.pure waste of time
Starts slow gets better and continues to improve. Could use addition fleshing out to things. But for webnovel it’s a great book and is entertaining to read the small 2 daily chapters.
The writing quality drops drastically as the story continues. The worst part is probably the storytelling voice or the writing style shifts in a poor direction. Instead of using descriptions to tell the story, it shifts to a bad narration. The author starts telling you how you should feel rather than using their writing to allow you to arrive at the conclusion they are looking for. It’s a very lazy writing style in my opinion. The side characters become less and less relevant as the story progresses and their development nearly stops entirely. The worst part is the author continues to jam them in your face. This makes the story a boring slog of irrelevance that you continue to read only due to sunk cost, having paid for earlier chapters.
It's enjoyable to read, and there some good ideas. I think a quick introduction about the Arcane Paths would have been good, there too many of them, even the author confuse characters' paths sometimes. Generally, I easily give 5 stars if I like the story, but I have to take one off for this, because it proves the author hasn't given enough thought/attention to his work. Or he needs an editor. Also I have a problem with the mc, in one chapter he said he won't let Denise know about his system but in the next chapter he revealed he can extract like a spirit... Sometimes he is kind at other moment he extracts peoples who doesn't deserves it.
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If you are pooking for something cool, definitely this. Cool mc, cool powers, not too op system but op enough. Nice interactions. The way he handles his fights are cool especially when he leaves the academy for vacation it’s like my perfect ideal mc skill sets that i very rarely see. Coolcool cool.
Although the present continuous tense is frustrating, i automatically convert it into past continuous tense, other than that the novel is splendid
Quite not bad, if you give ratings, I gave it 4.5, but there’s nothing like it) A promising novel, for some reason I didn’t notice it before
Hey All, As of this review I’m up to date with max priv tier. The world lore is interesting. The characters are good. Coming to MC. Yeah he might have some downsides to his character but because the story is interesting, you will not feel the downsides of MC. System is just a namesake thing. Other than extracting, it doesn’t do anything(At least as of now) and In fact I like it this way. I do not want systems that pull something out of nothing. That is a lazy writing. The major downside I would say is that author never mentioned the levels. I mean what is the beginner level and what is the end level and what is in between them? We need to have that clarity in them. Till now we are going blind on power scaling. I believe the novel also categorized as mystery because the way it is going, something happened in the past and MC needs to know about what happened. If you are in a dilemma of whether to read or not. Just go ahead and start reading. Give a chance after the free chapters are finished. You never know you might like it. ALSO there is NO DISCORD for this book. @AUTHOR Please provide discord server link ASAP!!!
Mr. author you really need to start improving mc's mentality a little, he's really starting to become annoying, he's often too passive, even if he knows who's targeting him, who's attacking him, he doesn't do anything, because he "respects" the rules of academia, but at one point, we see him more as an idiotic and stupid guy than anything else... Just imagine that Professor Evans could use the being behind her to control the mc, of course I'm 99% that you won't do it, but the mc does almost nothing against her, the worst he looks like a kid when he is in front of her even though he has lived 2 lives!! So far, the fact that he has lived two lives adds nothing to the novel, apart from the fact that it explains the reason for the existence of the system, but apart from that, mc's personality is inferior to the student of most academic students, and it's sad, especially for a novel which started very well, but the further it advances, the worse it gets.
I am currently in love with this book. Author did a really good job with setting up the story. I hope that he will slowly bring character development for Daphne.
frustrating, that is the main feeling this book leaves me with, and i gave it a chance, I read 500 chapters.The author went too far into the low key theme, main character hides too much too frequently and often for no reason, that leads to piled up frustration in how the plot develops.i like a more balanced story with different phases/responses where the same mc adapts and acts weak/strong , hides/shows off situationally instead of a single dimensional plot that always ends up in the same way.This story is not for me and if you are like me and would find that frustrating then avoid.
still waiting for author to revived mc first dark spirit Lotus, if possible ( chapter 315)
Honestly I can say that this novel is a refreshing read after a long time and even tho there aee few places where the auther can improve. It packs a lot of plot.
My last Review of this novel! apart from the good start, the rest is not crazy. The author uses words too often in any way, as they lose their relevance (example of these words: curiosity, fear, admiration, excited, honesty, exaltation, prudence) he uses them far too often, and he put it where there is space, sometimes it just doesn't make sense, and other times it's just there to add more words. Talk about the mc, the more time passes the more we have the impression that he is older or older, he does everything possible to please these teachers and he is afraid of disappointing them, the more time passes the more shy he becomes and is afraid of defending this (especially women). talk about the mc's power level, the author begins by showing us how strong he is, fighting a former director, fighting one of the strongest men of the strongest family behind the academy of darkness, fighting dozens see hundreds of mystics, then the tournament between acadimia arrives and the mc has difficulty with simple students, because he does not have enough "experience", which of these students has fought someone of level of a director and came out victorious? who among them fought a first class mystic? and kill her?? who fought against 5, 10, 20 mystics and came out victorious?, then to make a tournament stupid logical he destroys the mc and makes it difficult for him against students... this infuriates me! A question Mr. author please why make a transmigratory mc and then make sure to make it as mature as possible, that's the point that bothers me the most!
Welp I never really write rewiews but this just gets better and better. I 100% Recommend.
simply an amazing novel and good story also . always look forward to new chapters [img=update][img=recommend]
Lots of females, there is no interaction in this novel without some powerful girl, and they all abusing the MC, then he just forgives them because he is weaker, but I doubt that he will take revenge on them, instead he make them friends.
Good NovelPlease add chapters for Information of levels/spell light etc.And please stop using name Vincent!
The novel is really enjoyable. There are certain parts that I find are not explained properly or are skipped entirely so I hope it does not stay that way, but nothing major. The only problem I find is that, I have read up to chapter 140 but the power ranking system has still not been explained properly. There are mention of first, second and third class spellcasters as well as something called paragon, but there is no explanation of how these classes/level of power is comprised. What are the requirements or conditions to be considered such. I hope the author can give an explanation on this.
character development is very bad , all are braidead and cannot think. author simply trying to make up world count with some nonsense . i don't think it's worth continuing to read.pure waste of time
Starts slow gets better and continues to improve. Could use addition fleshing out to things. But for webnovel it’s a great book and is entertaining to read the small 2 daily chapters.
The writing quality drops drastically as the story continues. The worst part is probably the storytelling voice or the writing style shifts in a poor direction. Instead of using descriptions to tell the story, it shifts to a bad narration. The author starts telling you how you should feel rather than using their writing to allow you to arrive at the conclusion they are looking for. It’s a very lazy writing style in my opinion. The side characters become less and less relevant as the story progresses and their development nearly stops entirely. The worst part is the author continues to jam them in your face. This makes the story a boring slog of irrelevance that you continue to read only due to sunk cost, having paid for earlier chapters.
It's enjoyable to read, and there some good ideas. I think a quick introduction about the Arcane Paths would have been good, there too many of them, even the author confuse characters' paths sometimes. Generally, I easily give 5 stars if I like the story, but I have to take one off for this, because it proves the author hasn't given enough thought/attention to his work. Or he needs an editor. Also I have a problem with the mc, in one chapter he said he won't let Denise know about his system but in the next chapter he revealed he can extract like a spirit... Sometimes he is kind at other moment he extracts peoples who doesn't deserves it.
Membuka SPOILER If you are pooking for something cool, definitely this. Cool mc, cool powers, not too op system but op enough. Nice interactions. The way he handles his fights are cool especially when he leaves the academy for vacation it’s like my perfect ideal mc skill sets that i very rarely see. Coolcool cool.
Although the present continuous tense is frustrating, i automatically convert it into past continuous tense, other than that the novel is splendid
Quite not bad, if you give ratings, I gave it 4.5, but there’s nothing like it) A promising novel, for some reason I didn’t notice it before
Hey All, As of this review I’m up to date with max priv tier. The world lore is interesting. The characters are good. Coming to MC. Yeah he might have some downsides to his character but because the story is interesting, you will not feel the downsides of MC. System is just a namesake thing. Other than extracting, it doesn’t do anything(At least as of now) and In fact I like it this way. I do not want systems that pull something out of nothing. That is a lazy writing. The major downside I would say is that author never mentioned the levels. I mean what is the beginner level and what is the end level and what is in between them? We need to have that clarity in them. Till now we are going blind on power scaling. I believe the novel also categorized as mystery because the way it is going, something happened in the past and MC needs to know about what happened. If you are in a dilemma of whether to read or not. Just go ahead and start reading. Give a chance after the free chapters are finished. You never know you might like it. ALSO there is NO DISCORD for this book. @AUTHOR Please provide discord server link ASAP!!!
Mr. author you really need to start improving mc's mentality a little, he's really starting to become annoying, he's often too passive, even if he knows who's targeting him, who's attacking him, he doesn't do anything, because he "respects" the rules of academia, but at one point, we see him more as an idiotic and stupid guy than anything else... Just imagine that Professor Evans could use the being behind her to control the mc, of course I'm 99% that you won't do it, but the mc does almost nothing against her, the worst he looks like a kid when he is in front of her even though he has lived 2 lives!! So far, the fact that he has lived two lives adds nothing to the novel, apart from the fact that it explains the reason for the existence of the system, but apart from that, mc's personality is inferior to the student of most academic students, and it's sad, especially for a novel which started very well, but the further it advances, the worse it gets.
I am currently in love with this book. Author did a really good job with setting up the story. I hope that he will slowly bring character development for Daphne.
frustrating, that is the main feeling this book leaves me with, and i gave it a chance, I read 500 chapters.The author went too far into the low key theme, main character hides too much too frequently and often for no reason, that leads to piled up frustration in how the plot develops.i like a more balanced story with different phases/responses where the same mc adapts and acts weak/strong , hides/shows off situationally instead of a single dimensional plot that always ends up in the same way.This story is not for me and if you are like me and would find that frustrating then avoid.