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it's a whole different outtake on an RWBY story not an insanity op bot on his way to becoming strong. i like that it show more of the bigger picture
Tons of little grammatical mistakes, but what can I expect from fanfiction these days. Everything else is pretty good. ...................
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Loving the story so far, especially from this perspective from Ironwood. It truly feels like a combination of his original character and a third party. But, onto the reviews! - The writing quality is top-notch, and easily provokes you to keep on reading through the story. - Stability of updates is also quite good. 19 chapters within seven days? That's absolutely amazing! - Story development is equally as good. The characters are younger, and many of them feel similar to how they were in volume 1, before they faced the reality of the world, and the story progresses at a good pace. - Character design and world background sort of merge, which is a nice detail. Characters all fit into their spots around the lore of Remnant, and each fits with their character. The main characters have not changed too far from their originals, albeit with small changes with the core characters, such as the Schnees. Overall, easily a 5/5.
Membuka SPOILER
OC X GLYNDA! .,.,.,...,..,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,..,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.
i have read so many rwby fanfics but this one have a approach that i have not read yet, it's pretty good.🤌
As someone who has long abandoned RWBY and isn't a fan of even its fanfics, i am pretty intetersted in this story. An oc self inserted as Ironwood is very rare and the way how he does it is pretty good.
i found a jewel here .............................................................................................................................
un diseño unico para un protagonista, en ves de empezar de cero como uno nuevo, esta mas orientado en hacer que uno ya echo de desarrolle en otra direccion
it's a whole different outtake on an RWBY story not an insanity op bot on his way to becoming strong. i like that it show more of the bigger picture
Tons of little grammatical mistakes, but what can I expect from fanfiction these days. Everything else is pretty good. ...................
No es para mi No es para mi No es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para miNo es para mi
Loving the story so far, especially from this perspective from Ironwood. It truly feels like a combination of his original character and a third party. But, onto the reviews! - The writing quality is top-notch, and easily provokes you to keep on reading through the story. - Stability of updates is also quite good. 19 chapters within seven days? That's absolutely amazing! - Story development is equally as good. The characters are younger, and many of them feel similar to how they were in volume 1, before they faced the reality of the world, and the story progresses at a good pace. - Character design and world background sort of merge, which is a nice detail. Characters all fit into their spots around the lore of Remnant, and each fits with their character. The main characters have not changed too far from their originals, albeit with small changes with the core characters, such as the Schnees. Overall, easily a 5/5.
Membuka SPOILER OC X GLYNDA! .,.,.,...,..,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,..,,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.
i have read so many rwby fanfics but this one have a approach that i have not read yet, it's pretty good.🤌
As someone who has long abandoned RWBY and isn't a fan of even its fanfics, i am pretty intetersted in this story. An oc self inserted as Ironwood is very rare and the way how he does it is pretty good.
i found a jewel here .............................................................................................................................
un diseño unico para un protagonista, en ves de empezar de cero como uno nuevo, esta mas orientado en hacer que uno ya echo de desarrolle en otra direccion