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The story started out pretty good, and then bad things happens and then while at boot camp nothing happens and suddenly brainwashing and a rebellion out of the blue and the ability to crush trained soldiers..sigh. This could have been great if there was space for growing a proper rebellion but no, it had to happen randomly out of the blue. The second the story no longer made any sense i lost interest in this. I rate the early part of the story as four stars, the boot camp part three stars and the rebellion one star. Not sure if the paid parts will be worth it, but i am not interested in finding out.
the mc parent are stupid, they are being hunted and they chose to stay in the kingdom that is hunting them and no reason is given for this decision, the mc appear impulsive, there not enought world building.
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The MC is by far the dumbest person in existence, he gave the killer of his parents basically immortality and mind control powers. and using the MI d control powers brainwashed the MC making him even more stupid its honestly sad.
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I went in thinking that crafting would be a Big part of the story. Doesnt Seem to be the case though just a gimmick We have seen so many times, that either gets forgotten or not used at all.
Just don't read this if you don't want to have an aneurism.MC's Father was brutally killed in front of his face and now he licking the ground where his father's killer is walking! and that's not all he is intimate with HER. Yes you read that right. Braindead simp MC. Don't waste your time with this.
I'm hooked, great story. sad I'm caught up in chapters and I have to wait for more. Great story and character progression so far. Great fight scenes with some funny parts. could use more snu snu with more details. I'm just asking for other people who are into that. cough cough
A fun twist of a popular genre! Well written and with quick pace this novel easily grabbed my attention making me want to read more. The story is also well written and very easy to follow. The magic system within the story is also a refreshing read when compared to many others. Overall a good story that's worth a read
The storytelling in this story is really clean; that is what surprised me the most. However, I got confused by the terms of the new world, Zahlers, Nenners, and Seigelwork. That is too much info for a world I barely know. Still, it seems like an enjoyable story overall.
A really good novel. The characters are written very well. Fell in love with this with just a few chapters. Keep updating and keep up the good work!!
It's great. I can't wait to read more of this. I can only hope that the MC actually starts inventing stuff and roll over his enemies soon though. The rebellion angle is also neat
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This is one of the first books I've seen with barely any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. It makes the book very easy, and way less distracting to read. Very nice job.
I think it's awesome...took an overview and it seemed pretty nice like the humility in front of the God's voice and al! that....I like realism in stories so Best Wishes?
A very good novel, especially in the fantasy genre. While the Isekai tag is somewhat played out, this book takes a fresh look at the genre and breathes new life into it. The writing quality is absolutely perfect. No complaints from me. I never noticed any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes and I specifically seek them out. Each sentence flows smoothly and every paragraph feels well crafted. Story development is great. We are not treated to long and often overplayed stories of the MC's previous life (at least from what I have read) that can bog down the story. Character design is unique. The MC adapts well to his new environment, so while the trope is still there, it never feels overplayed or redundant. Most Isekai protagonists tend to annoy me, especially with their personalities. I am happy to report that Rex/Rouge never felt annoying. The world background is wonderful. I love all the European aspects that were taken from our world. I'm so used to seeing Asian influence that I was genuinely surprised to see very little to none of it. Over all, a very good book. I will be adding this to my library and I am excited to see where this goes. Happy writing, author.
I was engrossed in this book from the opening page. I was able to remain interested in the plot because of the compelling characters. The interesting plot had turns and turns that left me guessing right up to the very end. I was able to entirely lose myself in the novel because to the author's imaginative and detailed world-building.
I like your writing style. I've already read a couple of chapters and it's easy to get hooked on the story. I look forward to reading more of your work on the platform.
This novel delivers a great story with intriguing ideas and a unique magic system. The characters are fleshed out nicely, making them relatable and realistic. The overall quality of the book is excellent and deserves 5 stars. The plot is engaging and keeps the reader interested until the end. The author's writing style is easy to read and well-crafted, making the story flow effortlessly.
Great story! Characters are nicely fleshed out, and the story itself is intriguing, with many fresh ideas and an interesting magic system. My only criticism is that the pacing seems too fast, and there are too many time skips, but overall 5 stars from me.
Overall incredibly exciting. Good flow and character building. Has a nice and simple start. Good work author, keep up the work and try your best to induce in some mystery.
Gotta shill for my own work. For those looking for the kingdom-building, it happens once the rebellion starts in earnest. This story is a technology-uplift in a sense, and I won't shy away at being wrong just so it can blow up on the MC's face
Membuka SPOILER The story started out pretty good, and then bad things happens and then while at boot camp nothing happens and suddenly brainwashing and a rebellion out of the blue and the ability to crush trained soldiers..sigh. This could have been great if there was space for growing a proper rebellion but no, it had to happen randomly out of the blue. The second the story no longer made any sense i lost interest in this. I rate the early part of the story as four stars, the boot camp part three stars and the rebellion one star. Not sure if the paid parts will be worth it, but i am not interested in finding out.
the mc parent are stupid, they are being hunted and they chose to stay in the kingdom that is hunting them and no reason is given for this decision, the mc appear impulsive, there not enought world building.
Membuka SPOILER The MC is by far the dumbest person in existence, he gave the killer of his parents basically immortality and mind control powers. and using the MI d control powers brainwashed the MC making him even more stupid its honestly sad.
Membuka SPOILER I went in thinking that crafting would be a Big part of the story. Doesnt Seem to be the case though just a gimmick We have seen so many times, that either gets forgotten or not used at all.
Just don't read this if you don't want to have an aneurism.MC's Father was brutally killed in front of his face and now he licking the ground where his father's killer is walking! and that's not all he is intimate with HER. Yes you read that right. Braindead simp MC. Don't waste your time with this.
I'm hooked, great story. sad I'm caught up in chapters and I have to wait for more. Great story and character progression so far. Great fight scenes with some funny parts. could use more snu snu with more details. I'm just asking for other people who are into that. cough cough
A fun twist of a popular genre! Well written and with quick pace this novel easily grabbed my attention making me want to read more. The story is also well written and very easy to follow. The magic system within the story is also a refreshing read when compared to many others. Overall a good story that's worth a read
The storytelling in this story is really clean; that is what surprised me the most. However, I got confused by the terms of the new world, Zahlers, Nenners, and Seigelwork. That is too much info for a world I barely know. Still, it seems like an enjoyable story overall.
A really good novel. The characters are written very well. Fell in love with this with just a few chapters. Keep updating and keep up the good work!!
It's great. I can't wait to read more of this. I can only hope that the MC actually starts inventing stuff and roll over his enemies soon though. The rebellion angle is also neat
Membuka SPOILER This is one of the first books I've seen with barely any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. It makes the book very easy, and way less distracting to read. Very nice job.
I think it's awesome...took an overview and it seemed pretty nice like the humility in front of the God's voice and al! that....I like realism in stories so Best Wishes?
A very good novel, especially in the fantasy genre. While the Isekai tag is somewhat played out, this book takes a fresh look at the genre and breathes new life into it. The writing quality is absolutely perfect. No complaints from me. I never noticed any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes and I specifically seek them out. Each sentence flows smoothly and every paragraph feels well crafted. Story development is great. We are not treated to long and often overplayed stories of the MC's previous life (at least from what I have read) that can bog down the story. Character design is unique. The MC adapts well to his new environment, so while the trope is still there, it never feels overplayed or redundant. Most Isekai protagonists tend to annoy me, especially with their personalities. I am happy to report that Rex/Rouge never felt annoying. The world background is wonderful. I love all the European aspects that were taken from our world. I'm so used to seeing Asian influence that I was genuinely surprised to see very little to none of it. Over all, a very good book. I will be adding this to my library and I am excited to see where this goes. Happy writing, author.
I was engrossed in this book from the opening page. I was able to remain interested in the plot because of the compelling characters. The interesting plot had turns and turns that left me guessing right up to the very end. I was able to entirely lose myself in the novel because to the author's imaginative and detailed world-building.
I like your writing style. I've already read a couple of chapters and it's easy to get hooked on the story. I look forward to reading more of your work on the platform.
This novel delivers a great story with intriguing ideas and a unique magic system. The characters are fleshed out nicely, making them relatable and realistic. The overall quality of the book is excellent and deserves 5 stars. The plot is engaging and keeps the reader interested until the end. The author's writing style is easy to read and well-crafted, making the story flow effortlessly.
Great story! Characters are nicely fleshed out, and the story itself is intriguing, with many fresh ideas and an interesting magic system. My only criticism is that the pacing seems too fast, and there are too many time skips, but overall 5 stars from me.
Overall incredibly exciting. Good flow and character building. Has a nice and simple start. Good work author, keep up the work and try your best to induce in some mystery.
Gotta shill for my own work. For those looking for the kingdom-building, it happens once the rebellion starts in earnest. This story is a technology-uplift in a sense, and I won't shy away at being wrong just so it can blow up on the MC's face
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