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So far so good, keep up the good work. Epic. But fate do be lookin at him suspiciously bad.
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I like this book and its pretty good but I dont get the MC would take a worm as his beast... honestly its stupid and isnt strong and its useless!!! And y did u stop writing when the book isnt finished!??? whats the point in writing if ur not going to finish the book!!????
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I kinda enyojed the story. Its true that it was a bit too slow paced but still i endure it and read till chap 365 but i couldnt continue. MC personality is something i dont dislike except of him being to discrete for too long but his simp side is something i could not accept anymore. At first it was ok but as chaps went by its increased more and more to the point chap 365 was my limit before puking so i had to stop. Still if you are okey with this 2 points, the story is enjoyable over all
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Wanted to review after reading the free chapters. The story is alright, and the potential for development of both the world and characters is good. I’m curious though, why does the system stop appearing after a while, it would be good to show the status every once in a while, its a bit difficult to keep up with the info otherwise, it is also a good way to let the readers track the progress of the character.
Hats off to the author🫡. This is actually one of the best books that I have read in a while. Compareable to legendary books like Super pet store, Monster Integration etc. Kudos to the author for creating auch a great book. I hope the author never abandons this because seriously your book is amazing!!!!I will definitely recommend this work to all who loves to read about beast taming etc. Especially to fans of light novels like Monster Integration, Super Pet Store etc.
Really enjoyed reading this novel; author has a unique writing and storytelling style that once you get used to it's really good. Sometimes chapters start with Rishi being somewhere or doing something readers have no clue about but I'm perfectly fine with it. Rishi may be more mature than your average 12-y-o but it's all perfectly explained with his backstory. Author also doesn't do that annoying thing where they forget what skills MC owns during fights and keeps using all of them, while keeping it fresh at the same time. I recommend reading the free 50 chaps before judging.
Definitely a top tamer/cultivation novel that I’m looking forward to watching grow. Not enough chapters to really binge yet. I think it’ll have great appeal once it gains a few 100 chapters. Main character has a lot going on development wise, author seems like he’s focusing his skill set so he is more defined. The tamer element feels more added in than a main part of the story, but he seems to be working on that too. Not really any bad here, it’s worth a read.
Membuka SPOILER This book is awesome and cant wait to see whats next but it wont let me comment at the bottom of the page.... Im on chapter 220 and I even tried a couple other and wasnt able to too... I think the server is messed up!
AUTHOR DO U EVER LOOK AT THE COMMENTS UNDER THE CHAPTERS?? I HAVE PUT IN Suggestions before but it didn't seem u looked into them or even gave them a thought!!!
It gives a good feeling seeing someone bringing reference from Indian mythology to light novel culture filled with other mythology, which is rarely seen. Keep up
its good so far, need to introduce some stronger, anti hero villian type characters. which coukd challenge and may give motivation to mc to do better. for an mc to grow strong crises are needed.
[Review after reading 11 chapters] This actually isn't too bad in its own genre. The premise itself is a bit generic, but the way it's got to it is something I thought was unique. The grammar is weird sometimes, sentence structure could be better and the strangest thing I noticed was that the storytelling voice, the narration, sometimes dips into the extreme casual. And it sometimes treats the reader as if he were stupid and also, the story is full of exposition, just telling us 'This is how it is' instead of trying to use another method of convey this information. Story-wise I have only a few complaints, which have may have been resolved in the next twenty other chapters I haven't read. !SPOILERS! This is, to me, the weirdest thing. This is the third and last attempt that Rishi, the MC, has to pass the exam to get a Book of Contracts. He's hurt and instead of trying to get healthy before attempting the exam, he just rushes in. Why? Rishi himself was surprised when he found out that he was healed when he was teleported into the exam arena. So, I assumed that he didn't know, or wasn't sure that he would be. Why is he rushing so hard to get it done, even while hurt? And secondly, there doesn't seem to be a downside to the two types of contracts one can have with a beast when choosing the servant variety. You could be normal friends with your beast, just as with the partner one, but still have the servant one chosen, so that it cannot leave or disobey you.
I really like the author's ideas and how his plots progress. The character development is nice and the constant updates too. The world background also put me in a different world of my own imagination. Kepp up the good work!! :))
I liked how the author brought the hindu mythology aspect to the story and the pace is pretty good. could have been more descriptive so the readers could get more immersed in the story. looking forward for more chapters!
I like the concept. I always liked the novels which are related to Magic Monsters and magic in general The concept of how and why everything happens has a reason. Which makes this novel more interesting
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In the year 2050, a massive spaceship appears above Earth, causing panic among the governments of the world. A humanoid alien emerges from the ship and introduces himself as the ancestor of humanity, claiming that his species distributed their life code to various universes and galaxies in an effort to recover their numbers after a war. The alien goes on to reveal that nuclear energy will be removed from Earth and replaced with a new form of energy called mana, which has multiple uses. He also announces the installation of a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity and help them become stronger. While the concept of an ancestor alien visiting Earth and introducing a new form of energy is certainly interesting, the execution of this idea could be improved upon. For example, it is not entirely clear how the alien's announcement of the removal of nuclear energy is received by the various governments of the world. Additionally, the explanation for the existence of humanity and their connection to the ancestor alien species could be fleshed out more. While it is mentioned that the lack of mana on Earth has made humanity weak, it would be helpful to have a more detailed explanation of how this has occurred and how the introduction of mana will change things. Additionally, the concept of a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity is intriguing, but it is not entirely clear how this system will work or what its purpose is. More information on the specific trials and challenges that humanity will face, as well as the rewards that can be earned by completing them, would be helpful in fully understanding this aspect of the story. The character of the ancestor alien is also somewhat lacking in depth. While his physical appearance and the fact that he can communicate telepathically with humanity are certainly interesting, there is not much else known about him. A more detailed background and personality for this character would add depth to the story and make him a more fully realized character. Overall, while the world building in this story has potential, it could be improved upon with more detailed explanations and fleshed out characters. However, the concept of an ancestor alien introducing a new form of energy and a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity is certainly an interesting one and has the potential to be developed into a compelling story.
Please add a Dragon in the Novel. I like to read about novel which have dragon. You can also add phoenix it is also cool. 🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉
I love this book and would like to recommend this book to everyone. First the author has a good writing quality, it's unique, the plot is also wonderful. So i am telling everyone to checj this out and you won't be disappointed! I am awaiting your update, Author...really loved your book
So far so good, keep up the good work. Epic. But fate do be lookin at him suspiciously bad.
Membuka SPOILER New Bonus Chapter Milestones "..." Power Stones >75 Power Stones for 1 Bonus Chapter >115 Power Stones for 2 Bonus Chapters >150 Power Stones for 3 Bonus Chapters Gifts 1oo coins Gift = 1 Bonus Chapter (it will take 10 hours) 200 coins Gift= 2 Bonus Chapters (it will take 1 day) 500 coins Gift= 5 Bonus Chapters (it will take 2 days)
I like this book and its pretty good but I dont get the MC would take a worm as his beast... honestly its stupid and isnt strong and its useless!!! And y did u stop writing when the book isnt finished!??? whats the point in writing if ur not going to finish the book!!????
Don't mind me jus a passer-by 🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️🚶♀️Just trying to become a comment master so I need your help
I kinda enyojed the story. Its true that it was a bit too slow paced but still i endure it and read till chap 365 but i couldnt continue. MC personality is something i dont dislike except of him being to discrete for too long but his simp side is something i could not accept anymore. At first it was ok but as chaps went by its increased more and more to the point chap 365 was my limit before puking so i had to stop. Still if you are okey with this 2 points, the story is enjoyable over all
Membuka SPOILER Wanted to review after reading the free chapters. The story is alright, and the potential for development of both the world and characters is good. I’m curious though, why does the system stop appearing after a while, it would be good to show the status every once in a while, its a bit difficult to keep up with the info otherwise, it is also a good way to let the readers track the progress of the character.
Hats off to the author🫡. This is actually one of the best books that I have read in a while. Compareable to legendary books like Super pet store, Monster Integration etc. Kudos to the author for creating auch a great book. I hope the author never abandons this because seriously your book is amazing!!!!I will definitely recommend this work to all who loves to read about beast taming etc. Especially to fans of light novels like Monster Integration, Super Pet Store etc.
Really enjoyed reading this novel; author has a unique writing and storytelling style that once you get used to it's really good. Sometimes chapters start with Rishi being somewhere or doing something readers have no clue about but I'm perfectly fine with it. Rishi may be more mature than your average 12-y-o but it's all perfectly explained with his backstory. Author also doesn't do that annoying thing where they forget what skills MC owns during fights and keeps using all of them, while keeping it fresh at the same time. I recommend reading the free 50 chaps before judging.
Definitely a top tamer/cultivation novel that I’m looking forward to watching grow. Not enough chapters to really binge yet. I think it’ll have great appeal once it gains a few 100 chapters. Main character has a lot going on development wise, author seems like he’s focusing his skill set so he is more defined. The tamer element feels more added in than a main part of the story, but he seems to be working on that too. Not really any bad here, it’s worth a read.
Membuka SPOILER This book is awesome and cant wait to see whats next but it wont let me comment at the bottom of the page.... Im on chapter 220 and I even tried a couple other and wasnt able to too... I think the server is messed up!
AUTHOR DO U EVER LOOK AT THE COMMENTS UNDER THE CHAPTERS?? I HAVE PUT IN Suggestions before but it didn't seem u looked into them or even gave them a thought!!!
It gives a good feeling seeing someone bringing reference from Indian mythology to light novel culture filled with other mythology, which is rarely seen. Keep up
its good so far, need to introduce some stronger, anti hero villian type characters. which coukd challenge and may give motivation to mc to do better. for an mc to grow strong crises are needed.
[Review after reading 11 chapters] This actually isn't too bad in its own genre. The premise itself is a bit generic, but the way it's got to it is something I thought was unique. The grammar is weird sometimes, sentence structure could be better and the strangest thing I noticed was that the storytelling voice, the narration, sometimes dips into the extreme casual. And it sometimes treats the reader as if he were stupid and also, the story is full of exposition, just telling us 'This is how it is' instead of trying to use another method of convey this information. Story-wise I have only a few complaints, which have may have been resolved in the next twenty other chapters I haven't read. !SPOILERS! This is, to me, the weirdest thing. This is the third and last attempt that Rishi, the MC, has to pass the exam to get a Book of Contracts. He's hurt and instead of trying to get healthy before attempting the exam, he just rushes in. Why? Rishi himself was surprised when he found out that he was healed when he was teleported into the exam arena. So, I assumed that he didn't know, or wasn't sure that he would be. Why is he rushing so hard to get it done, even while hurt? And secondly, there doesn't seem to be a downside to the two types of contracts one can have with a beast when choosing the servant variety. You could be normal friends with your beast, just as with the partner one, but still have the servant one chosen, so that it cannot leave or disobey you.
I really like the author's ideas and how his plots progress. The character development is nice and the constant updates too. The world background also put me in a different world of my own imagination. Kepp up the good work!! :))
I liked how the author brought the hindu mythology aspect to the story and the pace is pretty good. could have been more descriptive so the readers could get more immersed in the story. looking forward for more chapters!
I like the concept. I always liked the novels which are related to Magic Monsters and magic in general The concept of how and why everything happens has a reason. Which makes this novel more interesting
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In the year 2050, a massive spaceship appears above Earth, causing panic among the governments of the world. A humanoid alien emerges from the ship and introduces himself as the ancestor of humanity, claiming that his species distributed their life code to various universes and galaxies in an effort to recover their numbers after a war. The alien goes on to reveal that nuclear energy will be removed from Earth and replaced with a new form of energy called mana, which has multiple uses. He also announces the installation of a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity and help them become stronger. While the concept of an ancestor alien visiting Earth and introducing a new form of energy is certainly interesting, the execution of this idea could be improved upon. For example, it is not entirely clear how the alien's announcement of the removal of nuclear energy is received by the various governments of the world. Additionally, the explanation for the existence of humanity and their connection to the ancestor alien species could be fleshed out more. While it is mentioned that the lack of mana on Earth has made humanity weak, it would be helpful to have a more detailed explanation of how this has occurred and how the introduction of mana will change things. Additionally, the concept of a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity is intriguing, but it is not entirely clear how this system will work or what its purpose is. More information on the specific trials and challenges that humanity will face, as well as the rewards that can be earned by completing them, would be helpful in fully understanding this aspect of the story. The character of the ancestor alien is also somewhat lacking in depth. While his physical appearance and the fact that he can communicate telepathically with humanity are certainly interesting, there is not much else known about him. A more detailed background and personality for this character would add depth to the story and make him a more fully realized character. Overall, while the world building in this story has potential, it could be improved upon with more detailed explanations and fleshed out characters. However, the concept of an ancestor alien introducing a new form of energy and a dimensional dungeon system to challenge humanity is certainly an interesting one and has the potential to be developed into a compelling story.
Please add a Dragon in the Novel. I like to read about novel which have dragon. You can also add phoenix it is also cool. 🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉
I love this book and would like to recommend this book to everyone. First the author has a good writing quality, it's unique, the plot is also wonderful. So i am telling everyone to checj this out and you won't be disappointed! I am awaiting your update, Author...really loved your book