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While I give 5 Stars, for me personaly there are not enough chapters releasing.🤣 Well can't say anything though being an author is hard. As of when I am writing this review I finished reading chapter 146. So as some might already see I really like this novel, but will give my best not to be biased. Pros: --> Class Whe need to absolutely talk about the class. Dungeon Master is just such an amazing class in this novel that this class alone without any other player and only him and his class is enough to write a great novel. From inner working, in the dungeon to how he needs knowledge, Evolution, usw. is just amazing and since I don't want to spoiler too much read it yourself. --> time mc is reborn one year after the game launch so all others are a year head of him. This gives him huge disadvantages, but it also Shows us how he wants to catch up and another Perspektive to the usual Storyline in an mmorpg novel. --> evil mc I wouldn't directly say he is evil but many propably would give him in this category. Anyway I like his Personality and if you are not 100% in moralitys shakles bis personality shouldn't be a Problem for you since of right now, you can only really speak of one really evil moment, and we must say that he is a Gangster more or less at the Moment. --> relationships his relationships are fairly unique as of now with his Brother and assistant. This spices things up quite nicely. -->character growth To be true many decisions of mc at the beginning are questionable, his personality at some points unlikeable but all this has a turningpoint very early on when he realises those things himself. So we have a character with a growing personality which is always a nice trait to have. Besides what is also very important side characters also have this growth👍 really great Job author. -->flexibility even though he is a reincarnator, not everything works out fine for him. But he can adapt to the Situation quite well. -->Smooth story Everything feels extremely Smoothe even though not everything works fine for the mc. I just can't comprehend how the author made it so nicely balanced. -->side characters the hated children of authors, but whe don't have that here. Every sidecharacter from his brother, assistant, dungeon assistant, or even the fat City Leader of his first City have their own personalitys, Motives, Background usw. Overall they are great and we even have here and there 1 or 2 chapters of what is going on with only sidecharacters involved. Which is just the right amount. -->snakes this is a completely personal opinion but I love snakes and poison, but authors don't really think they are worth it to Become one of the main themes of the novel. So I am really glad to have them here. Many thanks author. So to the cons.... to be serious I don't really have any but since there should be ones I will pick out what I can but they are either minor ones or don't represent my own opinion. -->early buttlerfly The buttergly effect is a little too early into the story and a little random for me but it is only a few chapters since then and I am surfe author will let is know in a future chapter why it happend. -->evil mc while not a Problem for me a lot of people just can't or might not like a mc who is not completely innocent. So while theoretically is a pro lets also put it in cons -->slow leveling and building is relativ slow, but I like it slow in this novel and even hope it to be even slower. But there are people who can't appreciate it propably so lets also put it into cons. -->early personality mc mcs early personality is a little trash, while it is Part of the development of the mc there will propably be people who will stop reading it because of it while Passing on a gem. So this is a personal Con because of Pity for all the people who drop it too early. Ok this concludes my review. Overall I heavily recommend this Novel, and I am Sure you won't regret reading it. But make your own opinion of it. ***Note to Author*** If you every read this, Thank you for such a great work, I always wanted to be an Author myself but my grammar just sucks too much. So I have a little bit of an idea how hard it is to write a book in generall, and I can only imagine how hard it is to write such a good one. I feel a little Pity to only find this book so late, so I was unable to join the Journey of this story from the Start but I am happy to be Part of it now. Please keep up the fantastic work and don't drop the novel. I am sure all people who like the novel (me included) can understand if you need a break and it is okay to not Stress yourself over Updates. New chapters are nice but quality is better than quantity and while we all hope for more chapters, this is purely because we like the novel so much and it is not that we want to pressure you. with kind regards Sinone
A quand la prochaine sortie ? Merci. Bon développement de l'histoire avec le concept de maître de donjon et de civilisation. Hâte de découvrir les prochains chapitres !!!
it's an enjoyable and fun read. it's more of story which you imagine before you sleep where you do cool things but with proper background. latest chapter entry of 10th deamon prince is absolutely hype with his entry in the war to rock music in back. everything is so cool. just read it and enjoy. although this can be bit biased review since I really like it's Indian nick names of gangsters and reference. nice work
is this story still going on?I really like this story and really hope that this story will continue soon.
the story is nice so far only got to chapter 37 at the moment but the main issue that can make it hard to read are the sentences and grammar seem kind of messed up which may simply be because of a translation problem but overall its a good story
.................................................................................................................................................starting good then you just ruining it
what are you doing brother, this novel is on dungeon master not some sit sat . there are few chapters on being a dungeon master please stay on topic.
First time review. This story is quite good despite of slow update but the greatest point about this novel is it's dungeon system. I must say I'm very impressed with the mechanic of dungeon buiding in this novel, with this system we basically create our own dungeon from scratch with no dungeon like the other and the monster that we create not buy from some system. It kind of make me have expectation that other dungeon master novel have this system too. I really hope to read more of this
brother, your novel is best, but not the consistant one so please write daily.
You get the jist from summaries and other reviews, so instead, I'll say this. The quality is pretty bad. Lots of spelling errors, grammar issues, and random words where there shouldn't be. Needs an editor badly. Story is great. I'm a sucker for these plot points. Lots of interesting developments I haven't seen in other novels. Hasn't really churned deep as of yet. Characters are kinda flat. It's to be expected since this kind of story doesn't/can't focus too heavily on any character other than MC Lots of bonus chaps Real world isn't really explained at all, but you can guess some things from context clues. VR world is explained somewhat well. We don't know too much about how a normal player makes their way through the game, more focused on MC and dungeon master class.
id love to give it a better rating as the concept is what attracted me, but between the poor translation and incessant swearing (im not against swearing but there is a stupid amount of it needlessly and thats just early on) it made it too annoying to keep reading. Hope it gets better but 🤷♂️
Love the story and background but grammar within the chapters is bad and obviously there was no editing or revision of chapters.
Well it’s a classic Chinese sounding novel very poor grammar, background characters not acting like people, side characters being dolts while the mc seems smart but does incredibly stupid things. Everything about this novel is average or lower it’s nothing good as it seems more money grabbing then for a quick buck then anything. Grammar never improves neither does the story really
As much as I liked the initial premise of the story, the way that the author seemed to put exponentially less effort into writing complete words chapter by chapter, I felt forced to give up reading by chapter 15 . I have read other works by this author as well and I was not disappointed with those at all, however this one is no good from a literate reader perspective .
The overall lack of proper grammar here is super jarring. It's not as a "translated badly" type jar; but more along the lines of, "this was made by a child" Would recommend the author to keep going.. but revisit as you grow and understand sentence structure better.
At first this story was an ok story with a lot of grammatical errors and a messed up mc. Then I got to the locked chapters and I read it for free. Tell me why this dude became a bipolar edge lord, whose every action makes me cringe to eternity. He was also acting like a stupid idiot and all of the sudden the author said he had planned everything about the meeting and all that and it’s so forced, like it literally makes no sense. Any way don’t read if you don’t want to feel like your brain dead.
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I cant get past the poor english grammatical errors. I know the author is from india but it really bothers me. The lack of vocabulary and sentence structures make it feel like the characters are all 5 year olds. "Master, what master call Yunyun for?" Grave looked at Yunyun and speak. "Playing time is over."
hahahaa, everything aside... the indian tone in this novel is Hillarious ch 14/15 were amazing 🤣🤣🤣😭😭
Interesting premise and work the author has created however that cannot redeem the story from the MC. The MC lacks any appeal to me and the story seems to actively make you want to dislike him. Not a fan
This is a really fun regression novel. The biggest differences are, it's super VR mmorpg in India, where our MC gets a dungeon class. Get ready to watch the MC use his foreknowledge to climb out of extreme poverty and become a respectable gangster. Story has a big helping of Bollywood and Indian humor. So don't be culture shocked and enjoy the creative process.
Mom can we have 'rebirth of the strongest dungeon master' No. We have 'rebirth of the strongest dungeon master' at home. At home:
Good really, good, as a pureblooded german I love the combination of dungeons and gaming genre. The whole story development moved in refreshing out of norm directions. Aufwidersen meine freunde!
Everything's fine, was an interesting read. Only gripe is that author should get an editor because some of the grammar here or there can be clunky. Besides that I enjoyed the story so far.
Alright, I like this novel, it feels very fresh when compared to the rest of the genre with its developments. I would give it five stars, but there is one problem the author not knowing the principle of show vs tell. Otherwise, it's a nice story.
A good addicting read. Characters are good and fleshed out. Some comedy mixed with seriousness makes the story tense and relaxing to read. I recdomend this story to anyone wanting to read a solid novel. My only gripe is not enough chapters.
fun to read, this novel follow the common video games novel settings with some interesting twist here and there. Writing quality can be improved but it easy to read not any huge upsetting mistake. Love the story switch that happen around 33-34th chapter. There are some funny interesting chapter. I do say try reading till 40th chapter, you will find that how it starts from a cliche and then it keep getting more and more interesting with some unique development. Definitely worth to try.
So here I am with my shameless review. Mc will get reincarnated in time to play Liberty Online. Now, the catch is he will only get reincarnated after 1 year of the game launch. So you will not get one player face-slapping all others or girls screaming I want your monkey. No instead you will get some interesting plot development. Oh yeah, I forget to mention that mc will have a dungeon that he needs to protect at all costs. If you want to try something new with old touch sure try my new novel first few chapters will hint to you what to expect but those were not even proper trailers so after reading those if you like even one of the points interesting point then go ahead and read more. Tyyy to those readers who support me from the start. ( enough rambling). Byyyyyye will see you in the chapter comment and PS donation list. [img=faceslap] (shameless heheehe)
While I give 5 Stars, for me personaly there are not enough chapters releasing.🤣 Well can't say anything though being an author is hard. As of when I am writing this review I finished reading chapter 146. So as some might already see I really like this novel, but will give my best not to be biased. Pros: --> Class Whe need to absolutely talk about the class. Dungeon Master is just such an amazing class in this novel that this class alone without any other player and only him and his class is enough to write a great novel. From inner working, in the dungeon to how he needs knowledge, Evolution, usw. is just amazing and since I don't want to spoiler too much read it yourself. --> time mc is reborn one year after the game launch so all others are a year head of him. This gives him huge disadvantages, but it also Shows us how he wants to catch up and another Perspektive to the usual Storyline in an mmorpg novel. --> evil mc I wouldn't directly say he is evil but many propably would give him in this category. Anyway I like his Personality and if you are not 100% in moralitys shakles bis personality shouldn't be a Problem for you since of right now, you can only really speak of one really evil moment, and we must say that he is a Gangster more or less at the Moment. --> relationships his relationships are fairly unique as of now with his Brother and assistant. This spices things up quite nicely. -->character growth To be true many decisions of mc at the beginning are questionable, his personality at some points unlikeable but all this has a turningpoint very early on when he realises those things himself. So we have a character with a growing personality which is always a nice trait to have. Besides what is also very important side characters also have this growth👍 really great Job author. -->flexibility even though he is a reincarnator, not everything works out fine for him. But he can adapt to the Situation quite well. -->Smooth story Everything feels extremely Smoothe even though not everything works fine for the mc. I just can't comprehend how the author made it so nicely balanced. -->side characters the hated children of authors, but whe don't have that here. Every sidecharacter from his brother, assistant, dungeon assistant, or even the fat City Leader of his first City have their own personalitys, Motives, Background usw. Overall they are great and we even have here and there 1 or 2 chapters of what is going on with only sidecharacters involved. Which is just the right amount. -->snakes this is a completely personal opinion but I love snakes and poison, but authors don't really think they are worth it to Become one of the main themes of the novel. So I am really glad to have them here. Many thanks author. So to the cons.... to be serious I don't really have any but since there should be ones I will pick out what I can but they are either minor ones or don't represent my own opinion. -->early buttlerfly The buttergly effect is a little too early into the story and a little random for me but it is only a few chapters since then and I am surfe author will let is know in a future chapter why it happend. -->evil mc while not a Problem for me a lot of people just can't or might not like a mc who is not completely innocent. So while theoretically is a pro lets also put it in cons -->slow leveling and building is relativ slow, but I like it slow in this novel and even hope it to be even slower. But there are people who can't appreciate it propably so lets also put it into cons. -->early personality mc mcs early personality is a little trash, while it is Part of the development of the mc there will propably be people who will stop reading it because of it while Passing on a gem. So this is a personal Con because of Pity for all the people who drop it too early. Ok this concludes my review. Overall I heavily recommend this Novel, and I am Sure you won't regret reading it. But make your own opinion of it. ***Note to Author*** If you every read this, Thank you for such a great work, I always wanted to be an Author myself but my grammar just sucks too much. So I have a little bit of an idea how hard it is to write a book in generall, and I can only imagine how hard it is to write such a good one. I feel a little Pity to only find this book so late, so I was unable to join the Journey of this story from the Start but I am happy to be Part of it now. Please keep up the fantastic work and don't drop the novel. I am sure all people who like the novel (me included) can understand if you need a break and it is okay to not Stress yourself over Updates. New chapters are nice but quality is better than quantity and while we all hope for more chapters, this is purely because we like the novel so much and it is not that we want to pressure you. with kind regards Sinone
A quand la prochaine sortie ? Merci. Bon développement de l'histoire avec le concept de maître de donjon et de civilisation. Hâte de découvrir les prochains chapitres !!!
it's an enjoyable and fun read. it's more of story which you imagine before you sleep where you do cool things but with proper background. latest chapter entry of 10th deamon prince is absolutely hype with his entry in the war to rock music in back. everything is so cool. just read it and enjoy. although this can be bit biased review since I really like it's Indian nick names of gangsters and reference. nice work
is this story still going on?I really like this story and really hope that this story will continue soon.
the story is nice so far only got to chapter 37 at the moment but the main issue that can make it hard to read are the sentences and grammar seem kind of messed up which may simply be because of a translation problem but overall its a good story
.................................................................................................................................................starting good then you just ruining it
what are you doing brother, this novel is on dungeon master not some sit sat . there are few chapters on being a dungeon master please stay on topic.
First time review. This story is quite good despite of slow update but the greatest point about this novel is it's dungeon system. I must say I'm very impressed with the mechanic of dungeon buiding in this novel, with this system we basically create our own dungeon from scratch with no dungeon like the other and the monster that we create not buy from some system. It kind of make me have expectation that other dungeon master novel have this system too. I really hope to read more of this
brother, your novel is best, but not the consistant one so please write daily.
You get the jist from summaries and other reviews, so instead, I'll say this. The quality is pretty bad. Lots of spelling errors, grammar issues, and random words where there shouldn't be. Needs an editor badly. Story is great. I'm a sucker for these plot points. Lots of interesting developments I haven't seen in other novels. Hasn't really churned deep as of yet. Characters are kinda flat. It's to be expected since this kind of story doesn't/can't focus too heavily on any character other than MC Lots of bonus chaps Real world isn't really explained at all, but you can guess some things from context clues. VR world is explained somewhat well. We don't know too much about how a normal player makes their way through the game, more focused on MC and dungeon master class.
id love to give it a better rating as the concept is what attracted me, but between the poor translation and incessant swearing (im not against swearing but there is a stupid amount of it needlessly and thats just early on) it made it too annoying to keep reading. Hope it gets better but 🤷♂️
Love the story and background but grammar within the chapters is bad and obviously there was no editing or revision of chapters.
Well it’s a classic Chinese sounding novel very poor grammar, background characters not acting like people, side characters being dolts while the mc seems smart but does incredibly stupid things. Everything about this novel is average or lower it’s nothing good as it seems more money grabbing then for a quick buck then anything. Grammar never improves neither does the story really
As much as I liked the initial premise of the story, the way that the author seemed to put exponentially less effort into writing complete words chapter by chapter, I felt forced to give up reading by chapter 15 . I have read other works by this author as well and I was not disappointed with those at all, however this one is no good from a literate reader perspective .
The overall lack of proper grammar here is super jarring. It's not as a "translated badly" type jar; but more along the lines of, "this was made by a child" Would recommend the author to keep going.. but revisit as you grow and understand sentence structure better.
At first this story was an ok story with a lot of grammatical errors and a messed up mc. Then I got to the locked chapters and I read it for free. Tell me why this dude became a bipolar edge lord, whose every action makes me cringe to eternity. He was also acting like a stupid idiot and all of the sudden the author said he had planned everything about the meeting and all that and it’s so forced, like it literally makes no sense. Any way don’t read if you don’t want to feel like your brain dead.
Membuka SPOILER I cant get past the poor english grammatical errors. I know the author is from india but it really bothers me. The lack of vocabulary and sentence structures make it feel like the characters are all 5 year olds. "Master, what master call Yunyun for?" Grave looked at Yunyun and speak. "Playing time is over."
hahahaa, everything aside... the indian tone in this novel is Hillarious ch 14/15 were amazing 🤣🤣🤣😭😭
Interesting premise and work the author has created however that cannot redeem the story from the MC. The MC lacks any appeal to me and the story seems to actively make you want to dislike him. Not a fan
This is a really fun regression novel. The biggest differences are, it's super VR mmorpg in India, where our MC gets a dungeon class. Get ready to watch the MC use his foreknowledge to climb out of extreme poverty and become a respectable gangster. Story has a big helping of Bollywood and Indian humor. So don't be culture shocked and enjoy the creative process.
Mom can we have 'rebirth of the strongest dungeon master' No. We have 'rebirth of the strongest dungeon master' at home. At home:
Good really, good, as a pureblooded german I love the combination of dungeons and gaming genre. The whole story development moved in refreshing out of norm directions. Aufwidersen meine freunde!
Everything's fine, was an interesting read. Only gripe is that author should get an editor because some of the grammar here or there can be clunky. Besides that I enjoyed the story so far.
Alright, I like this novel, it feels very fresh when compared to the rest of the genre with its developments. I would give it five stars, but there is one problem the author not knowing the principle of show vs tell. Otherwise, it's a nice story.
A good addicting read. Characters are good and fleshed out. Some comedy mixed with seriousness makes the story tense and relaxing to read. I recdomend this story to anyone wanting to read a solid novel. My only gripe is not enough chapters.
fun to read, this novel follow the common video games novel settings with some interesting twist here and there. Writing quality can be improved but it easy to read not any huge upsetting mistake. Love the story switch that happen around 33-34th chapter. There are some funny interesting chapter. I do say try reading till 40th chapter, you will find that how it starts from a cliche and then it keep getting more and more interesting with some unique development. Definitely worth to try.
So here I am with my shameless review. Mc will get reincarnated in time to play Liberty Online. Now, the catch is he will only get reincarnated after 1 year of the game launch. So you will not get one player face-slapping all others or girls screaming I want your monkey. No instead you will get some interesting plot development. Oh yeah, I forget to mention that mc will have a dungeon that he needs to protect at all costs. If you want to try something new with old touch sure try my new novel first few chapters will hint to you what to expect but those were not even proper trailers so after reading those if you like even one of the points interesting point then go ahead and read more. Tyyy to those readers who support me from the start. ( enough rambling). Byyyyyye will see you in the chapter comment and PS donation list. [img=faceslap] (shameless heheehe)