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Great chapter. Can you in the next world make it three and choose Is;infinite stratos, Hundred and The undefeated bahammut. All these are mecha type worlds and Also include dragon ball,monster musume and black clover if you can. Other than this can you make a chapter for all worlds that are chosen and also one to include templates and skills of MC with some things about them. The issue of this novel would be that there are no pics of characters so sometimes i do not know how a character look from series i have not watched. Other than this good novel would recommend 10 out of 10.
overall it isn't a horrible story. keep in mind that at the time of this comment I am at chapter 12 I think. however the translation is trash making understanding certain things very hard. sometimes impossible without looking it up on Google Translate.
If your reading this like I was to see some Escanor lvl bs and bravado this is not the one for us. Either it was lost during the translation, or the author refuses to use an iota of Escanor other then his powers in which he spams suns and blows them up and punches people impossibly hard. The MC is tipical arrogant I’m the MC, everyone do as I say and our enemies will do exactly what I choose. The MC is around 10years old with little to no training and no chakra moves or Naruto justsus that he uses on the enemy. If this were not a fanfic you would not see any characters beyond pawn b attacks mc. Biju p attacks mc ect… so to sum up the first 50 chaps mc tells his village what to do. Spams suns and punches faceless people with 0 IQ. It’s like one punch man if 100% of the comedy was removed, the mc was 10 and no one had any dialog other then, “That’s an amazing plan! How come I didn’t know that?!” Imagine becoming Arnold Schwarzenegger and not using a single punchline of his at all.
It was very good at the start but instead of ending the story it added other anime with the main character still being overpowered so after the first two arcs it is no longer interesting
Sinceramente dejando de lado lo del MC chino era pasable la historia incluso si le daba poderes rotos pero ahora esta totalmente arruinado directamente le esta dando los poderes de Whis de Dragon ball super y eso es lo que me hace abandonar este fanfic
this fanfic is gold! why are there so many bad review? is it buzzer? well! try 10 chapter first and you will now this fanfic worth your time!
Dont like MCs character settings and as for the system, except for the so called random lottery that gave him power, rest there is not an iota of system here... Andits dumb how multiple waves of spies just tried the same way again and again and died in waves... Pretty nonsensical point, they are ninjas, if nothing else, they should have got the mission to try and kill him since capturing isnt working... Anyway dont like this novel
don't listen to the haters's author-sama I enjoy your work very much if they don't like it they can leave but do take criticism with a pinch salt cause he can teach you to better your writing
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O autor é uma merda, ele acabou com os mundo, falando besteira que o nível de poder é fraco, isso é aquilo, que merda cara. Em bleach fala merda de que, vou chamar espada não sei o nome que se chama no anime, fala besteira de quem tem espada tem que dividir a alma, sendo que já foi mostrando que é a manifestação do próprio poder. Resumo: Mc um lixo, para ele tudo é só um pesonagem, sem emoção, esse Mc é do tipo que você, sim você leitor, que se pudesse entrar no mundo desse romance, você gostaria de torturar esse Mc só pra ver o desespero dele kkkkkk fazê-lo perder tud, fê-lo de escravo, colocar uma coleira nele e sair na vila dele com ele sendo arrastado kkkkk ia ser maravilhoso kkkkk Ufa desabafei tudo que tinha de falar desse lixo de merda.
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Me encanta este fanfic ya lo leí hasta acá como 3 veces jaja alguien conoce algún fanfic como este pero de otros animes? Realmente no quería escribir mas pero es molesto tener que cumplir con un mínimo de palabras XD
it may not be a Diamond novel, it is at least a silver, closer to Gold. almost didn't read this novel because of the unfair low rating. *pointing at you, people who gives this 1 stars* the translation is good, but kinda hate the way the author write the novel, so many redundant narrations. even then, it's a fun read. the mc is not a loner or edgy, which is a plus. mc didn't hesitate to spread his idea while letting the higher up of his village to do the planning, which is another plus. after getting magic, mc likes to troll his enemies. Don't read this novel expecting the author to 100% follow the power from the original material. So, think of it like AU. tbf, every FF should be AU anyway.
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Mc thinks he is omnipotent. There is nothing that can kill or defeat him. I just finished naruto arc or volume 1. he is too powerful but sealing jutsu can make him trash. but he did nothing against it.
Buena traducción, gran historia de comedia y reinos, buena elección de waifus, a cavar de ha dicho, vamosss!!. Recomendada para los gustos de fuerza rápida, mc op desde el principio, diseños de cavar gente de otros pueblos, poderes op de otros animes, al momento de cruzar a otro mundo se llevó su reino y waifus con él, lo que es bueno, bastante relleno pero es aceptable para pasar el rato hasta que lleguen las tramas principales.
Even better than I expected, idk why it's getting so much hate. The concept is unique and fun, i was honestly bored reading other cliche generic ff where mc is born in hidden leaf village.
everyone who gave this translation poor review is ignorant, really. you people should read Canon story instead, why in the hole you read this translation FF.
Plot amor... IQ: -50....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good fanfic. Even after 100 chapter most people don't find this Mc boring because he is overpower. Regular daily updates and high quality writing. Good story when you are bored
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another mtl garbage. I do not recommend to anyone. Dialogues are boring and pointless. where the administration of webnovel looks once it allows such works to readers.
Phenomenal Job For Writing This Masterpiece!!!! Just A Small Request, Let Asahi Practice Some Chakra & Jutsu Or Some Kekkai Genkai, Since You Are Not Starting A Harem Then Show Us Some New Jutsu Instead!!! Anyways Kudos To Writer For This Masterpiece!!!!! 🥳🤩🥰😋
There are lot of things that drag the novel down 1. Mc seems like mastermind or at the least author tries to portray him as such. But the thing is that it's not realistic in the slightest and feels childish how easily he gets everything done. 2. His power is the one that makes the most impact for my 1star review. TRUE escanors power has a huge drawback. Making him a glass cannon like superman. And once you know his kryptonite even a normal human could kill him. Bur this is Naruto universe you know that you are weak in night. Then shouldn't you atheist learn something to save yourself. The dude enters war where he fights entire village in day and the village protects him during night. This is perhaps the stupidest use of espanol powers in Naruto. 3. It would be fine if escanor was a planet buster or invincible in Naruto universe. Then it would have made sense for him having such a huge weakness but he is not. There are many people and ways to seal or even kill him. And that is what makes his weakness frustrating. Especially when the Mc does nothing about his night weakness.
Honestly the story is way out, I didn't mind reading the story with my brain turned off at the start but then the third shinbi war happened. Firstly the war only lasted a few months and then at the end of the war a year turned over from 46 to 47 and suddenly Neji and his generation is being born and the akatsuki has already being established even though Nagato and the other members of the akatsuki are still supposed to be children by this point in time. I'll just chalk it up to it being a CN that it turned out like this.
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Great chapter. Can you in the next world make it three and choose Is;infinite stratos, Hundred and The undefeated bahammut. All these are mecha type worlds and Also include dragon ball,monster musume and black clover if you can. Other than this can you make a chapter for all worlds that are chosen and also one to include templates and skills of MC with some things about them. The issue of this novel would be that there are no pics of characters so sometimes i do not know how a character look from series i have not watched. Other than this good novel would recommend 10 out of 10.
overall it isn't a horrible story. keep in mind that at the time of this comment I am at chapter 12 I think. however the translation is trash making understanding certain things very hard. sometimes impossible without looking it up on Google Translate.
If your reading this like I was to see some Escanor lvl bs and bravado this is not the one for us. Either it was lost during the translation, or the author refuses to use an iota of Escanor other then his powers in which he spams suns and blows them up and punches people impossibly hard. The MC is tipical arrogant I’m the MC, everyone do as I say and our enemies will do exactly what I choose. The MC is around 10years old with little to no training and no chakra moves or Naruto justsus that he uses on the enemy. If this were not a fanfic you would not see any characters beyond pawn b attacks mc. Biju p attacks mc ect… so to sum up the first 50 chaps mc tells his village what to do. Spams suns and punches faceless people with 0 IQ. It’s like one punch man if 100% of the comedy was removed, the mc was 10 and no one had any dialog other then, “That’s an amazing plan! How come I didn’t know that?!” Imagine becoming Arnold Schwarzenegger and not using a single punchline of his at all.
It was very good at the start but instead of ending the story it added other anime with the main character still being overpowered so after the first two arcs it is no longer interesting
Sinceramente dejando de lado lo del MC chino era pasable la historia incluso si le daba poderes rotos pero ahora esta totalmente arruinado directamente le esta dando los poderes de Whis de Dragon ball super y eso es lo que me hace abandonar este fanfic
this fanfic is gold! why are there so many bad review? is it buzzer? well! try 10 chapter first and you will now this fanfic worth your time!
Dont like MCs character settings and as for the system, except for the so called random lottery that gave him power, rest there is not an iota of system here... Andits dumb how multiple waves of spies just tried the same way again and again and died in waves... Pretty nonsensical point, they are ninjas, if nothing else, they should have got the mission to try and kill him since capturing isnt working... Anyway dont like this novel
don't listen to the haters's author-sama I enjoy your work very much if they don't like it they can leave but do take criticism with a pinch salt cause he can teach you to better your writing
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O autor é uma merda, ele acabou com os mundo, falando besteira que o nível de poder é fraco, isso é aquilo, que merda cara. Em bleach fala merda de que, vou chamar espada não sei o nome que se chama no anime, fala besteira de quem tem espada tem que dividir a alma, sendo que já foi mostrando que é a manifestação do próprio poder. Resumo: Mc um lixo, para ele tudo é só um pesonagem, sem emoção, esse Mc é do tipo que você, sim você leitor, que se pudesse entrar no mundo desse romance, você gostaria de torturar esse Mc só pra ver o desespero dele kkkkkk fazê-lo perder tud, fê-lo de escravo, colocar uma coleira nele e sair na vila dele com ele sendo arrastado kkkkk ia ser maravilhoso kkkkk Ufa desabafei tudo que tinha de falar desse lixo de merda.
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Me encanta este fanfic ya lo leí hasta acá como 3 veces jaja alguien conoce algún fanfic como este pero de otros animes? Realmente no quería escribir mas pero es molesto tener que cumplir con un mínimo de palabras XD
it may not be a Diamond novel, it is at least a silver, closer to Gold. almost didn't read this novel because of the unfair low rating. *pointing at you, people who gives this 1 stars* the translation is good, but kinda hate the way the author write the novel, so many redundant narrations. even then, it's a fun read. the mc is not a loner or edgy, which is a plus. mc didn't hesitate to spread his idea while letting the higher up of his village to do the planning, which is another plus. after getting magic, mc likes to troll his enemies. Don't read this novel expecting the author to 100% follow the power from the original material. So, think of it like AU. tbf, every FF should be AU anyway.
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Mc thinks he is omnipotent. There is nothing that can kill or defeat him. I just finished naruto arc or volume 1. he is too powerful but sealing jutsu can make him trash. but he did nothing against it.
Buena traducción, gran historia de comedia y reinos, buena elección de waifus, a cavar de ha dicho, vamosss!!. Recomendada para los gustos de fuerza rápida, mc op desde el principio, diseños de cavar gente de otros pueblos, poderes op de otros animes, al momento de cruzar a otro mundo se llevó su reino y waifus con él, lo que es bueno, bastante relleno pero es aceptable para pasar el rato hasta que lleguen las tramas principales.
Even better than I expected, idk why it's getting so much hate. The concept is unique and fun, i was honestly bored reading other cliche generic ff where mc is born in hidden leaf village.
everyone who gave this translation poor review is ignorant, really. you people should read Canon story instead, why in the hole you read this translation FF.
Plot amor... IQ: -50....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good fanfic. Even after 100 chapter most people don't find this Mc boring because he is overpower. Regular daily updates and high quality writing. Good story when you are bored
Membuka SPOILER another mtl garbage. I do not recommend to anyone. Dialogues are boring and pointless. where the administration of webnovel looks once it allows such works to readers.
Phenomenal Job For Writing This Masterpiece!!!! Just A Small Request, Let Asahi Practice Some Chakra & Jutsu Or Some Kekkai Genkai, Since You Are Not Starting A Harem Then Show Us Some New Jutsu Instead!!! Anyways Kudos To Writer For This Masterpiece!!!!! 🥳🤩🥰😋
There are lot of things that drag the novel down 1. Mc seems like mastermind or at the least author tries to portray him as such. But the thing is that it's not realistic in the slightest and feels childish how easily he gets everything done. 2. His power is the one that makes the most impact for my 1star review. TRUE escanors power has a huge drawback. Making him a glass cannon like superman. And once you know his kryptonite even a normal human could kill him. Bur this is Naruto universe you know that you are weak in night. Then shouldn't you atheist learn something to save yourself. The dude enters war where he fights entire village in day and the village protects him during night. This is perhaps the stupidest use of espanol powers in Naruto. 3. It would be fine if escanor was a planet buster or invincible in Naruto universe. Then it would have made sense for him having such a huge weakness but he is not. There are many people and ways to seal or even kill him. And that is what makes his weakness frustrating. Especially when the Mc does nothing about his night weakness.
Honestly the story is way out, I didn't mind reading the story with my brain turned off at the start but then the third shinbi war happened. Firstly the war only lasted a few months and then at the end of the war a year turned over from 46 to 47 and suddenly Neji and his generation is being born and the akatsuki has already being established even though Nagato and the other members of the akatsuki are still supposed to be children by this point in time. I'll just chalk it up to it being a CN that it turned out like this.
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