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The work is very descriptive and has a good flow. More arcs are needed, continue the work.
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men i love your work especially the build up for the scenes honestly a bit slow with the updates but i get it keep up the good work awesome work 100/10 will definitely recommend it 👍
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I like it. But needs more chapters. Come on bro you need to update more. Update faster. Can't find anything else to read. This is the best NTR.
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I would appreciate it more if you paragraph it out, making it easier to read. Capitalisation and well other things. I basically ZOOM pass all the words, and you will understand it allGuy dies.Transmigrate, take over a "trashy" young master, in a Sect full of "perverts" hahaReceived a system to help him grow, and about this point, almost every "females" being used or used goods.Too bad ratings can't be updated? or can it. Anyway, read it as it is, or you be mind break
Author I only ask you to make the MC a little more determined, just a little bit[img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
where do you find these pictures? does anyone know the name of this woman and his other ff? (the one with the black hair). I haven't read the book yet, but I hope it's not like another one he created.
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do not make mc a cuck it will be very stupid because he has perverted system he should cuck others
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Membuka SPOILER The work is very descriptive and has a good flow. More arcs are needed, continue the work.
Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★ Let's spread the beauty of NTR all over the world ★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★★
men i love your work especially the build up for the scenes honestly a bit slow with the updates but i get it keep up the good work awesome work 100/10 will definitely recommend it 👍
Thanks you for the contend [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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it would be great if you could upload regularly and make the story more exciting ........................................................ .....
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I like it. But needs more chapters. Come on bro you need to update more. Update faster. Can't find anything else to read. This is the best NTR.
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I would appreciate it more if you paragraph it out, making it easier to read. Capitalisation and well other things. I basically ZOOM pass all the words, and you will understand it allGuy dies.Transmigrate, take over a "trashy" young master, in a Sect full of "perverts" hahaReceived a system to help him grow, and about this point, almost every "females" being used or used goods.Too bad ratings can't be updated? or can it. Anyway, read it as it is, or you be mind break
Author I only ask you to make the MC a little more determined, just a little bit[img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
where do you find these pictures? does anyone know the name of this woman and his other ff? (the one with the black hair). I haven't read the book yet, but I hope it's not like another one he created.
Stupid[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
do not make mc a cuck it will be very stupid because he has perverted system he should cuck others
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