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So, for anyone who is interested, I couldn't get past chapter 3. The monolog, dialog, and narration are atrocious. As the author stated, English is not their first language, but they have a decent grasp of it. I am dropping this story due to the insane leaps of "logic" that force the plot forward, sounding like a Chinese novel at times, and the lack of fundamental knowledge on various topics written in the story that makes reading this extremely unpleasant.
Probably one of the best zombie novels. Having said that, I would like to point out that it has the same defects as ALL the other writings on the subject. 1) I can assure you that in the United States of America there are more weapons than people, let alone the absurd amount of ammunition... guaranteed that you will finish the zombies sooner than the ammunition reserve !!! 2)medicines and packaged foods have long expiration dates, this is a problem that arises AFTER the first few years, there is enough time to become self-sufficient. 3)The shortage of toilet paper is so unreal that it borders on the absurd... unless the zombies keep using it...^^
My only problem with this story is Aaron is not very human. Every time it seems like the character development is taking off. They take 3 steps back after taking 2 steps forward. He doesn't act like a actual person. Or man, he acts like a robot most of the time.
Overall pretty good ff set in TWD. I like the MC's butterfly effect on the story and how it affects characters. Parts of the novel can suffer from rehash of previous arcs.
does anyone know what happened to the dog who found them near of the river shore when mc is with alicia after escaping the collapsing tunnel?
man , This author is one of the few great writers when it comes to fan-fics , I loved the MT fic with gilgamesh but the frieren fic disappointed me . Imma still give this one a chance tho [img=Your move]
Fue unas de las mejores historias que el leido de the walking dead, entre todas las que e leído esta a tenido una trama que me dejaba pegado por horas leyendo, y casi nunca un capítulo era aburrido por que siempre había algo que derepente te intrigava a saber cómo iría la historia. Mis felicitaciones a la imaginación del creador que iso esta historia y no dejarla sin un final como lo ase mucha gente por falta de imaginación
Rarely (less than 10) I give a story 5 stars... I read this novel till chapter 420 and then skipped to the ending but still couldnt bring myself to give less than 5... This was a great read, MC with no major bad attitude, calm, calculative and slowly turns humane... This characterset MCs are practically extinct these days, which makes this a a HIDDEN GEM in my book. Good job Author [img=recommend]
I enjoyed reading the book, i Wasnt sure if i woulD like it, but it realky suprised me
❤️❤️❤️❤️ awesome I absolutely loved it! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ one of my favourite stories! I will definitely be checking out your other stories after this
amazing work ...can u make one where he's not so emotionless..,also love interest Maggie ..... again great work
Good story but I wish the story had more to say about the new goverment and the end like did he rebulid the united statas of america!
Membuka SPOILER
La mejor historia de twd no se la pierdan en absoluto la recomiendo,muy buena sin dudas. Del desarrollo MC hasta el final muy buena y hay romance, no harén. Sin espoiler la californiana
Saw that this novel is now finished, which makes me want to read it. However, I still have a few questions. Is it AU or does the novel follow the plot? And what about the romance? When does it start and who is the love interest?
It's really a great story, but a lot of it reads like translated MTL and some writing is veeeeeery awkward. Dialogues are the same, it's not that the dialogues are bad per say they're just phrased very weirdly and riddled with errors, the author should really have an editor clean it up. I have only read about 1/4th of the story and I hope it improves later on. All in all, I will probably read this til the end and hope it improves because the foundation of the story is very strong and can only improve
Honestly, I would have loved if you would have followed it a bit more, expanded on it, and made the most of your project. I really liked your novel, especially since it is adapted to the world of the walking dead. Too bad you had to rush things, but it's still an entertaining read. Although those chapter times killed me because I wanted to keep reading and find out what was going to happen next. It was a pleasure to have read your work, I hope that with this you pave the way and improve what you have to improve in your next projects. I will be attentive to your next novels 🤠
Es la historia es emocionante e interesante que visto, la trama es muy original e intrigante cuando te deja con ganas de más los personajes tienen personalidades muy característicos
l Love it. I just wish the romance would speed up and not start in the 200s, and we have more povs outside of his situation and community. I'm on chap 161, btw
I really love this novel it’s the only reason I’m still on Webnovel keep up the good work❤️
This IS the best TWD fanfic in existence so many chapters its free to read constant updates what is there to hate? congrats in passing 500 chapters have you ever considered making a discord server?
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u should add some romance I know that their is not supposed to be but it would add a lot to the story.
Autor is there a Harem?/ Hopefully not If there isnt a Harem does the Novel contain Romance? Yours sincerely, Some dude who cant speak englisch
In simple words, it is awesome! Like actually great and good! From each character that the author introduces that is new to the world building which is godly! Awesome job to the author. Just a question, do you plan to come back and finish HP:World of Mirrors and if so, when do you plan to return working on it?
I know that you stole the idea and some of the chapters from chinese fanfiction...ive read that book but its a pity its hiatus for a long time. But i guess it would be nice if you continue the book cause it was greatThis is the chinese fanfic that resembles this book : 我来改变行尸走肉世界
Hello everyone. First of all thank you all for reading this novel, if you like the Twd universe this will be your home. I can be sure that as the story progresses, I will try to do my best for everyone to enjoy it. English is not my first language, so it would help me to receive advice. If this story is well received, I will try to write until the end as in my previous novel. Don't forget to support me on my P_treon: SrCuervo
So, for anyone who is interested, I couldn't get past chapter 3. The monolog, dialog, and narration are atrocious. As the author stated, English is not their first language, but they have a decent grasp of it. I am dropping this story due to the insane leaps of "logic" that force the plot forward, sounding like a Chinese novel at times, and the lack of fundamental knowledge on various topics written in the story that makes reading this extremely unpleasant.
Probably one of the best zombie novels. Having said that, I would like to point out that it has the same defects as ALL the other writings on the subject. 1) I can assure you that in the United States of America there are more weapons than people, let alone the absurd amount of ammunition... guaranteed that you will finish the zombies sooner than the ammunition reserve !!! 2)medicines and packaged foods have long expiration dates, this is a problem that arises AFTER the first few years, there is enough time to become self-sufficient. 3)The shortage of toilet paper is so unreal that it borders on the absurd... unless the zombies keep using it...^^
My only problem with this story is Aaron is not very human. Every time it seems like the character development is taking off. They take 3 steps back after taking 2 steps forward. He doesn't act like a actual person. Or man, he acts like a robot most of the time.
Overall pretty good ff set in TWD. I like the MC's butterfly effect on the story and how it affects characters. Parts of the novel can suffer from rehash of previous arcs.
does anyone know what happened to the dog who found them near of the river shore when mc is with alicia after escaping the collapsing tunnel?
man , This author is one of the few great writers when it comes to fan-fics , I loved the MT fic with gilgamesh but the frieren fic disappointed me . Imma still give this one a chance tho [img=Your move]
Fue unas de las mejores historias que el leido de the walking dead, entre todas las que e leído esta a tenido una trama que me dejaba pegado por horas leyendo, y casi nunca un capítulo era aburrido por que siempre había algo que derepente te intrigava a saber cómo iría la historia. Mis felicitaciones a la imaginación del creador que iso esta historia y no dejarla sin un final como lo ase mucha gente por falta de imaginación
Rarely (less than 10) I give a story 5 stars... I read this novel till chapter 420 and then skipped to the ending but still couldnt bring myself to give less than 5... This was a great read, MC with no major bad attitude, calm, calculative and slowly turns humane... This characterset MCs are practically extinct these days, which makes this a a HIDDEN GEM in my book. Good job Author [img=recommend]
I enjoyed reading the book, i Wasnt sure if i woulD like it, but it realky suprised me
❤️❤️❤️❤️ awesome I absolutely loved it! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ one of my favourite stories! I will definitely be checking out your other stories after this
amazing work ...can u make one where he's not so emotionless..,also love interest Maggie ..... again great work
Good story but I wish the story had more to say about the new goverment and the end like did he rebulid the united statas of america!
Membuka SPOILER La mejor historia de twd no se la pierdan en absoluto la recomiendo,muy buena sin dudas. Del desarrollo MC hasta el final muy buena y hay romance, no harén. Sin espoiler la californiana
Saw that this novel is now finished, which makes me want to read it. However, I still have a few questions. Is it AU or does the novel follow the plot? And what about the romance? When does it start and who is the love interest?
It's really a great story, but a lot of it reads like translated MTL and some writing is veeeeeery awkward. Dialogues are the same, it's not that the dialogues are bad per say they're just phrased very weirdly and riddled with errors, the author should really have an editor clean it up. I have only read about 1/4th of the story and I hope it improves later on. All in all, I will probably read this til the end and hope it improves because the foundation of the story is very strong and can only improve
Honestly, I would have loved if you would have followed it a bit more, expanded on it, and made the most of your project. I really liked your novel, especially since it is adapted to the world of the walking dead. Too bad you had to rush things, but it's still an entertaining read. Although those chapter times killed me because I wanted to keep reading and find out what was going to happen next. It was a pleasure to have read your work, I hope that with this you pave the way and improve what you have to improve in your next projects. I will be attentive to your next novels 🤠
Es la historia es emocionante e interesante que visto, la trama es muy original e intrigante cuando te deja con ganas de más los personajes tienen personalidades muy característicos
l Love it. I just wish the romance would speed up and not start in the 200s, and we have more povs outside of his situation and community. I'm on chap 161, btw
I really love this novel it’s the only reason I’m still on Webnovel keep up the good work❤️
This IS the best TWD fanfic in existence so many chapters its free to read constant updates what is there to hate? congrats in passing 500 chapters have you ever considered making a discord server?
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u should add some romance I know that their is not supposed to be but it would add a lot to the story.
Autor is there a Harem?/ Hopefully not If there isnt a Harem does the Novel contain Romance? Yours sincerely, Some dude who cant speak englisch
In simple words, it is awesome! Like actually great and good! From each character that the author introduces that is new to the world building which is godly! Awesome job to the author. Just a question, do you plan to come back and finish HP:World of Mirrors and if so, when do you plan to return working on it?
I know that you stole the idea and some of the chapters from chinese fanfiction...ive read that book but its a pity its hiatus for a long time. But i guess it would be nice if you continue the book cause it was greatThis is the chinese fanfic that resembles this book : 我来改变行尸走肉世界
Hello everyone. First of all thank you all for reading this novel, if you like the Twd universe this will be your home. I can be sure that as the story progresses, I will try to do my best for everyone to enjoy it. English is not my first language, so it would help me to receive advice. If this story is well received, I will try to write until the end as in my previous novel. Don't forget to support me on my P_treon: SrCuervo