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Shameless author review. The point of this is to let you know the gist of this story. First the story is rather slow, it’s not a snail pace or anything like that, it just takes its time. While the mc will be overpowered in most ways, he won’t be invencible or start at a super high level, it’s more of a high growth type scenario. This story starts as and is right now, a more typical isekai, but as it progresses things will get a bit crazier and I won’t lie to you, there will be a point where we’ll go by cultivation novel ascension logic, what do I mean? I’m basically saying that at some point higher planes of existence/realm of existence will become a crucial part of the story, and the main character will have to face the, I was the strongest of my plane/realm and now I’m one of the weakest here, but don’t be mistaken, I don’t mean his powers will stop having effect completely or something like that, they will be simple proportional in power to the mc's level. Also, the higher planes/realms will be different from the lower ones in more than just power levels. Now, yes there will be a harem and lemons, but please don’t ask me to hurry it up, things will come and it will be a big part of the story, but let’s get there naturally. I hope you enjoy the story, and do tell me if you have any questions I’ll be more than happy to answer. Now for an actual review: WQ: It’s decent, but has a bunch of mistakes here and there, outside from that it’s ok. I’m trying to improve and edit chapters. US: It’s good, though sometimes falls behind, it’s for the most part solid with at least 5 chapters every week. SD: Not too much has happened yet, but I believe it’s fine if a bit slow, though I hope to have it pick up. CD: Not too much of the characters has been shown yet, but there are hints that more will come. WB: it’s good so far, and while there are questions, an image of how things are and work seems to be building up, as we learn bits and pieces.
So far really enjoying how your building the world of your story keep up the good work I’m rooting for you
Shameless author review. The point of this is to let you know the gist of this story. First the story is rather slow, it’s not a snail pace or anything like that, it just takes its time. While the mc will be overpowered in most ways, he won’t be invencible or start at a super high level, it’s more of a high growth type scenario. This story starts as and is right now, a more typical isekai, but as it progresses things will get a bit crazier and I won’t lie to you, there will be a point where we’ll go by cultivation novel ascension logic, what do I mean? I’m basically saying that at some point higher planes of existence/realm of existence will become a crucial part of the story, and the main character will have to face the, I was the strongest of my plane/realm and now I’m one of the weakest here, but don’t be mistaken, I don’t mean his powers will stop having effect completely or something like that, they will be simple proportional in power to the mc's level. Also, the higher planes/realms will be different from the lower ones in more than just power levels. Now, yes there will be a harem and lemons, but please don’t ask me to hurry it up, things will come and it will be a big part of the story, but let’s get there naturally. I hope you enjoy the story, and do tell me if you have any questions I’ll be more than happy to answer. Now for an actual review: WQ: It’s decent, but has a bunch of mistakes here and there, outside from that it’s ok. I’m trying to improve and edit chapters. US: It’s good, though sometimes falls behind, it’s for the most part solid with at least 5 chapters every week. SD: Not too much has happened yet, but I believe it’s fine if a bit slow, though I hope to have it pick up. CD: Not too much of the characters has been shown yet, but there are hints that more will come. WB: it’s good so far, and while there are questions, an image of how things are and work seems to be building up, as we learn bits and pieces.
So far really enjoying how your building the world of your story keep up the good work I’m rooting for you