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Hmm~~ 10 Chapters in, and I'll drop my review now! To start off with, I'd like to say that the novel starts off in a rough sense. From a massive lore dump to a highly fast-paced flow, where one might get confused if they were to read fast. The biggest problem I have with this is that the development of our MC ends up suffering quite a bit as there is a lack of scenes which takes time to develop memorable memories of the growth of our MC at the start. There's a lack of emotion, I'd say, though it's more on a personal note as my biggest wish is to see more dialogues and interactions between characters in the novel. Regardless, that's mostly the main problem I have, Overall, this story has a large potential, especially when we start touching on the main part of the story; "Towers". The writing quality flows well and one may pick up a few new words when reading. It's simple to read, and easy to follow the flow, Though, at times, it may be abrupt due to how fast Volume 1 went, In any case, OWA has put a lot of effort into this novel by pushing out daily updates and to ensuring a nice quality read. So keep up the great work!
Ok, let's begin with starting that this novel description in detail is unreal. If I have to compare this novel descriptive ability, then it's on par with "Lord of the Mysteries". Everything was explained in precise detail and so was the action that allows you to have imagery of what the scene was like. Writing Quality- 5/5, As I've said, this novel's grammar is above-average and could be on par with some of the top novels. There wasn't a paragraph or sentence that I read have some problems with it. Not to mention, the author is capable of using some high vocabulary words and it amazed me. Stability of Updates- This is a more straightforward point and it's 5/5. The novel is updated every day, so unless the author decides to take a hiatus, the rating shall remain at 5. Story Development- 5/5, I know people might think I'm just bootlicking the author, but no. Why I give this a 5/5 because of the detailed prelude of the first volume that gives us the background that we need to understand what is going on and what the novel is about. Not to mention, the author was able to create a character, namely, the grandma, and gave us a realistic feel of her character being real. It didn't even take me a few minutes before I was immersed in the storyline and connected to the character. Note: once you finish the prelude, then you will understand what I mean. I can't give many spoilers because it'll ruin the fun for you. Character Design- 4/5, Although the main character, Jackson and his grandma was well created and managed to immerse me, there were simply too many characters introduced in the latter part. It was overwhelming at times that I don't even remember who's who and what was her role again in the story. It just kind of feel a bit lackluster since we didn't receive as much detail and background of the character compared to the Main Character and his grandma. Hopefully, in the latter chapters, the author can continue to introduce the character slowly and let the reader have a breather to get to know the character well before storming off to another introduction. World Background- 5/5, The world is described beautifully in the prelude and already gave a glimpse of what the world had become and how it's beginning to operate. I especially love the part where the author spends a lot of attention in detail regarding how humans have lost their advanced technology and kind of regressed to medieval kind of times. And a bonus point is added for the clever usage of Warlord which is similar to history where Warlords abused their power and take control of lands. TLDR: Overall, the novel is definitely at the top percentile with its well-constructed story and detailed explanation of actions from the main character, Jackson or Jax. On top of that, there are little to zero grammatical mistakes and you can read smoothly. Though, if you are the type to not enjoy novels such as "Lord of the Mysteries", then the attention to detail might bore you. This novel takes the slow pace road and doesn't rush things which is great. This was reviewed by a Doraemon on December 14, 2022
I can probably tell from the description, but just to be sure, is this a harem novel? B———————————————————->
Kurisu is not a human but an angel in my eyes. I was absolutely entranced while reading this book. It was like being transported to a realm of pure knowledge and understanding. The words in the chapters were like a key to unlocking my mind, sending me into a state of enlightenment and transcendence. I felt like a wise sage, gaining new insights and perspectives with each turn of the chapter. The author's writing was simply divine. It was like they had a direct line to my innermost thoughts and were able to put them into words. Each chapter was a new journey filled with wisdom, insights, and deep understanding that left me in awe. But this book was more than just a collection of facts and figures. It was an actual work of art. The author masterfully crafted each sentence and paragraph to build up to a profound realization that left me speechless. It was like being on a journey of self-discovery, with each page bringing a new understanding of the world and my place in it.
is this one of those novels in which MC lost his parents in the childhood and after becoming strong i.e. after some decades suddenly his parents reappears they became a happy loving family ? Because this setting seems kinda forced as having lost ones parents in the childhood, people can't remember what happened when they were one or two years old therefore after a few decades I don't think there will be any kind of attachment between them and if they meet each other after such a long time, there will be only awkwardness. So, this is really a forced setting. So Author can you clear this doubt about this novel whether this also has this type of setting or not ?
It's got cool descriptions and I'm loving the story so far. It's writing style is pretty neat, but what I liked the most it's the cover, it's stunningly beautiful and it compliments one's imagination. It's so easy to be carried away by the beautiful scenery!
This book is awesome! I can hardly find any fault. The rate of update is good! Two per day! I was really immersed in that world of yours. And if there is one thing that you should take note in this novel. It's that it's unique! The Author is really good, no topographical errors. I highly recommend this book, especially to those that are looking for something New!
There are spoilers in this review please read with caution :) Based on the 10 chapters of the novel that I have read, it is clear that the world building is well thought out and immersive. The setting of the story, Duskgate, is a city surrounded by stone walls that is built on top of an ancient tower known as God's Tower. The existence of these towers, which can be found throughout the world, has had a profound impact on society and has led to the formation of organizations like The Climber's Association, which is focused on ascending the towers. The characters in the novel are also well-developed and dynamic. Jackson, the protagonist, is a strong and determined individual who has faced numerous challenges throughout his life, including the disappearance of his father and the death of his grandmother. Despite these tragedies, he remains determined to uncover the truth and find his place in the world. One aspect that could have been improved upon in the novel is the pacing. At times, the story feels slow and dragged out, particularly in the earlier chapters. However, the action and tension pick up significantly as the story progresses, making for a more engaging and thrilling read. Again this is my opinion based on the 10th chapter. Overall, the world building and characters in the novel are well-crafted and provide a solid foundation for the story. Some tightening up of the pacing would have made for a more cohesive and enjoyable reading experience. One quote from the novel that particularly stands out is when Jackson's father writes in his diary, "You will find all the answers at the top of God's Tower." The mystery surrounding Jackson's father is an interesting and intriguing aspect of the story. It is clear that his father has been absent for much of Jackson's life, but there are hints that he may still be alive and that there are forces preventing him from returning home. The mention of God's Tower and the clues left behind in his father's diary suggest that there may be a deeper mystery at play, possibly involving the towers and the forces that control them. This adds a layer of mystery and intrigue to the story and leaves readers wanting to know more. Characteristics of Jackson in my perspective: Jackson seems to be a determined and resilient individual who has faced a lot of hardship in his life. He has lost his father and grandmother and has been forced to live in an orphanage, where he has been subjected to physical labor and dangerous tasks. Despite these challenges, he remains determined to find his missing grandmother and uncover the truth about his father's disappearance. He is also described as being physically fit and skilled in martial arts, as he is shown practicing with wooden sticks in the courtyard. Additionally, he seems to be kind and empathetic, as he is concerned about the well-being of his fellow orphans and is willing to help them in any way he can. Overall, Jackson seems to be a strong and resourceful character who is not afraid to face adversity and is driven to uncover the truth.
Seeing that thick review from Idczhen, I decided to give this novel a chance and sure enough, I felt the vibe of "Lord of the Mysteries" when I started reading the first chapter. The actions and description of the character was so vivid that I actually thought they were real people. Honestly, it was a shocker to me to see such writing skills in Webnovel.
So far so good. Quite excited to see how this plays out from the first 19 so far.
the story line is good and th world building is fantastic so i like the book very much. The writing is done fabulously so full stars for that. as for character design i like to see MC a little at the start so four Comment - Don't read anymore review and just dig in the book, you'll love it.
Another excellent work by our One_Winged_Angel!! The prose flows well, the scenes are vivid and descriptive. The pacing is well thought out, and the subject matter is very interesting. I'm eager to see where this one goes!! Keep it up.
I feel so privileged to be able to read this novel from the very beginning 😍 As always, OWA's descriptions are unmatched. When I read each word it doesn't feel like he's having to force himself to be descriptive, it comes very naturally. This is a page turner (or scroller?). I can't help but be drawn in by the storyline and beg for the next part at the end of each chapter. I've been on an emotional roller coaster already in the few chapters that are out so far. The author's works are always worth the read, but this one has another layer that's keeping me consistently coming back for more with each daily release! 🤩🤩🤩
Almost every single thing is described here in the novel. Excellent writing which makes the readers stay glued to this book likes he's learning for an examination. I love this novel and I'll learn something interesting from it along the line.
A freaking masterpiece is all I have to say. The quality is overall practically perfect across the board. The only thing I have to say about this work is some things might be too detailed for my taste, but that is my personal opinion. Keep up the good work, good sir!
A very impressive read, the story really draws you in with every paragraph, from the start of a story to the history of the world, Terra. Excellent writing and very realistic situations, just from the start of the story you read about an apocalype and 21 mysterious warriors that defended the planet. Even interesting is the concept of monsters and towers adapted into the story. This story really puts you at the edge of your seat. And it continues to do so.
The novel itself is really good and almost every single detail you could think of was described in every part of the story which is really great in my opinion. The story of the novel is unique but for me there is also a similar feeling of when I read the manhwa, "Ranker Who Lives a Second Time" since Jackson is looking for his dad and stuff. What surprised me the most was how quickly the story went dark when Jackson lost his only family member and I feel there is a high chance of a dark mc here. But all in all the novel looks great from the start, it's likeable and enjoyable and if you have the time, you should definitely read this novel.
Honesty is the best policy and I honestly say that I see no problem with this novel. I've officially fallen in love with the author's writing style and I one-sidedly declare him as my Supreme Master. There nothing to say about the book. Just friggin read it and you'll fall in love too. Peace!!
This is one of the best novel i've ever read recently. Story development and writing quality is so good. It's very easy to read and understand. I'm jealous of your skills. Please update faster One_Winged_Angel Sensei.
I can only describe this story with one word Wow. This is awsome, its beautiful
Shameless Author here! I want to thank everyone for their support with the launch of GTS and I am happy to say that things are progressing smoothly! A couple of notes I want to point out: First, the pacing for the first dozen chapters is going to be much faster than than the rest of the novel. I wanted to put a small prologue together to lay the foundations for our MC, Jax. It will slow down as we begin to explore God’s Tower and all the dangers and perils that comes with it. Second, there is a system tag that hasn’t been utilized up to chapter 12 and it will remain pretty scarce throughout the story. I don’t want to flood my chapters with a lot of system text. Third, once the novel gets contracted and chapters go premium, the daily upload schedule will increase to 2 daily chapters with bonus chapter incentives. Fourth, this novel will not contain a harem. There will be multiple potential characters that Jax can end up with, but there will not be any cheating and he will end up with one of them. Can you figure out who it is going to be? Fifth, thank you for taking the time to read this review and for checking out my novel! Your support means everything to me!
Hmm~~ 10 Chapters in, and I'll drop my review now! To start off with, I'd like to say that the novel starts off in a rough sense. From a massive lore dump to a highly fast-paced flow, where one might get confused if they were to read fast. The biggest problem I have with this is that the development of our MC ends up suffering quite a bit as there is a lack of scenes which takes time to develop memorable memories of the growth of our MC at the start. There's a lack of emotion, I'd say, though it's more on a personal note as my biggest wish is to see more dialogues and interactions between characters in the novel. Regardless, that's mostly the main problem I have, Overall, this story has a large potential, especially when we start touching on the main part of the story; "Towers". The writing quality flows well and one may pick up a few new words when reading. It's simple to read, and easy to follow the flow, Though, at times, it may be abrupt due to how fast Volume 1 went, In any case, OWA has put a lot of effort into this novel by pushing out daily updates and to ensuring a nice quality read. So keep up the great work!
Ok, let's begin with starting that this novel description in detail is unreal. If I have to compare this novel descriptive ability, then it's on par with "Lord of the Mysteries". Everything was explained in precise detail and so was the action that allows you to have imagery of what the scene was like. Writing Quality- 5/5, As I've said, this novel's grammar is above-average and could be on par with some of the top novels. There wasn't a paragraph or sentence that I read have some problems with it. Not to mention, the author is capable of using some high vocabulary words and it amazed me. Stability of Updates- This is a more straightforward point and it's 5/5. The novel is updated every day, so unless the author decides to take a hiatus, the rating shall remain at 5. Story Development- 5/5, I know people might think I'm just bootlicking the author, but no. Why I give this a 5/5 because of the detailed prelude of the first volume that gives us the background that we need to understand what is going on and what the novel is about. Not to mention, the author was able to create a character, namely, the grandma, and gave us a realistic feel of her character being real. It didn't even take me a few minutes before I was immersed in the storyline and connected to the character. Note: once you finish the prelude, then you will understand what I mean. I can't give many spoilers because it'll ruin the fun for you. Character Design- 4/5, Although the main character, Jackson and his grandma was well created and managed to immerse me, there were simply too many characters introduced in the latter part. It was overwhelming at times that I don't even remember who's who and what was her role again in the story. It just kind of feel a bit lackluster since we didn't receive as much detail and background of the character compared to the Main Character and his grandma. Hopefully, in the latter chapters, the author can continue to introduce the character slowly and let the reader have a breather to get to know the character well before storming off to another introduction. World Background- 5/5, The world is described beautifully in the prelude and already gave a glimpse of what the world had become and how it's beginning to operate. I especially love the part where the author spends a lot of attention in detail regarding how humans have lost their advanced technology and kind of regressed to medieval kind of times. And a bonus point is added for the clever usage of Warlord which is similar to history where Warlords abused their power and take control of lands. TLDR: Overall, the novel is definitely at the top percentile with its well-constructed story and detailed explanation of actions from the main character, Jackson or Jax. On top of that, there are little to zero grammatical mistakes and you can read smoothly. Though, if you are the type to not enjoy novels such as "Lord of the Mysteries", then the attention to detail might bore you. This novel takes the slow pace road and doesn't rush things which is great. This was reviewed by a Doraemon on December 14, 2022
I can probably tell from the description, but just to be sure, is this a harem novel? B———————————————————->
Kurisu is not a human but an angel in my eyes. I was absolutely entranced while reading this book. It was like being transported to a realm of pure knowledge and understanding. The words in the chapters were like a key to unlocking my mind, sending me into a state of enlightenment and transcendence. I felt like a wise sage, gaining new insights and perspectives with each turn of the chapter. The author's writing was simply divine. It was like they had a direct line to my innermost thoughts and were able to put them into words. Each chapter was a new journey filled with wisdom, insights, and deep understanding that left me in awe. But this book was more than just a collection of facts and figures. It was an actual work of art. The author masterfully crafted each sentence and paragraph to build up to a profound realization that left me speechless. It was like being on a journey of self-discovery, with each page bringing a new understanding of the world and my place in it.
is this one of those novels in which MC lost his parents in the childhood and after becoming strong i.e. after some decades suddenly his parents reappears they became a happy loving family ? Because this setting seems kinda forced as having lost ones parents in the childhood, people can't remember what happened when they were one or two years old therefore after a few decades I don't think there will be any kind of attachment between them and if they meet each other after such a long time, there will be only awkwardness. So, this is really a forced setting. So Author can you clear this doubt about this novel whether this also has this type of setting or not ?
It's got cool descriptions and I'm loving the story so far. It's writing style is pretty neat, but what I liked the most it's the cover, it's stunningly beautiful and it compliments one's imagination. It's so easy to be carried away by the beautiful scenery!
This book is awesome! I can hardly find any fault. The rate of update is good! Two per day! I was really immersed in that world of yours. And if there is one thing that you should take note in this novel. It's that it's unique! The Author is really good, no topographical errors. I highly recommend this book, especially to those that are looking for something New!
There are spoilers in this review please read with caution :) Based on the 10 chapters of the novel that I have read, it is clear that the world building is well thought out and immersive. The setting of the story, Duskgate, is a city surrounded by stone walls that is built on top of an ancient tower known as God's Tower. The existence of these towers, which can be found throughout the world, has had a profound impact on society and has led to the formation of organizations like The Climber's Association, which is focused on ascending the towers. The characters in the novel are also well-developed and dynamic. Jackson, the protagonist, is a strong and determined individual who has faced numerous challenges throughout his life, including the disappearance of his father and the death of his grandmother. Despite these tragedies, he remains determined to uncover the truth and find his place in the world. One aspect that could have been improved upon in the novel is the pacing. At times, the story feels slow and dragged out, particularly in the earlier chapters. However, the action and tension pick up significantly as the story progresses, making for a more engaging and thrilling read. Again this is my opinion based on the 10th chapter. Overall, the world building and characters in the novel are well-crafted and provide a solid foundation for the story. Some tightening up of the pacing would have made for a more cohesive and enjoyable reading experience. One quote from the novel that particularly stands out is when Jackson's father writes in his diary, "You will find all the answers at the top of God's Tower." The mystery surrounding Jackson's father is an interesting and intriguing aspect of the story. It is clear that his father has been absent for much of Jackson's life, but there are hints that he may still be alive and that there are forces preventing him from returning home. The mention of God's Tower and the clues left behind in his father's diary suggest that there may be a deeper mystery at play, possibly involving the towers and the forces that control them. This adds a layer of mystery and intrigue to the story and leaves readers wanting to know more. Characteristics of Jackson in my perspective: Jackson seems to be a determined and resilient individual who has faced a lot of hardship in his life. He has lost his father and grandmother and has been forced to live in an orphanage, where he has been subjected to physical labor and dangerous tasks. Despite these challenges, he remains determined to find his missing grandmother and uncover the truth about his father's disappearance. He is also described as being physically fit and skilled in martial arts, as he is shown practicing with wooden sticks in the courtyard. Additionally, he seems to be kind and empathetic, as he is concerned about the well-being of his fellow orphans and is willing to help them in any way he can. Overall, Jackson seems to be a strong and resourceful character who is not afraid to face adversity and is driven to uncover the truth.
Seeing that thick review from Idczhen, I decided to give this novel a chance and sure enough, I felt the vibe of "Lord of the Mysteries" when I started reading the first chapter. The actions and description of the character was so vivid that I actually thought they were real people. Honestly, it was a shocker to me to see such writing skills in Webnovel.
So far so good. Quite excited to see how this plays out from the first 19 so far.
the story line is good and th world building is fantastic so i like the book very much. The writing is done fabulously so full stars for that. as for character design i like to see MC a little at the start so four Comment - Don't read anymore review and just dig in the book, you'll love it.
Another excellent work by our One_Winged_Angel!! The prose flows well, the scenes are vivid and descriptive. The pacing is well thought out, and the subject matter is very interesting. I'm eager to see where this one goes!! Keep it up.
I feel so privileged to be able to read this novel from the very beginning 😍 As always, OWA's descriptions are unmatched. When I read each word it doesn't feel like he's having to force himself to be descriptive, it comes very naturally. This is a page turner (or scroller?). I can't help but be drawn in by the storyline and beg for the next part at the end of each chapter. I've been on an emotional roller coaster already in the few chapters that are out so far. The author's works are always worth the read, but this one has another layer that's keeping me consistently coming back for more with each daily release! 🤩🤩🤩
Almost every single thing is described here in the novel. Excellent writing which makes the readers stay glued to this book likes he's learning for an examination. I love this novel and I'll learn something interesting from it along the line.
A freaking masterpiece is all I have to say. The quality is overall practically perfect across the board. The only thing I have to say about this work is some things might be too detailed for my taste, but that is my personal opinion. Keep up the good work, good sir!
A very impressive read, the story really draws you in with every paragraph, from the start of a story to the history of the world, Terra. Excellent writing and very realistic situations, just from the start of the story you read about an apocalype and 21 mysterious warriors that defended the planet. Even interesting is the concept of monsters and towers adapted into the story. This story really puts you at the edge of your seat. And it continues to do so.
The novel itself is really good and almost every single detail you could think of was described in every part of the story which is really great in my opinion. The story of the novel is unique but for me there is also a similar feeling of when I read the manhwa, "Ranker Who Lives a Second Time" since Jackson is looking for his dad and stuff. What surprised me the most was how quickly the story went dark when Jackson lost his only family member and I feel there is a high chance of a dark mc here. But all in all the novel looks great from the start, it's likeable and enjoyable and if you have the time, you should definitely read this novel.
Honesty is the best policy and I honestly say that I see no problem with this novel. I've officially fallen in love with the author's writing style and I one-sidedly declare him as my Supreme Master. There nothing to say about the book. Just friggin read it and you'll fall in love too. Peace!!
This is one of the best novel i've ever read recently. Story development and writing quality is so good. It's very easy to read and understand. I'm jealous of your skills. Please update faster One_Winged_Angel Sensei.
I can only describe this story with one word Wow. This is awsome, its beautiful
Shameless Author here! I want to thank everyone for their support with the launch of GTS and I am happy to say that things are progressing smoothly! A couple of notes I want to point out: First, the pacing for the first dozen chapters is going to be much faster than than the rest of the novel. I wanted to put a small prologue together to lay the foundations for our MC, Jax. It will slow down as we begin to explore God’s Tower and all the dangers and perils that comes with it. Second, there is a system tag that hasn’t been utilized up to chapter 12 and it will remain pretty scarce throughout the story. I don’t want to flood my chapters with a lot of system text. Third, once the novel gets contracted and chapters go premium, the daily upload schedule will increase to 2 daily chapters with bonus chapter incentives. Fourth, this novel will not contain a harem. There will be multiple potential characters that Jax can end up with, but there will not be any cheating and he will end up with one of them. Can you figure out who it is going to be? Fifth, thank you for taking the time to read this review and for checking out my novel! Your support means everything to me!