My vampire system: Abraham(fanfiction)

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ShadowGrim

Author here. Believing in yourself is the first step, thus the 5 stars. I already have all the major plots in my head so I intend to complete the novel. This is my first time writing, there may be some mistakes left. I'm open to any criticism good or bad, so feel free to speak your mind. As for the novel, I have tried my best to search and re-read it so as to be in line with the original novel. I have only read my dragon and my vampire system. So I will try to use both information when writing this novel. Enjoy your read.[img=recommend]

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edu_rodeiro

let's gooooooo through this book we will get to see how the story would play out with an op character, without any nerfs or being always out on the worst end of things I truly wish this is never dropped, and that it can reach far and wide. because as much as I love the original, it always made me sad how Quinn always got the short end of the stick no matter how strong he got, he never truly won anything tbh

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Aayann_

I like the book you did marvelous work author the book was so well written and the story keeps getting intresting. And Thanks author for your hard work. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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LazyXalien

Chapters Chapters Chapters . . . . . . .

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Laziness_IsThe_Key

I don't know what i was expecting but it is nowhere near the level of original. But its still good enough ig. Not my cup of tea nowadays

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OtakuSad0

I've never actually read my vampire system, but the only thing I can say is that this is a really good work of art. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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_Harsh_

i think it's overall a good fanfiction if you can i would really like if you could try making fanfiction for 'my werewolf system' with mc that have similar personality

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Guy_Slade

The story so far is great. (c21) For my stones worth I am enjoying it so far more than the original, so if the quality remains the same going foreward I forsee something truely great developing here.

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Chulian

Overall a very nice ff, with reasonable storyline. Pls keep it up!!

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Jack_Lois

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Charlotte_Mage

this is probably one of the best fanfics I have ever read, and I hope he can go with Quinn to the academy diskizd or something.

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Otaku_Gamer_00007

Finally after many Days I read a good fanfic it's good its not to unrealistic And the MC is good but I need more moments and more of his personality He only trains And tries to be the strongest I think he should be more vocal he is very quite make some characters he can interact with and have a fun Banter And joke and talk around

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Uchiha_Izuna602

Amazing book tbvh. it's just as good-if not better-as the original. please don't drop 😁

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Vaneford

One of the few vampire system fanfic and o boy it is good i mean GOOD just the qi teaching if you know what i mean[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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AkashicLibrary

Its pretty good. The way author writes and the grammar can improve though. Besides that there isn't much character development so far but the mc is getting stronger. Weak to strong.

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rodents_577

so far the best story ever ..! amazing writing skills ,and I am looking forward to the new chapter updates ..!

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Sagvey_Ay

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Azarus_

I'm starting to like this fan fiction. It's faithful to the lore and the the only problem I might have is the pacing is a little fast.

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christian_the_pogi

good fanfiction story I recommend this good character development please author dont drop this