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The novel is okay although the writing quality in your work could be better since there were a bunch of grammar mistakes I saw but after all of that it seemed pretty good. The character designs and the way you put out their emotions and actions are great, the pace is good for me but I have been told that I like fast paced novels so the other reviews might be correct about it being fast paced. The world building is good, it's very detailed so I definitely think this novel could become better if you work on your grammar or get something or someone to edit it. All in all it's a good novel and I hope it will continue to improve as it's story goes on.
I think this story has the potential. However, I think it would be better if you could give more description to the situation, especially in the first chapter where most of were filled with conversation. I have no comments regarding grammar, since english is not my first too. I hope you the best.
It's a good novel however, your writing quality could be even more improved brother. Story development looks good. Chapter lengths are good. Character design is very good too. Keep up brother!
I feel like the book has potential. the authors first language isn't English so I understand the grammar and punctuation errors. But I feel like the book is too fast paced. I personally like their surroundings and features of characters to be described. not because it makes a bigger book but it allows me to imagine the characters and scenes better. if the author fixes the world building and description issue, I am willing to help being his makeshift editor since English is my first language. for now, I'll just leave it in my library. if there are changes, I'll update this review.
The writing quality is quite good, contrary to the other review I've read so far. The story is interesting as there seems to be something going on all the time. Every character have been fleshed out greatly and none of them look like they've been made in a second's notice. The world background still needs time to be shown well so I got no comments on that. Update stability might have to be improved. Adding the book to my collection
The novel is okay although the writing quality in your work could be better since there were a bunch of grammar mistakes I saw but after all of that it seemed pretty good. The character designs and the way you put out their emotions and actions are great, the pace is good for me but I have been told that I like fast paced novels so the other reviews might be correct about it being fast paced. The world building is good, it's very detailed so I definitely think this novel could become better if you work on your grammar or get something or someone to edit it. All in all it's a good novel and I hope it will continue to improve as it's story goes on.
I think this story has the potential. However, I think it would be better if you could give more description to the situation, especially in the first chapter where most of were filled with conversation. I have no comments regarding grammar, since english is not my first too. I hope you the best.
It's a good novel however, your writing quality could be even more improved brother. Story development looks good. Chapter lengths are good. Character design is very good too. Keep up brother!
I feel like the book has potential. the authors first language isn't English so I understand the grammar and punctuation errors. But I feel like the book is too fast paced. I personally like their surroundings and features of characters to be described. not because it makes a bigger book but it allows me to imagine the characters and scenes better. if the author fixes the world building and description issue, I am willing to help being his makeshift editor since English is my first language. for now, I'll just leave it in my library. if there are changes, I'll update this review.
The writing quality is quite good, contrary to the other review I've read so far. The story is interesting as there seems to be something going on all the time. Every character have been fleshed out greatly and none of them look like they've been made in a second's notice. The world background still needs time to be shown well so I got no comments on that. Update stability might have to be improved. Adding the book to my collection