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man the story is going good, chapters seems to be a little short, mc should not be so heroic like idiotic protagonists who are favoured by hyper luck. Make the mc more realistic and political schemes can be added. Since father and cousin is hero so an anti-hero type will be interesting . Lazy mc with both power and brain will be good. At last keep updating regularly and focus on story plot pace.
Author please make it a happy ending with him being a father. I don't like seeing depressing sad ending everytime i read a novel. Just put more good development between his wives and mc. That's all i am asking for. Please author🙏
man the story is going good, chapters seems to be a little short, mc should not be so heroic like idiotic protagonists who are favoured by hyper luck. Make the mc more realistic and political schemes can be added. Since father and cousin is hero so an anti-hero type will be interesting . Lazy mc with both power and brain will be good. At last keep updating regularly and focus on story plot pace.
Author please make it a happy ending with him being a father. I don't like seeing depressing sad ending everytime i read a novel. Just put more good development between his wives and mc. That's all i am asking for. Please author🙏