ASOIAF: Dimensional Chat Group

LV 4

toshisero

it was good when he was in planetos but it went s#it afterwards

LV 14

Surge911

Liking where this story is going so far, and I like that whilst you may have changed his upbringing he is still identifiable Jon snow but also a whole new character in itself. I hope his emotions aren’t stunted with him being inserted and you keep with the flow of how he is as a character.

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Malthaael

plot is a mess ...... . .........................

LV 3

MyEx

It's good, but to slow man, and you added the members from fiction that I don't know at all, and you decided to bring the targaryen to the story making it to complicated, I'll wait for DCG stuff but in the end it's nothing, chp 24

LV 4

The_WheelOfFortune

The fix is very brain dead in terms of plot and the writing quality is decent

LV 4

Solomonsquill

I am enjoying a lot this story, the characters are realistic, the story is really interesting, and I am enjoying a lot the plot in the GOT. Overall a great read so far, still in chapter 24. Now I will tell you a couple of things that irked me a little and that could make this story even better if done right. First of all, the first chapters are really hard and I dislike that you just casually say the lore of the Mc. I would have loved to have seen pieces of his life little by little and to build his character through a few chapters at the very beginning or even make a prologue of his life. Lastly, the chapter that I am reading currently is a full block of text instead of being divided by paragraphs and it makes the really interesting content lose value due to how hard it is to the eyes. Anyways take this as constructive criticism, I am really enjoying your story and I wish you keep uploading and maintaining the quality. Many thanks author for all your work, hope you have a nice day.

LV 4

dark_knight01

love the main character and story development . The only flaw is the update speed otherwise it's a good read

LV 4

Daoist4g4Z2O

I like 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 ###################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################

LV 13

Deaths_crow

the story till chapter 31 so far is good, the pace of the story isn't to fast nor to slow. the grammar could use some work, but it isn't bad. the character development for side characters, could use a bit more development. all and all, it's a good story. I hope the author keeps releasing new chapters and doesn't drop this story.

LV 5

_oinkchan

I like this a lot. .........

LV 4

Daoist3FFpqx

ZZZ……………………………………………………………………………………………..

LV 4

Solomonsquill

I am loving this story probably the best fic in the whole app. The story is well-written the plot is interesting and he characters act how they should. My only complain is not having more chapters. Keep up the amazing work author and please don't drop it 🙏!

LV 3

Daeranyx_Drakonar

I like the way story has been going. and it was of my favorite character so its obivous that it should entertain me but i want to just tell you i relly like your story development. ( english second language )

LV 3

Trouxa_157

I like, I love GOT FanFictions. Constant updates would be great, like three chapters a week, warning about pauses in updates, that's it.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😳👍

LV 4

Big_Chuckles28

Like it. Love it. Want it. I'm going to sit here and wait for more....

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RogueSoul98

That was epic, cant wait for the next chapter[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

RogueSoul98

Is this story still on going? Or has It been dropped?, I really like the direction this one is talking, hopefully It will Be continued[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 3

jcp1207

Está historia parece tener potencial, hasta ahora el desarrollo de la historia me ha gustado, sigue con el buen trabajo, estaré apoyando en futuros capitulos