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Super Power Creation Ring
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Aden is a young boy growing up in a world where everyone is born with a superpower. Unfortunately for him, he was born with the weakest ability of all – the ability to create small black flames.
He is constantly bullied by his classmates for having such a weak power and he begins to feel like an outcast. One day while walking home from school he stumbled upon an abandoned house he had never seen before.
Exploring the house, he finds an old mysterious ring hidden in the fireplace. He puts it on and discovers that it gives him a powerful new ability – the power to create any superpower he can imagine!
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Wow, good work. Such a great writer. Best at character development. Just give a try... It is perfect.
Fairly decent start for what could be an interesting story. While its too early to judge the story so much, the pacing does feel somewhat rushed. The author should probably let their writing breathe more, and create a better flow of events. Obviously, I'm not quite so competent a writer myself, so this is all I can pick out really without reading more thoroughly. In the end, it seems decent and the author should definitely continue.
i like the opening of the novel and the conversation more realistic that also i like about the novel ❤️❤️❤️🥰
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I have to say that this novel is quite nice. I gave me a keep reading it's going to be an interesting book vibe. Keep going author. I'm impressed
the story is great and the writing style is great make sure to read it woaah, the writer put a lot of work in this .
hmm.. good start, would be better if we see more action quickly, also im looking about the romance too eh. well the plot is good too, we can expect more.
well to say the least I can't judge much but I know it would turn out to be a great story I'd like to see how it turns out am expectant. and I also like the suspense in the novel it would make the readers want to know more aside from that keep up the good work.
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