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i hope you continue this fanfic, mahouka is rare [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i like the concept, please update and don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Not amazing and is closer to a 3-star novel, but because it's a Mahouka fic and that's rare. I'll give it a 4. Could probably improve the flow of the story, a lot of these events seem random and uninteresting.
It's good but for mc problems it's a bit strange. Mc named Yuki Haku and meet with Tatsuya and Miyuki they are both smart especially Tatsuya. After that Mc made a company called Yuki Enterprises and Tatsuya didn't feel suspicious of mc. Then Mc created another persona namely Yuki to become the chairman of Yuki Enterprises and the hero of Maya who he saved while trying to time travel. Yuki is indeed a common name but the appearance when mc was in the past and now should be the same despite the height difference. Tatsuya should have caught the similarities between Yuki and Yuki Haku and then suspected that the two of them were father and son. Then about the MC's past, you can be tricked by Yuki's persona, saying that Haku got lost because he was playing while Yuki's persona was researching the quantum realm. IF Mc wants to team up with Yotsuba to overcome Ragnarok.
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First 15 chapters was awesome but then I dropped because of time travel. I hate it, it ruins my mood and development of story, it's like a filler nobody asked, as Boruto
A nice read before the author introduced her/his OC to somehow nerf, give a character development or a wall to the current main character like bruh why? He can travel through space and time. They are a LOT of darn overpowered people in the other worlds to help in making him BETTER! haa.
it's not a bad novel, quite well written as well. Sadly It's just painfully boring
this is one of the best....your MC is very interesting and your story development is very good ...overall all I can do is giving 5*
Very enjoyable to read and also very refreshing Author I hope you can continue doing a good job writing this novel. Also where's chapter 17?
Overall an interesting concept but it gets pretty exhausting how the author feels compelled to always point out that MC is a trap. Like you mentioned it already a million chapters ago. I think a good portion of the story is just people's reaction to MCs looks.
while it Was intresting to see a fanfic where the MC isnt going to the same school/dojo/clan As the protaganist i lost much intrest after the System basicly forcing The MC into the plot so yea. otherwise its intresting !
i like this fanfic there are not much The Irregular at Magic High School fics and the prota is too op even for the former prota.
It follows the Canon story and Haku just there as a 3rd wheel, I honestly thought it would be different but apparently not. The Grammar is alright at least to me that is, I have seen worse so this is just an average fanfic for me. I understand why you followed the Canon story with Haku there as just a self-Insert character since it's hard to deviate from the main story of there is already a guide for you to follow.
On the dunes of a wild whirlwind, apples twirl in a summer rain of cranberries. Rainbow flies play poker with penguins in tuxedos. Digital soap bubbles sing opera to the banana moon. Children's dreams, drawn with a yellow crayon, float on a sea of watermelon, dancing salsa with paper butterflies. In cosmic mazes of neon algorithms, pixelated storks play chess with galoshes. Ants with colorful wings build cities out of cotton candy, while three-headed lions joyfully sing songs about jam sandwiches under the emerald sun. Paper airplanes, instead of clouds, follow the sun, trailing threads of rainbows. A banana monster in flip-flops throws cinnamon spirals, and above us, the sounds of a foam bear forest float. In a world of nonsense, nothing makes sense, and absurdity is the norm.
a fresh air to mahouka fanfics, the author had improved greatly while writing it and you can see her puts the heart on the work, still wondering about the line interest/s
I've read s lot of fanfics already that are reincarnation hahaha but i find this kinda refreshing 😆
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Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.
Simply great. You have no idea how hard it is to find a good mahouka fanfiction. Keep the good work up this truly is something special Yea yup yeah yeah yes yeah yeah yes yeah yes yeah yeah I know yeah yeah
The World: The Irregulars at Magic High School Me: 5 Star!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think the initial premise had potential then it became apparent we were getting a rerun of mahouka with a new third wheel. If MC wants to have a low profile he should show some initiative doing so, instead of the plot constantly dragging him along.
This story isn't something serious or mind-blowing, but I hope you enjoy it nonetheless. Don't anticipate much from this. This is not for you if you want something amazing and free, LOL.
i hope you continue this fanfic, mahouka is rare [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i like the concept, please update and don't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Not amazing and is closer to a 3-star novel, but because it's a Mahouka fic and that's rare. I'll give it a 4. Could probably improve the flow of the story, a lot of these events seem random and uninteresting.
It's good but for mc problems it's a bit strange. Mc named Yuki Haku and meet with Tatsuya and Miyuki they are both smart especially Tatsuya. After that Mc made a company called Yuki Enterprises and Tatsuya didn't feel suspicious of mc. Then Mc created another persona namely Yuki to become the chairman of Yuki Enterprises and the hero of Maya who he saved while trying to time travel. Yuki is indeed a common name but the appearance when mc was in the past and now should be the same despite the height difference. Tatsuya should have caught the similarities between Yuki and Yuki Haku and then suspected that the two of them were father and son. Then about the MC's past, you can be tricked by Yuki's persona, saying that Haku got lost because he was playing while Yuki's persona was researching the quantum realm. IF Mc wants to team up with Yotsuba to overcome Ragnarok.
Membuka SPOILER First 15 chapters was awesome but then I dropped because of time travel. I hate it, it ruins my mood and development of story, it's like a filler nobody asked, as Boruto
A nice read before the author introduced her/his OC to somehow nerf, give a character development or a wall to the current main character like bruh why? He can travel through space and time. They are a LOT of darn overpowered people in the other worlds to help in making him BETTER! haa.
it's not a bad novel, quite well written as well. Sadly It's just painfully boring
this is one of the best....your MC is very interesting and your story development is very good ...overall all I can do is giving 5*
Very enjoyable to read and also very refreshing Author I hope you can continue doing a good job writing this novel. Also where's chapter 17?
Overall an interesting concept but it gets pretty exhausting how the author feels compelled to always point out that MC is a trap. Like you mentioned it already a million chapters ago. I think a good portion of the story is just people's reaction to MCs looks.
while it Was intresting to see a fanfic where the MC isnt going to the same school/dojo/clan As the protaganist i lost much intrest after the System basicly forcing The MC into the plot so yea. otherwise its intresting !
i like this fanfic there are not much The Irregular at Magic High School fics and the prota is too op even for the former prota.
It follows the Canon story and Haku just there as a 3rd wheel, I honestly thought it would be different but apparently not. The Grammar is alright at least to me that is, I have seen worse so this is just an average fanfic for me. I understand why you followed the Canon story with Haku there as just a self-Insert character since it's hard to deviate from the main story of there is already a guide for you to follow.
On the dunes of a wild whirlwind, apples twirl in a summer rain of cranberries. Rainbow flies play poker with penguins in tuxedos. Digital soap bubbles sing opera to the banana moon. Children's dreams, drawn with a yellow crayon, float on a sea of watermelon, dancing salsa with paper butterflies. In cosmic mazes of neon algorithms, pixelated storks play chess with galoshes. Ants with colorful wings build cities out of cotton candy, while three-headed lions joyfully sing songs about jam sandwiches under the emerald sun. Paper airplanes, instead of clouds, follow the sun, trailing threads of rainbows. A banana monster in flip-flops throws cinnamon spirals, and above us, the sounds of a foam bear forest float. In a world of nonsense, nothing makes sense, and absurdity is the norm.
a fresh air to mahouka fanfics, the author had improved greatly while writing it and you can see her puts the heart on the work, still wondering about the line interest/s
I've read s lot of fanfics already that are reincarnation hahaha but i find this kinda refreshing 😆
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Simply great. You have no idea how hard it is to find a good mahouka fanfiction. Keep the good work up this truly is something special Yea yup yeah yeah yes yeah yeah yes yeah yes yeah yeah I know yeah yeah
The World: The Irregulars at Magic High School Me: 5 Star!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think the initial premise had potential then it became apparent we were getting a rerun of mahouka with a new third wheel. If MC wants to have a low profile he should show some initiative doing so, instead of the plot constantly dragging him along.
This story isn't something serious or mind-blowing, but I hope you enjoy it nonetheless. Don't anticipate much from this. This is not for you if you want something amazing and free, LOL.