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Ignore the 3.4 score is just me being honest because by no means this fanfic is bad. Writing quality: I give it a 3 because of this being write as a hobby and the author clearly being new to this doesn't check or edit and there some confusion of the usage of a and an which is fine one can easily understand. Secondly the usage of - name: " blah blah" doesn't fit well with the webnovel format but that's fine. Others minors details but meh. Story development: not much to say I quite like it but to little chaps to make a full opinion. Character design: I just love them and I am bias. Updating stability: as already mentioned the author writes this as a hobby and when he feels like it so don't put to much burden to the author, instead be grateful hehehe. World background: not much has been explore but it's marvel what do you expect there's a lot to explore.
Please write more chapters soon. Only six chapters is not enough for this kind of story. At a minimum I’d say 400 chapters but hopefully one thousand chapters💜💜
I love his .......................................................... .......................................,....................... .....story
good ....................................................................................................................................novel
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Ignore the 3.4 score is just me being honest because by no means this fanfic is bad. Writing quality: I give it a 3 because of this being write as a hobby and the author clearly being new to this doesn't check or edit and there some confusion of the usage of a and an which is fine one can easily understand. Secondly the usage of - name: " blah blah" doesn't fit well with the webnovel format but that's fine. Others minors details but meh. Story development: not much to say I quite like it but to little chaps to make a full opinion. Character design: I just love them and I am bias. Updating stability: as already mentioned the author writes this as a hobby and when he feels like it so don't put to much burden to the author, instead be grateful hehehe. World background: not much has been explore but it's marvel what do you expect there's a lot to explore.
Please write more chapters soon. Only six chapters is not enough for this kind of story. At a minimum I’d say 400 chapters but hopefully one thousand chapters💜💜
I love his .......................................................... .......................................,....................... .....story
good ....................................................................................................................................novel
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