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why is your update of this story on fanfiction.com so behind this one?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
One of the best transmigrator fanfics you can find. An interesting character that is properly developed, attention to detail and characters that one doesn't even remember from the series, and a story and world that while paying concise attention to canon information, plays out like an improved version of the original. The character becomes strong through official means and sheer effort, not with systems or inclusions from other anime, and also proves his intelligence and cunning by using the knowledge he has from the original story over and over again. The story is a harem one, and the way the mc develops his relationships with his love interests is one of the reasons I enjoy and defend the genre. The only flaw it has is that the author decided to develop it only until the end of Dragon Ball Z, so the MC does not get involved with the events of Dragon Ball Super (although it includes details of that part of the franchise). Anyway, if you are a fan of Dragon Ball Z, and you like transmigration stories, this is the fanfic that I recommend the most.
what are you doing? read the fanfiction read it now its actually pretty good
entertaining so far but im quite confused why the main character started talking and thinking like raditz and talking as if he actually lived raditz experiences when in truth he merely took over his body after being beaten
a good one....and the only complete dragonball novel i ever read.......thankyou........................................................................
Masterpiece! The main character isn't as naive as the Z fighters but still retains that warrior honor. There's a steady progression, with the main character not being overpowered from the start. Well-implemented enemies provide a challenge to the main character. Overall, it's a pretty good novel.
Es una reseña para conseguir una placa e vista está novela es muy buena se las recomiendo tiene un buen final---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Legazin..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I loved this story to the very end but I can't wait for the sequel,well if there's going to be one but all I can say is I'm hoping for one and I still loved this story to the very end.!
good story. there were several instances where I was looking forward to a new chapter and at several points I almost dropped it. but overall, a nice read.
A great concept that was very well done for a while however when the story reaches Cell it starts to feel VERY forced and thats just not my thing.
The fanfic is not bad, but... It's so stupid. Mc thinks he is a legendary super saying when he can use only ikari mode.... Mc is a hypocrite and he thinks he is better than other saiyans (when they can do the same thing, they just need to try)
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The grammar is pretty good and as far as I have read, the story is pretty good and has some surprises here and there. Plus, this raditz is interesting. He is like a fusion of final vegita and broly.If there is anything I think the author should change about this story. It's following the original plot. As of late, the story seems to be following the original with the frieza arc, time travel saga and cell stuff.I don't know about most people, but that's a turn off for me. Rather than following the plot, the story should deviate very much from the original. With everything still there, just moving ina different direction.Basically, I like AUs. So I hope the author would continue showing something although familiar, but diffetent as well.Like maybe a different point of view for instance. After all, the original story never actually explored the universe. They just jumped from planet destroyed to universe destroyer instantly.
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Also I would like to order a novel about the limitless series/movie if anyone feels smart enough to do so. (25€/2months) 20 chapters of 3k/5k word I only have two requirements the man must be neutral/evil not good guy and he must sleep with at least 3 celebrities Louane, Ingrid chauvin and Alice Taglioni (yes the guy is French) you can make it a dark version of hollywood king if you want
was going great until our mc decided to go full on emo edgelord for no reason on Satan, srsly what will that accomplish? why would he even want the champion title? he can get the money himself no?
write 3 good i think? Downloading 4 chapters, one per day, very good, the development of the story is not really great, 80 chapters, I did not see anything new, only an additional character doing some things and taking the role of Goku. I was expecting something better, especially the Planet Namek event. I did not feel that it was exciting. You could have made it better. Character design 2 Reason ? Because it is one character, there is really nothing else, and it is somewhat naive. I love evil characters and plots. The background of World 3 is nothing new. There was some explanation, but it still did not leave your own touch, and this is a pity.
this fanfic is great but at chapter 34 he suddenly have a child out of nowhere with a women he met at chapter 33... this ruin the story for me but can someone tell me if this is still worth reading?
Membuka SPOILER
I have not read the ff yet. but i have a question is this a MTL ? cause I have seen a mtl with the same title
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A long time ago, Bardock had wished upon a dragon, a wish that made sure his children, Raditz and Goku thrive. This wish, sadly was nullified as the brothers fought and ended up perishing together. This book will show what the older brother could have accomplished, if he had survived his fateful bout against his younger sibling.
why is your update of this story on fanfiction.com so behind this one?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
One of the best transmigrator fanfics you can find. An interesting character that is properly developed, attention to detail and characters that one doesn't even remember from the series, and a story and world that while paying concise attention to canon information, plays out like an improved version of the original. The character becomes strong through official means and sheer effort, not with systems or inclusions from other anime, and also proves his intelligence and cunning by using the knowledge he has from the original story over and over again. The story is a harem one, and the way the mc develops his relationships with his love interests is one of the reasons I enjoy and defend the genre. The only flaw it has is that the author decided to develop it only until the end of Dragon Ball Z, so the MC does not get involved with the events of Dragon Ball Super (although it includes details of that part of the franchise). Anyway, if you are a fan of Dragon Ball Z, and you like transmigration stories, this is the fanfic that I recommend the most.
what are you doing? read the fanfiction read it now its actually pretty good
entertaining so far but im quite confused why the main character started talking and thinking like raditz and talking as if he actually lived raditz experiences when in truth he merely took over his body after being beaten
a good one....and the only complete dragonball novel i ever read.......thankyou........................................................................
Masterpiece! The main character isn't as naive as the Z fighters but still retains that warrior honor. There's a steady progression, with the main character not being overpowered from the start. Well-implemented enemies provide a challenge to the main character. Overall, it's a pretty good novel.
Es una reseña para conseguir una placa e vista está novela es muy buena se las recomiendo tiene un buen final---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Legazin..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Era un buen fanfic eso sakaksnsnnsksmskskdkdmsnsnskdkjdkdjdnfnfjfkfkffkkfkfkfkrkrnfnfnfnakwifjgjfudjdlsdkdlpdpfkfocjfurkdkkjqjdjdjfjnf fnfnfjdjxkjcjflzlkfkckdfmfoicickrmkf
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I loved this story to the very end but I can't wait for the sequel,well if there's going to be one but all I can say is I'm hoping for one and I still loved this story to the very end.!
good story. there were several instances where I was looking forward to a new chapter and at several points I almost dropped it. but overall, a nice read.
A great concept that was very well done for a while however when the story reaches Cell it starts to feel VERY forced and thats just not my thing.
The fanfic is not bad, but... It's so stupid. Mc thinks he is a legendary super saying when he can use only ikari mode.... Mc is a hypocrite and he thinks he is better than other saiyans (when they can do the same thing, they just need to try)
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The grammar is pretty good and as far as I have read, the story is pretty good and has some surprises here and there. Plus, this raditz is interesting. He is like a fusion of final vegita and broly.If there is anything I think the author should change about this story. It's following the original plot. As of late, the story seems to be following the original with the frieza arc, time travel saga and cell stuff.I don't know about most people, but that's a turn off for me. Rather than following the plot, the story should deviate very much from the original. With everything still there, just moving ina different direction.Basically, I like AUs. So I hope the author would continue showing something although familiar, but diffetent as well.Like maybe a different point of view for instance. After all, the original story never actually explored the universe. They just jumped from planet destroyed to universe destroyer instantly.
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Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
Also I would like to order a novel about the limitless series/movie if anyone feels smart enough to do so. (25€/2months) 20 chapters of 3k/5k word I only have two requirements the man must be neutral/evil not good guy and he must sleep with at least 3 celebrities Louane, Ingrid chauvin and Alice Taglioni (yes the guy is French) you can make it a dark version of hollywood king if you want
was going great until our mc decided to go full on emo edgelord for no reason on Satan, srsly what will that accomplish? why would he even want the champion title? he can get the money himself no?
write 3 good i think? Downloading 4 chapters, one per day, very good, the development of the story is not really great, 80 chapters, I did not see anything new, only an additional character doing some things and taking the role of Goku. I was expecting something better, especially the Planet Namek event. I did not feel that it was exciting. You could have made it better. Character design 2 Reason ? Because it is one character, there is really nothing else, and it is somewhat naive. I love evil characters and plots. The background of World 3 is nothing new. There was some explanation, but it still did not leave your own touch, and this is a pity.
this fanfic is great but at chapter 34 he suddenly have a child out of nowhere with a women he met at chapter 33... this ruin the story for me but can someone tell me if this is still worth reading?
Membuka SPOILER I have not read the ff yet. but i have a question is this a MTL ? cause I have seen a mtl with the same title
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A long time ago, Bardock had wished upon a dragon, a wish that made sure his children, Raditz and Goku thrive. This wish, sadly was nullified as the brothers fought and ended up perishing together. This book will show what the older brother could have accomplished, if he had survived his fateful bout against his younger sibling.