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Well, you have a good story, keep it up. I don't give it 5 stars, mainly because I think this personality doesn't suit Naruto, plus the beginning reminds me a lot of other fics where Naruto is adopted.
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Well, you have a good story, keep it up. I don't give it 5 stars, mainly because I think this personality doesn't suit Naruto, plus the beginning reminds me a lot of other fics where Naruto is adopted.
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