/ Contemporary Romance / I Still Want You (JK)
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Love.
As far and faint as it sounds, Jeff and Briana knew that they could never forget the eccentric taste of its essence.
For they had tasted it once.
They say that when they love someone they had to let go. If it was true, it will come back despite the odds.
But Jeff and Briana were too afraid to let go, not trusting themselves.
They both held onto their bleeding souls, which fate tied in the most notorious knot.
The more they tried to move away, the more it tightened.
The knot between Jeff, Briana and......Ivan?
Wait.
Was it Jeff and Briana or.....Ivan and Briana?
Who are these people to begin with?
Guess, it is your job to find it.
Read the story to know more about these three players of the love and death game.
Join their journey of reminiscing burning Passion and so many unexpected turns of events that will keep you on the edge till the end.
Get ready to lose yourself in a world of suspense, thrill, love, betrayal and a heart-dropping plot twist where-in every character has a dagger like backstory hidden under their cloak.
Go read now and thank me later.
XOXO
AJ
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Interesting plot and characters. Great job getting this novel out here and I wish you all the best! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The author is very descriptive with his writing, making the novel even easier to read, it's a nice read. and the story got potential
It was really a great novel which makes the mind to imagine things what had happen at that situation and I wish to read the novel in this summer holiday's
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I've read the first few chapters and I can say that the story is pretty nice. My only gripe is with the formatting. I would sincerely suggest that you limit your paragraphs to three or four lines max. This will prevent cluttering or text walls that usually dissuade readers. Secondly, the effects in the brackets are nice, but to generate more impact it's better to put them alone in singular lines, instead of writing them in paragraphs. I hope you continue writing and keep improving.
This my first time reading a book like this, and I see potential- I like how the author is more of a visual writer and how u can picture the story out. Any critique I would have is to space out the dialogue, any dialogue being spoken by another character has to be spaced from the previous one. For example, “How weird,” Jeff replies. “Agreed” That way the readers can tell when there’s another speaker. Other than that I like how the author makes a more dramatic effect w/ the characters. Well done!
a very good start, I hope you keep the intensity I would love to see more chapters of this book soon
Very good plot and love the characters... Post more chapters I'm will always ready to read it
The synopsis was good and interesting to read. It definitely showed what direction you want to take to develop your novel. My only problem is how heavy the dialogues are. I suggest to write more details about the setting of each scenario, and might as well add some thoughts of your character - just to show the readers his / her personality. Overall, interesting plot, and I'm sure you'll improve as you go ^_^
Great job. This is quite interesting and loaded with mysterious twist. The language employed here is perfect. The story setup is nice. Amaya's work is perfect. 😊
hope everyone loves the plot.... join with me to experience some mystery and suspense... love to read your comment and reviews... thankyou for your support till now ^_^