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well... I perceive wolves and vampires but since this is just the third chapter, I better hold my horses. the delivery is beautiful and I'm looking forward to better content.
For a book with POV, it was nice and I didn't get lost. The description of characters and setting was great. The mansion was beautiful, elegant and mysterious. The Fl's identity is still hidden. The problem is the punctuations and spacing and I hope the writer takes note. So as the use of small letters. But overall, it is a great book. Can't wait for the fantasy to start!
Nice plot and great foreshadowing and character development. Few Grammertical errors found, like the commas and full stops. Overall, it's a nice read.
well... I perceive wolves and vampires but since this is just the third chapter, I better hold my horses. the delivery is beautiful and I'm looking forward to better content.
For a book with POV, it was nice and I didn't get lost. The description of characters and setting was great. The mansion was beautiful, elegant and mysterious. The Fl's identity is still hidden. The problem is the punctuations and spacing and I hope the writer takes note. So as the use of small letters. But overall, it is a great book. Can't wait for the fantasy to start!
Nice plot and great foreshadowing and character development. Few Grammertical errors found, like the commas and full stops. Overall, it's a nice read.