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Lemme start. It's very scary how the MC is literally too similar to... uhh... a friend of mine... HAHAHAHA OH MY GOD WTH I'm not hardcore otaku but I'd consider a VERY PROUD DEGEN BASEMENT DWELLER. Anyways, slice of life, with some drama, and then otaku stuff YESEYEYSYESYEYSYEY IF YOU LIKE THAT READ THIS BOOK YOU B-BAKA!
This is a brilliant start. The first few chapters foreshadow the possibility of not only multiple worlds, but that some people are actually aware of the existence of these parallel worlds. The MC obviously has a family that is involved in one way or another with transactions between the human and the elven worlds since they readily accepted the fact of a normal elf popping into their house. The interactions between the elf and the humans shows the delicate relationsh of little trust between the two races, and perhaps only the younger generation aren’t constrained by these feelings as they meet and establish connections through an MMORPG game. These short 9 chapters opened the gates for countless possible plot developments and I won’t lie, keeping the balance between the interrelationships of the human and elven grownups, the younger generations, and the in-game plot will be very challenging as it is intriguing. A story of this magnitude is better done slowly and calmly, don’t rush with the writing! One lovely chapter per day will do. ❤️
Lemme start. It's very scary how the MC is literally too similar to... uhh... a friend of mine... HAHAHAHA OH MY GOD WTH I'm not hardcore otaku but I'd consider a VERY PROUD DEGEN BASEMENT DWELLER. Anyways, slice of life, with some drama, and then otaku stuff YESEYEYSYESYEYSYEY IF YOU LIKE THAT READ THIS BOOK YOU B-BAKA!
This is a brilliant start. The first few chapters foreshadow the possibility of not only multiple worlds, but that some people are actually aware of the existence of these parallel worlds. The MC obviously has a family that is involved in one way or another with transactions between the human and the elven worlds since they readily accepted the fact of a normal elf popping into their house. The interactions between the elf and the humans shows the delicate relationsh of little trust between the two races, and perhaps only the younger generation aren’t constrained by these feelings as they meet and establish connections through an MMORPG game. These short 9 chapters opened the gates for countless possible plot developments and I won’t lie, keeping the balance between the interrelationships of the human and elven grownups, the younger generations, and the in-game plot will be very challenging as it is intriguing. A story of this magnitude is better done slowly and calmly, don’t rush with the writing! One lovely chapter per day will do. ❤️