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A Certain Pokemon Shop(Re-written)
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What would you do if you ever woke up in a familiar yet unfamiliar world, without any of your past life memories except for the anime,Manga,Novels,Movies,And Games you have watched, read, or played before?
Follow Zeke! In his adventure in a not so normal earth, that he woke up into!
Oh! and he has a system too!
Warning!
Letting u guys know that i took inspiration on some of the fan-fic i have read before. so i apologize since i made something similar to some of their names,plots and such.
[The Image the cover used isn't owned by me]
[Ctto for the one who made the cover]
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Author here doing a shameless review!... well hopefully you guys would enjoy My book, I probably would have an unstable update it depends since I'm still a student. also I apologize in advance if I made some mistakes and typos in writing since I'm still new in all of this... that's all thanks!
I didn't really like the way the perspective was written in the story. as it felt demeaningly childish. as it felt like this story was being awkwardly read to me like . as it made me feel like I was back in kindergarten getting read a storybook by my kindergarten teacher while I sit down and listen to her read me a story. so the way the story's perspective comes off as kind of offensive.
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es una genial historia espero un buen desarrollo y que no se abandone tiene un enorme potencial y mi apoyo [img=recomendar] espero un buen desarrollo
hope you keep writing I like this story but I'm sick of the racist Chinese people. I hope there is no racism or that there should be moderation. I used the translation in writing, hope you understand.[img=recommend]