DOOMED TO BE A VILLAIN

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Bored_Author

First of all, as a fan of the comedy genre, I would like to say it is GOLD. There were hardly any grammar mistakes and the way that author presented the story is very intriguing. I don't know about the stability of updates as it still have only 5 chapters but the novel sure is going to my library, If there is one think that I wish for the author to correct, please don't add the author's thoughts in the middle of the story. Although it may sound funny, it will break the concentration and immersion of readers in the story. Other than that, I don't think there is anything to point out, just keep updating regularly and you will be there one day.

LV 14

Railvas

The grammar seems pretty good. stable updating rate, I see there are new chapters every day. I would recommend it to anyone. the story has a detailed world, MC has a rich background, and there's a lot of comedy to make it more fun to read. Good luck to the author, hope you will continue publishing chapters!

LV 15

QueenFrieza

First and foremost I have to give huge kudos to the author for such eloquently written material. The descriptions are rich and believable without being overstuffed with unnecessary details. Every word feels like it has a purpose to me and I really respect an author who has not only good grammar but a way to carry a story so effortlessly with decent pacing and a plot that could go in any which way. I won't lie, when I first started reading I thought the mc came off as sort of a jerk but the longer I read the more he grows on me. His nonchalance to many things at first can be blamed on the life he has led up to where the story begins. When reading I find the system to be perfectly placed and not overbearing. It doesn't seem like the author is using the system to fill in words but it actually adds and supports the story rather than getting in the way. I also really thought the breaking of the fourth wall was charming. One thing I might suggest would be making really long, descriptive sentences that set the scenes a little bit smaller. I found a couple in early chapters that could be broken down into 2+ sentences to give people's minds a little bit of a break while reading. Otherwise, the flow is really good and I think it's well-paced. I'm really excited to see what the author adds to an auxiliary chapter in the future. This book is a wonderful introduction to tropes like transmigration or systems

LV 1

IWantToBeBuddha

The beginning was confusing, as the transition was awful garbage. The comedy's bland and superficial. The protagonist isn't entertaining and seems one-dimensional in almost all aspects. The writing quality was alright. Your use of dialogue tags was redundant. The side characters have nothing going for them, as we don't interact with them enough. The story development is contradictive in the sense of pacing. It wasn't tense or exciting and didn't even have me interested. The world background is unsurprisingly unoriginal. Overall, a mediocre webnovel that has grammar.

LV 15

Someone_Or_Other

The main character has all the arrogance of Tony Stark but none of the wit or charm. Do not recommend.

LV 4

horrendous_potato

Can someone spoil to how tragic and dark this story gets? in the description it says that the story gets dark and I don't really like tragic story's so I would like to know how tragic the story will get so I can know if I will be interested in reading it or not.

LV 2

Vishvarupam

I was little confused at character's speech but the rest is fine. How about adding things like secret societies who were trying to find ways of reincarnation? They would further expand the worldbuilding by adding new and secret locations time to time.

LV 12

1Flavius

5 star review. Even if the first like 50 chapters are like every other villain story, but this one, oh man, just so GOOD. I fell so bad for the MC, nothing goes his way, it's a piece of art to see how the MC will win against the protagonist. It keeps me just wanting mare chapters. This story deserves a chance until chapter 100, if even then u don't like it, then it means villain storys are not for u. Keep going author

LV 4

hyemi_m

After each and every chapter we find interesting facts or cliff hangers that either make us laugh or make us go crazy from the anticipation. I don't usually read this type of genre but there is perfect harmony between comedy and system. The point of view is from the villain and I think that is refreshing and interesting. Great job, author!!

LV 12

TheLastRemnants

I’d have to say this story is hillarious so far. it doesn’t start off too slow, defintiely fast paced which isn’t a problem considering some books are great when it’s an easy read. Outside of a few punctation mistakes, which I can tell probably happened because the other was exited to read, the sentence structure is compelling. This would be my first time reading a book with stats or video gaming, but for my first, I’m honored. Keep up the good work! I wasn’ expecting to get hooked so soon. I shall be adding this to my library and reading more. ❤️

LV 3

Tianah_ann

The novel has such a nice story development😌. I love the way the author is carrying the readers along. This novel isn't a waste of space, love the pace, and the comedic situations that got me all invested. Definitely a book I want in my library😎

LV 1

Sixpips

This novel does a great job of portraying someone who has always been a Villain, but is unwittingly the protagonist now. The humor is there, the arrogance of a main Villain is there, but it is tempered with intellect so that he doesn't become complacent. I find the chapters to be compelling and driving me to see what happens next. Author, keep it up. This has a unique flavor that I don't get to enjoy on Webnovel much, obviously added it to collections :)

LV 2

CaesarAugustus

I have high hopes for this one. Do check it out, you won't be disappointed.

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DaoistImmortall

when you would continue this book?......

LV 3

K_Phynom

Great! Very good! Nice descriptions and characters. I'll be looking forward to this 👍👍👍.