Villain Is on Vacation

LV 4

ywhy4_

I liked everything about this novel except for the short chapters

LV 3

Madwriter_2377

As my novel is getting so much attention. I think it's time for another mandatory author review. As the story is approaching 100 chapters let me tell you some things. -Mc at first will be little emotional after thinking about some things, however he won't be in later plot. -There will be some slice of life chapters between novel. -System might sound sentinel. However it's different. It won't interfere in the story much. -Romance won't be introduced in first volume however some hints will be dropped. -There will be much of world building information so you can skip it if you won't and read it after some time when you feel it. I have made separate chapters for them. -If you forgot some stuff, Read the auxiliary chapters. You will find it. -Still you feel to suggest something, feel free to do so.

LV 1

Dark_Horse_5286

This was very nice novel , I quite like it, and MC is also smart not dense or dumb.

LV 4

Winter_Whisperer

The story was very enjoyable. I just binge-read the entire thing. But as far as a review goes, it doesn't leave a strong impression on me. It's kinda meh. From the MC's parents to his fiance and sister, the characters feel a bit shallow and very one-dimensional. The story tries to explain this but fails to convince you. All in all a good read. Good luck to the author.👍

LV 4

Shadowlancer101

Author-nim I am dying without the sweet nectar that is this work!! I hope you come back soon and that Emma and kaya have a complete regret arc and have some not-so-happy endings.

LV 12

K7RM4

author mc needs more screen time bro why are other characters getting more chapters than him man (it seems that way to me) and these excesively unnecessary discriptions and redundant dialogues in the couple chapters before and including chp 113 is making a tad bit boring and a chore to read THIS IS MY OPINION AND I ACTUALLY LIKE THE BOOK

LV 4

Kaizou_Koi

Man I really like this novel.I hope the author keeps this novel updated regularly.

LV 12

Grand_Go

It is so good that I can't wait, I need more chapters

LV 3

diabolic_diablo

a wonderful story ...the mc is not a simp... interactions are good...the only problem is that increase rin pov more cause it started to look like his chapter just acted as a summary or report of sorts about what he was doing .. anyways a good novel .. update soon .

LV 14

Oppenheimer

Amazing novel in my opinion. Right now I do not have the time to write a long review so that's it.

LV 14

Lumin_Arcadia

I’m really enjoying the story so far I’ve been using the Webnovel app to listen to novels but I have noticed that the quality of writing more specifically some of the sentences have grammar issues I haven’t notice this till now so I’m not sure if it’s just from chapter 55 to chapter 57(which is where I’m currently at) just a suggestion to go back and maybe use grammerly or something to improve the wording

LV 11

ReaderOfSecrets

tbh it had a slow start but got much better couple chapters in and i'm loving the MC please continue author anyways great work 10/10 a great find indeed

LV 4

MonkeReviewer

I think this is good but some problems I have are with the writing like grammar structure or just the use of words that would make sense but are amateurish. And, the other problem I have are the constant note from the author during the story I mean I don’t hate it but it ruins the immersion that I’m feeling. Overall: I would recommend, it will capture you with it’s drama and story but the writing as well as the constant note’s can be a little off putting. Improvements for Author: 1. Author please next time try not to add too much notes it ruins the connection and immersion people feel with the story 2. Maybe get an editor because while it is readable it be wayy better if you had someone to edit it.

LV 3

The_Novel_Man

The plot is new and although there are few of such type, but none comes close to this one, you won't regret reading it.

LV 3

Lucifer_Mors

Hey Author! I started reading your novel though I haven't finished it. It's great! I would love to have a discussion with you[img=recommend]

man i think the author is dead. It has been f**king 1 year since last upload. i have lost all hope of getting new chapters. man and i thought i was a lazy slack

LV 14

Chaos_lord_

Hafta admit it, i like it but the author doesn't deserve a good rating

i love the story but I have to ask, Is this dropped?