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Good stuff. Lets gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
I like the idea of the gaming club. Something new. The main character is funny. He is not really filtering his words and I like it. The idea of the blacksmithing and alchemy is good as well.
The story is very unusual. The main character just tries to live his life while using the gaming club. It is not sure where the story will get but I am looking for it.
Love the story! It is very interesting. Very unusual. There is a lot of cursing in the story, but it is adding to the story. It makes it more realistic!
I love the story. It is very unusual. I am looking for more chapters to come and for all this new theme to show itself fully. Thanks for your work!
Not bad. There are mistakes here and there, but it is generally ok. There is good sense of humour. The story is unpredictable. It is good. Looking for more chapters.
Well the story is interesting. I would like you to talk more about the characters and show what is going on and not make time skips. Try your best! It is good for a beginning.
The story is very unusual. That what makes it special. The main character is real. He is not a 10-year-old kid saving everyone. There is some humour in the story. It is not boring. Looking for more. Just publish more. Don't drop it..
Shameless author review here. Please leave a comment on the series to let me know what I need to work on and what do you think of the story. It will motivate me to continue working even harder!
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good stuff. Lets gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
I like the idea of the gaming club. Something new. The main character is funny. He is not really filtering his words and I like it. The idea of the blacksmithing and alchemy is good as well.
The story is very unusual. The main character just tries to live his life while using the gaming club. It is not sure where the story will get but I am looking for it.
Love the story! It is very interesting. Very unusual. There is a lot of cursing in the story, but it is adding to the story. It makes it more realistic!
I love the story. It is very unusual. I am looking for more chapters to come and for all this new theme to show itself fully. Thanks for your work!
Not bad. There are mistakes here and there, but it is generally ok. There is good sense of humour. The story is unpredictable. It is good. Looking for more chapters.
Well the story is interesting. I would like you to talk more about the characters and show what is going on and not make time skips. Try your best! It is good for a beginning.
The story is very unusual. That what makes it special. The main character is real. He is not a 10-year-old kid saving everyone. There is some humour in the story. It is not boring. Looking for more. Just publish more. Don't drop it..
Shameless author review here. Please leave a comment on the series to let me know what I need to work on and what do you think of the story. It will motivate me to continue working even harder!
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!