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Until ch 100 the FF is still good. Nothing to complain about. The MC is good and all. The FL have good characters and are interesting not F*** Dolls. I do want see more action. And the new wallpaper is hot 🔥😍 Rouge if iam not wrong.
I loved this fic the slow burn theme actually helped it develop so much I would recommend everyone reading this review to try it out but there's just one tiny problem WHERE'S PART 2?! I'm waiting for it's:
Although I rated the novel high, I am dropping it. It is good, and I am sure it will appeal to many of you out there, I just found many small things frustrating that the author hinted at may change further along. I just see no point in reading something that frustrates me in the hopes it will change later. Like I said, this is a me problem and I am sure many of you out there would probably love it.
I've sent a power stone your way, I like the story very serviceable doesn't take it self overly serious or dark the seriousness is there but it doesn't feel edgy. Though would like see improvement on the seggss it good but I think it could be better with a bit more exaggerations maybe
this is the one of the best novels I've reysp far and the fact that you can read the chapters for free is so amazing and I hope they continue it soon
An enjoyable story, plus a very nice spin on Harley Quinn. I’m looking forward to your future content.
I'm at chapter 50 and while the author has thrown a lot of information out way concerning the MC, his life and everything that is going on, it's not hard to follow at all and I'm rather enjoying the story. It's not all s*x like you would think it would be based on the title, it's well written and thought out so far, I will update my review once I get further into the novel.
Vol- 1 [Way too scattered or so I thought. Most readers drop it in this vol. Jokes on them. They missed the good parts.] Vol- 2 [The writing quality improved massively with each chs. Things started to reveal.] Vol-3 [Just awesome so far. Man, I never saw that coming. Big fights, bigger world, different people's POV, MC finally gets his big battle.]
Whoever merge the 2 verses in this fic, im sure he/she must be bored and wants to see the world burn 🤣🤣🤣
Good book I like how it's developing so far and how you put hints about his abilities throughout the story
Changing my review from 3 stars to 5 stars. The start of this fiction was too rough and the MC is one of the most hated characters from the start and many drop it due to that. Some even say they lost their brain cells and MC is idi#t. To them- Don't say that without reading the vol3. Do you know what character development is? Trust me, the character development of MC and the other characters around him is insane. I love the depth of the characters and the growth beyond what you often find in your regular fan fiction. You want a good story to read, this is it. Slow burn that rewards you in just perfect time.
quoute "It's an êrôge-focused story that isn't focused on serious stuff".... ME: Reads the problems that mc will face.. "The one who laughs"... how this is not serious lol?
Just awesome. If you like slow burn and want to read a good multiverse fanfic, this is it. But it will test your patience which if you have will give you a satisfactory end. Some might not like the beginning chs but give it a chance and read the first volume. I am sure you will get into it in no time. Great job. Keep up.
One of the best written fanfic about a merged world. I like the author's idea of focusing on the changes in the life of a regular civilian rather than the same old heroes. It's really good and author used simple words for everyone to understand. Plus those awesome E scenes. Keep up the good work and ignore those toxic spammers reading without proper knowledge of the MCU and DCU.
I'll give an 5 cause I like the story. and ignore the toxic chatting because those are just kids trust me I know 😜 . . . . . because when I was 17 I got angry at an author because he drop an really great story about an op cute shota mc with some 18+ and his reason for the drop is his lacking where to continue the story and I chatted about where the F get you get tags if you don't know the future development's going? like he has to many tags in his novel that it's already an story of it's own he only needs to continue the ideas of the tags. funny end I got rewarded by 2 badge because I pointed out the authors mistake by forgetting the tags. note: got free time so if you did read my comment ignore it.
So far im about 46 Chapters in and im really enjoying things. The writing quality is good so if you’re heavy on that its not a problem. Also I think the author did a good job integrating the Marvel and Dc worlds together.
Love it so far. Grammar is good and easy to read. I hope to see a lot more chapters in the future. Keep it up Author🫡
so far not a bad read only complaint is i feel the mc has a bad attitude towards literally everything so far hopefully that gets better later in story but all round not a bad read
Enjoying the chapter each and every day. The MC struggling with his powers of control is a plus for me. Added with the development in his relationships I’m all in. You get slow burns of plot and ”action” to reel you in for more.
After reading vol-1 I guess I am qualified to write a review. I read the story and every comment. It's funny to see how some brainless fools without knowledge of comics made fools out of themselves. Anyway, don't trust those negative comments. This is a really well written fan fiction out there. It's a slow burn, but that what's makes it interesting. The idea of daily life without any time skip or even a day skip, I don't think I have read something like this. It's a really engaging read. The uncertainty of daily life without knowing what's waiting for MC is what got me hooked. Just read up to vol 1 and see for yourself. Stick to your ideas author and keep up the good work.
Uhmmm... In my opinion, the MC is kinda, you know, a little timid. Like his system or his cheat was based on Eroge— Erotichness... MC himself always said that he was weak and wanted to protect his little sister, but he always has insufficient strength. The author kinda wanted to delay the MC for his V card to be washed away, I mean it's okay to blue balls me and I'm not angry... what I wanted to say is if the MC wanted strength from the very beginning, why not focused on gaining Eroge points, he has a stripped club imagine if every day he can acquired points, wouldn't it easy for him to become strong? he has a sister, and a chance with black widow, Harley Quinn, and others... but he didn't want to segs them hard... delaying the V card to vanish... I'm not discriminating against this novel by your's author, in fact, I like it a lot, that was just my opinion. I Love You!
Nice amalgamation universe, I just i wished threre was a bit more chaos going on in the world, or hearing about the world, what is going on, would also be cool.
Hello there. Author here with 5 star review as always. This is my first fan fiction and English isn't my native language. So, have a little patience with me and tell me if there are any typos or mistakes. Thank you for reading...
Until ch 100 the FF is still good. Nothing to complain about. The MC is good and all. The FL have good characters and are interesting not F*** Dolls. I do want see more action. And the new wallpaper is hot 🔥😍 Rouge if iam not wrong.
I loved this fic the slow burn theme actually helped it develop so much I would recommend everyone reading this review to try it out but there's just one tiny problem WHERE'S PART 2?! I'm waiting for it's:
Although I rated the novel high, I am dropping it. It is good, and I am sure it will appeal to many of you out there, I just found many small things frustrating that the author hinted at may change further along. I just see no point in reading something that frustrates me in the hopes it will change later. Like I said, this is a me problem and I am sure many of you out there would probably love it.
I've sent a power stone your way, I like the story very serviceable doesn't take it self overly serious or dark the seriousness is there but it doesn't feel edgy. Though would like see improvement on the seggss it good but I think it could be better with a bit more exaggerations maybe
this is the one of the best novels I've reysp far and the fact that you can read the chapters for free is so amazing and I hope they continue it soon
An enjoyable story, plus a very nice spin on Harley Quinn. I’m looking forward to your future content.
I'm at chapter 50 and while the author has thrown a lot of information out way concerning the MC, his life and everything that is going on, it's not hard to follow at all and I'm rather enjoying the story. It's not all s*x like you would think it would be based on the title, it's well written and thought out so far, I will update my review once I get further into the novel.
Vol- 1 [Way too scattered or so I thought. Most readers drop it in this vol. Jokes on them. They missed the good parts.] Vol- 2 [The writing quality improved massively with each chs. Things started to reveal.] Vol-3 [Just awesome so far. Man, I never saw that coming. Big fights, bigger world, different people's POV, MC finally gets his big battle.]
Whoever merge the 2 verses in this fic, im sure he/she must be bored and wants to see the world burn 🤣🤣🤣
Good book I like how it's developing so far and how you put hints about his abilities throughout the story
Changing my review from 3 stars to 5 stars. The start of this fiction was too rough and the MC is one of the most hated characters from the start and many drop it due to that. Some even say they lost their brain cells and MC is idi#t. To them- Don't say that without reading the vol3. Do you know what character development is? Trust me, the character development of MC and the other characters around him is insane. I love the depth of the characters and the growth beyond what you often find in your regular fan fiction. You want a good story to read, this is it. Slow burn that rewards you in just perfect time.
quoute "It's an êrôge-focused story that isn't focused on serious stuff".... ME: Reads the problems that mc will face.. "The one who laughs"... how this is not serious lol?
Just awesome. If you like slow burn and want to read a good multiverse fanfic, this is it. But it will test your patience which if you have will give you a satisfactory end. Some might not like the beginning chs but give it a chance and read the first volume. I am sure you will get into it in no time. Great job. Keep up.
One of the best written fanfic about a merged world. I like the author's idea of focusing on the changes in the life of a regular civilian rather than the same old heroes. It's really good and author used simple words for everyone to understand. Plus those awesome E scenes. Keep up the good work and ignore those toxic spammers reading without proper knowledge of the MCU and DCU.
I'll give an 5 cause I like the story. and ignore the toxic chatting because those are just kids trust me I know 😜 . . . . . because when I was 17 I got angry at an author because he drop an really great story about an op cute shota mc with some 18+ and his reason for the drop is his lacking where to continue the story and I chatted about where the F get you get tags if you don't know the future development's going? like he has to many tags in his novel that it's already an story of it's own he only needs to continue the ideas of the tags. funny end I got rewarded by 2 badge because I pointed out the authors mistake by forgetting the tags. note: got free time so if you did read my comment ignore it.
So far im about 46 Chapters in and im really enjoying things. The writing quality is good so if you’re heavy on that its not a problem. Also I think the author did a good job integrating the Marvel and Dc worlds together.
Love it so far. Grammar is good and easy to read. I hope to see a lot more chapters in the future. Keep it up Author🫡
so far not a bad read only complaint is i feel the mc has a bad attitude towards literally everything so far hopefully that gets better later in story but all round not a bad read
Enjoying the chapter each and every day. The MC struggling with his powers of control is a plus for me. Added with the development in his relationships I’m all in. You get slow burns of plot and ”action” to reel you in for more.
After reading vol-1 I guess I am qualified to write a review. I read the story and every comment. It's funny to see how some brainless fools without knowledge of comics made fools out of themselves. Anyway, don't trust those negative comments. This is a really well written fan fiction out there. It's a slow burn, but that what's makes it interesting. The idea of daily life without any time skip or even a day skip, I don't think I have read something like this. It's a really engaging read. The uncertainty of daily life without knowing what's waiting for MC is what got me hooked. Just read up to vol 1 and see for yourself. Stick to your ideas author and keep up the good work.
Uhmmm... In my opinion, the MC is kinda, you know, a little timid. Like his system or his cheat was based on Eroge— Erotichness... MC himself always said that he was weak and wanted to protect his little sister, but he always has insufficient strength. The author kinda wanted to delay the MC for his V card to be washed away, I mean it's okay to blue balls me and I'm not angry... what I wanted to say is if the MC wanted strength from the very beginning, why not focused on gaining Eroge points, he has a stripped club imagine if every day he can acquired points, wouldn't it easy for him to become strong? he has a sister, and a chance with black widow, Harley Quinn, and others... but he didn't want to segs them hard... delaying the V card to vanish... I'm not discriminating against this novel by your's author, in fact, I like it a lot, that was just my opinion. I Love You!
Nice amalgamation universe, I just i wished threre was a bit more chaos going on in the world, or hearing about the world, what is going on, would also be cool.
Hello there. Author here with 5 star review as always. This is my first fan fiction and English isn't my native language. So, have a little patience with me and tell me if there are any typos or mistakes. Thank you for reading...