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ok, here is the deal, i can see this, have much "bad review", but first, this is about someone with power of multitasking, wish fulfiment, where the MC, has power, has mind control, don't is human, and WA t to Fack the chick from marvel, mutants, and you know the trill, here is interesting, because is several different history, in the same time, till now, at least 7 different earth, MCU, X-Men, apocalypse monster, hydra earth, and go on, the MC is a symbiont, and this, he can take the power gene from host, he use this to take the power of females, or direct eat other man because he as a "male head", don't want to be in the same body of any other dude, so, or he only using the body, or he is in the body of woman, he doesn't care about mind manipulation other man, and he has some lose screw in the head, and to don't try to kill everyone, he make one "spider man earth" his private earth to let's lose his "dark desire", like making MJ(the b1tch) his cvmdump, and Catwoman his pet ( by month salary lol), and became the president of the world.... well, yeah, so, before coming here and puting bad review, and don't even say why you put bad review, please, read the tag, read the truly good reviews, and only because someone doesn't like the genre, don't say the story is not good. author, are you alive? more than one month with no updates, if you are a bit low, and want to stop, at least make a resume of the final and put the complete in the book, thank you for the good job till here, but i want to see this book keep going.
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I liked it then I stopped liking it around the time he met Wanda cs he did a full personality switch into some loving caring guy cs author felt bad for morals or some shit, idk I don’t fw that, fuck the bitch then throw her to the side idk why author is trying to make a symbiote find love instead of power, pisses me off
Yeah the author made MC an unstoppable force that get everything he wants. He can get any girls he want because he is a brainwashing rapist. Yeah he is not human by the way. But somehow because that created the writers block and somebody in Patreon said a female one by the way me to movement . Girls needed to defy him they need to be angry at his decision. And they need to know the truth. Festival I f****** symbiote can bond to anybody. On instinctual level. Yeah maybe because he is different. I didn't care if it's evil or he if he does things that are detrimental to others but benefits him. I mean he's literally not human. Even on earth he was a guy that would be a serial killer. But the fact that girls can guilt trip him into being a nice guy it's literally the one that asking for it that "I can fix him".
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Debo decir que comencé a leer esta historia por sus momentos sexuales. En especial los de Kamala y Laura. Pero el autor ha sabido manejar la evolución de la trama para hacerla interesante y mantener los momentos eróticos. Y aunque en los últimos capítulos se ha enfocado más en los momentos de acción que en los momentos eróticos, me ha encantado cómo el autor ha manejado todo. Espero que el autor siga disfrutando tanto escribir esta historia como disfruto leerla.
good
This book is very good the only thing that is a eye sore for me is how the mc treats certain women
I really like this story. Everything is perfect. Just wish the new updates were regular. Through our the story....my favourite character has been WANDA (though I wish there's aunt may from MCU)
It really s*cks that he can't do anything on his own, plus it had been said that the mc would get stronger and stronger thanks to his hosts and with the ability he gets by binding to a host or devouring, it had also been said that he had Spiderman's abilities but improved after devouring the first Spiderman but in the end the mc is constantly nerfed. Anyway, the mc is dark and has lost some of its morality, a good ff but the constant nerfing is a real ball buster. I'm currently on chapter 34, I'll edit my review if that changes.
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One of the best marvel fanfics out there, thank you author for this treasure. As for any constructive criticism that i would like to give you is that please also show evil versions of heroes, and also add some more intense plots, like mc stealing others lovers, and them struggling, because till now it's like mc is picking up broken girls.
Version of symbiote as the main hero is very rare from all fanfics, which based on Marvel. Alex shows us how the ordinary person could react if he became an alien. So, thanks to author's imagination, I had a big rest while reading this fanfic.[img=Smug]
Awesome idea, well written and great progress! Thanks for the hard work you've clearly put into it.
Dear Author, My proposition, I give you five star rating, you give me 1,000,000,000+ chapters of this. Deal? On the other note, I like this story because it is about symbiote and the story ain't bad. I don't care whether the character is bad or good, just hope it don't compromise the good story and character. sincerely, casual reader
It was good as you would expect from a smut fic, but got pretty boring around Ch: 180-200. The stability of updates is one of the worst ever. And author might be confused to what to do with the MC keep him evil or not too evil or maybe good sometimes.
Great story and development with the characters, good update speed aswell, ticks all the boxes definitely.
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ok, here is the deal, i can see this, have much "bad review", but first, this is about someone with power of multitasking, wish fulfiment, where the MC, has power, has mind control, don't is human, and WA t to Fack the chick from marvel, mutants, and you know the trill, here is interesting, because is several different history, in the same time, till now, at least 7 different earth, MCU, X-Men, apocalypse monster, hydra earth, and go on, the MC is a symbiont, and this, he can take the power gene from host, he use this to take the power of females, or direct eat other man because he as a "male head", don't want to be in the same body of any other dude, so, or he only using the body, or he is in the body of woman, he doesn't care about mind manipulation other man, and he has some lose screw in the head, and to don't try to kill everyone, he make one "spider man earth" his private earth to let's lose his "dark desire", like making MJ(the b1tch) his cvmdump, and Catwoman his pet ( by month salary lol), and became the president of the world.... well, yeah, so, before coming here and puting bad review, and don't even say why you put bad review, please, read the tag, read the truly good reviews, and only because someone doesn't like the genre, don't say the story is not good. author, are you alive? more than one month with no updates, if you are a bit low, and want to stop, at least make a resume of the final and put the complete in the book, thank you for the good job till here, but i want to see this book keep going.
Membuka SPOILER I liked it then I stopped liking it around the time he met Wanda cs he did a full personality switch into some loving caring guy cs author felt bad for morals or some shit, idk I don’t fw that, fuck the bitch then throw her to the side idk why author is trying to make a symbiote find love instead of power, pisses me off
Yeah the author made MC an unstoppable force that get everything he wants. He can get any girls he want because he is a brainwashing rapist. Yeah he is not human by the way. But somehow because that created the writers block and somebody in Patreon said a female one by the way me to movement . Girls needed to defy him they need to be angry at his decision. And they need to know the truth. Festival I f****** symbiote can bond to anybody. On instinctual level. Yeah maybe because he is different. I didn't care if it's evil or he if he does things that are detrimental to others but benefits him. I mean he's literally not human. Even on earth he was a guy that would be a serial killer. But the fact that girls can guilt trip him into being a nice guy it's literally the one that asking for it that "I can fix him".
Bad....................................... ................................................................................................................................
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Membuka SPOILER Debo decir que comencé a leer esta historia por sus momentos sexuales. En especial los de Kamala y Laura. Pero el autor ha sabido manejar la evolución de la trama para hacerla interesante y mantener los momentos eróticos. Y aunque en los últimos capítulos se ha enfocado más en los momentos de acción que en los momentos eróticos, me ha encantado cómo el autor ha manejado todo. Espero que el autor siga disfrutando tanto escribir esta historia como disfruto leerla.
good
This book is very good the only thing that is a eye sore for me is how the mc treats certain women
I really like this story. Everything is perfect. Just wish the new updates were regular. Through our the story....my favourite character has been WANDA (though I wish there's aunt may from MCU)
It really s*cks that he can't do anything on his own, plus it had been said that the mc would get stronger and stronger thanks to his hosts and with the ability he gets by binding to a host or devouring, it had also been said that he had Spiderman's abilities but improved after devouring the first Spiderman but in the end the mc is constantly nerfed. Anyway, the mc is dark and has lost some of its morality, a good ff but the constant nerfing is a real ball buster. I'm currently on chapter 34, I'll edit my review if that changes.
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One of the best marvel fanfics out there, thank you author for this treasure. As for any constructive criticism that i would like to give you is that please also show evil versions of heroes, and also add some more intense plots, like mc stealing others lovers, and them struggling, because till now it's like mc is picking up broken girls.
Version of symbiote as the main hero is very rare from all fanfics, which based on Marvel. Alex shows us how the ordinary person could react if he became an alien. So, thanks to author's imagination, I had a big rest while reading this fanfic.[img=Smug]
Awesome idea, well written and great progress! Thanks for the hard work you've clearly put into it.
Dear Author, My proposition, I give you five star rating, you give me 1,000,000,000+ chapters of this. Deal? On the other note, I like this story because it is about symbiote and the story ain't bad. I don't care whether the character is bad or good, just hope it don't compromise the good story and character. sincerely, casual reader
It was good as you would expect from a smut fic, but got pretty boring around Ch: 180-200. The stability of updates is one of the worst ever. And author might be confused to what to do with the MC keep him evil or not too evil or maybe good sometimes.
Great story and development with the characters, good update speed aswell, ticks all the boxes definitely.
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For a guy, you sure know how to turn me on... Great work!